《SHIVI KI DASTAN》CHAPTER 11
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Shiva goes even more close to her and he gives her a forehead kiss...Raavi was very happy that he didn't want anything else as she was not ready for anything
Raavi too gives him a forehead kiss and hugs Shiva and Sleep peacefully in his arms
In morning
Raavi :Shiva Uth jao....Shiva...
Shiva doesn't wake up she goes near him and she whispers in his ear
Raavi :Patidev,I love youu
Shiva pulls her close and kiss her on cheeks
Shiva :Good Morning,Biwi ji
Raavi : Chal chalte hai Haveli bhi jana hai
Shiva smiles and gets freshen up
All leave for Haveli...In bus
Krish :Chalo ek game khelte hai
Everyone :Kya
Krish :Yaha pe 3 couple hai,Jo bhi couple apne partner ke liye ganna gaye ga woh jeet jayega...Pehle Gombi
Gombi sings Humko humid se chura lo and Dev sings Humhe tumhse pyaar itna
Now its time for Shiva
Krish : Ohh bhai,jaldi ganna ga warna yeh mana jayega ki tu Raavi Bhabhi se pyaar nahi karta
Shiva: Ruk do minute
Krish :Countdown starts now 3....2....
Shiva: Falak tak chal saath mere
Raavi blushes and after sometime they reach Haveli .Everyone goes to their room and Raavi and Shiva sleeps without changing in evening Shiva goes to buy some stuff .There he sees her bff and she was Simran
Shiva :Ae tamatar!!
Simran :Ae Bhootnath!!
Shiva and Simran hugs each other...Simran loved Shiva but Shiva refused her and they came back to their friendship
Shiva :Tu yaha kaise.....
Simran :Tumhare liye
Shiva: Kya.
Simran :Wo main idhar apne kaam se aayi hu aur hotel hi Khali nahi haa
Shiva : Hai Haveli me aajao
Simran :Par...
Shiva :Par var kuch nahi tu chal rahi haa bas
Shiva and Simran goes home
Shiva :Sabhi log idhar aajao
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Everyone comes
Maa :Shiva yeh kon hai
Shiva :Maa yeh tamatar Mera matlab yeh Simran hai mere School ki dost aur ise koi hotel nahi mil raha tha to Mai ise idhar le aaya
Maa :Acha kia Shiva Tu ise idhar le aaya
She was so close standing near Shiva...Raavi was getting jealous
Shiva :Simran yeh Meri maa hai and he introduced everyone except Raavi
Everyone went to rooms now only Shiva Raavi and Simran are there
Simran :Yeh kon hai Shiva
Shiva goes close to Raavi
Entwined their hands and said
Shiva :Yeh hai Meri lifeline,My one and only Beautiful Wife
Raavi blushes
Simran :Hello
Raavi : Hello(fake smile)
Simran :Aap mujhe apna kamra bata sakti hoo
Raavi : Yes
They leave Raavi shows her the room next to Gauras room
Raavi message Shiva
Raavi: Shiva jaldi kamre mai aai
Shiva : Ruko Mai aata huu
Shiva reaches the room
Raavi :Shiva Tum use tamatar bula rahe the aur vo Tumhe Bhootnath...Tum sirf aur sirf mera Bhootnath hoo....Samjhe
Shiva : Raavi Tum kuch jalne ki boo aarahi haa
Raavi : Nahi
Shiva : Tumhe khud ki smell nahi aarahi hai
Raavi : Shiva stop laughing
Shiva stops laughing at her stare...Shiva pulls her on his lap
Shiva :Raavi Tum sirf Meri ho aur mai sirf tumhara...Hamhare bich kabhi koi nahi aa sakta
Raavi : I love you Shiva
Shiva :I love you too Raavi
Simran was standing and listening all this she thought how could he reject her and accept this stupid Raavi .Simran who couldn't move on and wanted to enter Shiva's life and throw this Raavi so she decided to make a plan
Raavi : Tum mujhe kabhi nahi chodoge na
Shiva :Nahi Raavi, Maine bola na ki yeh Bhootnath sirf tera hai aur tera hi rahe ga
Raavi kisses him on his cheeks
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Raavi : Chal ab mujhe kitchen me kaam ha mai jati huu
Shiva :Nahi Raavi, muje bhook lagi hai
Raavi : Kya khana hai??
Shiva stares her at her lips
Raavi understood what he wants
Shiva moves closer to her and Raavi keeps her finger on his lips and
Raavi : Itni asani se nahi mil sakta Mr.Pandya
Shiva : Toh Kya karu
Raavi : Suprise me!!!
Shiva :Aisa suprise dunga ki tum kabhi bul nahi paogi
Raavi : Wo toh waqt hi bataega
Shiva :Mai hi jeetunga waise toh
Raavi smiles and leaves in kitchen.At night
Everyone are at Dining table ( Waiters are serving food)...Only Raavi and Simran didn't come everyone was waiting for them
Maa :Shiva yeh Raavi Aur Simran kaha gayi
Shiva : Raavi Toh kitchen Kuch bana rahi ha aur Simran aati hi hogi
In mean time Simran comes she didn't see Raavi there so she goes near Shiva's chair and sit but as she sat Raavi came in
Shiva :Simran yeh seat toh Raavi ki hai Tum udhar Krish ke pas beth jau na
Simran : Koi nahi Mai chali jati hu
Shiva smiles whereas Raavi is happy
And Simran fumes in anger.Raavi comes with Dal ka halwa...Shiva's favorite
Raavi serves this to maa and Shiva and then everyone..Everybody says her the best compliment but she waits for one person's compliment
Shiva : Kyaa halwa bana hai Raavi bilkul waisa jaisa mujhe pasand hai....Dhara bhabhi se bhi acha bana hai yehh
Raavi smiles
They have their dinner.....Maa sends Gaura to buy ice cream
Maa :Kal Dhara aur Gautham ki shadi ko 10 saal khat hojayega....Too kal suprise party hogi...Dev Rishtha saara samana mangwa dena aur Raavi Aur Shiva tum log sab sajavat karenge
Everyone : Jii maa
Everyone have their ice cream khate hai aur Simran apni ice cream apne ice cream gira deti haa toh Shiva use apni ice cream dene jahi raha hota hai tabhi
Raavi : Simran yeh lo meri ice cream Khali Wese bhi mujhe nahi khani ha
Shiva: Haa yeh lelo Mai aur Raavi share karlenge
Simran couldn't do anything but she taught
Simran( in mind) : Kitna Romance karna hai karlo Kal Raavi ise Ghar mai apna akhri din hoga
She takes the ice cream
Everyone have and left to their room
Shiva :Raavi ,Can we take next step in our relationship
Raavi : I'm sorry Shiva but I'm not ready for this....Hope you understand Please
Shiva :It's okay Raavi, When you want we will do it
Raavi :Thank you....I love you ShivA
Shiva :I loved you too Raavi
They sleep hugging each other
In morning According to their plan they done all the decorations and they brought gifts
Nobody wished Gaura
In evening They aks Gaura to get ready and come downstairs as they're going to temple
When they come down they are suprised by the decorations and everyone shouted
Happy Anniversary Gaura
Simran went and gave them gift and then Dishitha and maa ,Krish and now it's time for Gaura
Shiva says Raavi he forgot to buy the gift
And Raavi said she knew how bulakkad he was and she had brought the gift
Raavi : Yeh lo Dhara di
Shiva : Happy Anniversary Gaura
Gaura : Thank you
Simran couldn't control his closeness with Raavi .Simran executed her plan
Upcoming : Raavi doesn't talk to Shiva
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