《SHIVI KI DASTAN》CHAPTER 6
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Raavi was very happy to go on dinner as she liked shiva but she was unsure about his thoughts.She gets ready and wait for Shiva to come from dukkan
RAAVI'S DRESS
The door bell rings
Raavi opens the door
Raavi: Shiva
Shiva was just admiring Raavi and just admiring her as she was looking so beautiful
Raavi: Shivaaa
Shiva comes in senses
Shiva: Raavi me ready hoke aata hu
Raavi: Theka
SHIVA'S DRESS
Raavi saw Shiva coming as she stares him as he wore something different for first time
Shiva: Chalo Raavi,hum chalte hai
Raavi comes out of lala land
Raavi: Hum chale
Shiva opens the door amd asks raavi to have a seat
Raavi: Thank you....
Shiva smilesShiva goes to driving seat and they move towards restaurant
Since it is a journey of 30 minutes
Raavi gets bored and she plays thr radio on
The song plays and Raavi sees shiva and smiles
Shiva who don't like music.Turns off the radio
Raavi: Radio kiu band kia Shiva
Shiva: Kiu ki mujhe nahi pasand ganne
Raavi( in mind): Kis Bhootnath ko pasand kia hai mene inhe toh ganna bhi nahi pasand
Raavi gets irritated and on the radio again
Shiva offs the radio and this goes on at last
Raavi:Shiva aapko baat karna nahi pasand, ganna nahi pasand me toh bore horahi huu
Shiva: Ae gadhedi!!Chup nahi Beth sakti thodi der
Raavi gets angry and sits quiet..They reach the restaurant
Raavi: Shiva kitni sundar jaga hai .
Shiva: Hmm....
Raavi: Shivaa...
Shiva: Hmm...
Raavi: Shiva chalo na Beth jate hai table par
Shiva moves the chair and asks Raavi to have a seat
Shiva takes his seat .Raavi and Shiva talk about their childhood .And they are about to leave after their first dinner date
Raavi:Mujhe kuch kehna haa Shiva
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Shiva: Ghar jake bath kare mai thak gaya huu
Raavi: Theka...Shiva car ki chabi mujhe do me chalti hu
Shiva: Tum...Mujhe itni jaldi marna nahi haa
Raavi: Kya??
Shiva gives her keys and they reach home
Raavi: Ab toh sun lo meri baat
Shiva: Vese tumhari driving is great
Raavi: Par meri baat toh suno Na
Raavi sees a chipkali and gets afraid and jumps on Shiva's lap
Raavi: Shivaa....Chipkali
Shiva: Chipkali??
Raavi: Wo dekhna uthar hi toh hai.Bhag dona use please
Shiva: Bhagau kaise tu mera upar se uthe gi tabhi hatha paunga
Raavi sees this and gets awkward...and gets up.Shiva gets rid of that chipkali
Shiva: Ek chipkali toh bhaga thi par ek aur chipkali use kaise bhagau
Raavi: Kaha hai
Shiva: Itni badi chipkali hai pure 50 kg ki haa
Raavi understands he is saying about her
Raavi: Vo chipkali toh bhag me se rahi
Both laughs and they sleep
In morning
Shiva is still sleeping
Raavi was in kitchen in her night dress
She completes her work and wakes Shiva and gives her tea and goes to freshen up
Raavi gets ready as everyone will come by 8pm
Shiva: Mai dukkan jaraha hu
Raavi: Theka
Shiva leaves for shop while going he sees Rahul wandering near his home and goes home
Shiva: Raavi,tum darwaz band hi rakhna samji
Raavi: Par kyu??
Shiva: Tum ghar pe akeli hoo isiliye
Raavi: Theka.
Shiva leaves and he calls raavi every hour to check she is fine
At 11 someone knocks the door
Raavi opens it and sees there is a salesman
(He is none other than Rahul)
Rahul: Mam bahut ache earnings hai
Raavi: mujhe nahi chaiye bhai
Rahul: Saste bhi haa aur ek qualitily ka hai
Raavi nods that she doesn't want it but he forces her
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Rahul: Apko nahi chaiye theka,mujhe ek glass pani mile gaa
As Raavi turns Rahul uses chloroform and maks her lose her senses.Rahul throws Raavi to bed and goes to search a rope to tie raavi
Shiva calls Raavi to check she is fine
Raavi couldn't pick the call
Shiva calls her multiple times and he thinks of coming home
Rahul: Bahut hogai teri ab tu dekh me tera saath kia kia karta hu
Rahul ties her and sprinkle some water on her face
Raavi: Chodo mujhe....janne do please
Rahul: Chodne ke liye thodi pakada tujhe
Raavi screams in fear
Rahul goes close to her and is about to kiss her she hits him hard with her head
Rahul gets angry and gives Raavi a slap
Raavi: Tu ruk abhi aata hi hoga Shiva
Rahul: Iske aane se pehle toh
Rahul grabs her face and was about to kiss her.Raavi tries to escape.But he leaves her and removes her dupatta
Raavi starts screaming for help
Suddenly there is a door bell
Shiva: Raavi...Raavi...
He doesn't get any response so he bangs inside through window and search Raavi
Rahul locks the door and opens window to let shiva see.Shiva reaches his room and sees Raavi crying and screaming for help
Shiva pushes himself hard towards door and
Shiva beats Rahul and Gives him a tight slap and ties him to a pillar.Shiva frees Raavi's hand and gives her a shawl
Shiva:Tu thek haina Raavi
Raavi: Mai thek hu par ek minute mai aai. Tum aao mere sath
Shiva: Par kaha
Raavi grabs Shiva's hand and take him where he tied RahulRaavi gives Rahul two tight slaps
Rahul: Tune mujhe maara theri tho
Raavi: Kya hai haa mene maara tujhe
Rahul: Tu is jungli aur gawar pati ke liye mujh jaisa hansome gentle man ko kho rahi haa
Raavi: Bas yeh hai jungli aur gawar tho kya hua tera jaise badtameez,sadakchap nahi haa..Aur tujh jaise gentlemen hota hai toh mai apne jungli gawar pati ke sath hi thek hu aur khabardar agli baar yaha mujhe dikhe aur agar mera Shiva kabi bhi tune jungle kaha toh me woh haal karu gi tera tu apna ghar nahi jaa payege
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