《Shivi & Raavish》Memories (part 1)
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Hellllooo readers,
I'm back with another story...
Pandya niwas:
(A little boy was sleeping in his dad's arm)
Raavish: Goood morning paaapa...
(Raavish is shiva-raavi's 4 year old son)
Shiva: good morning mere champ...
(Looks at the other side)
Teri mummy aur meri princess kidhr gyi?
Raavish: offo papa aap bhul gye ..? Aaj monday hai aur haar baar ki tarah mumma shivi ko mandir le gyi hei....
Shiva: oh okayy...chalo ready hojaate hei princess bhi aati hogi...
Shivi: mei idhal hu pppa.
(She runs n hugs him)
Shiva: (kisses) aagyi meri princess?
Shivi: haa ...meine mandill mei bohot pray kiyaa..
(Shivi is shiva-raavi's 3year daughter)
Shiva: achaa...
Raavish: offoo, mandil nhi mandir chotii🤦🏻♀️
Shivi: papa bhai mujhe chotii kyu bolte hei Mujhe acha nhi lagta..mere pass tho kittaa pyaara naam hei shibiiii...
Raavish: mei tho bolunga....aur gadhedi tera naam shivi hai shibii nhi....
Shiva: Raavish aaj ke baad aap shivi ko choti nhi bologe okay?
Raavish: kya papa aap humesa choti ko hi support karte ho...mei jaa rha hu apni mumma k pass...
Raavi: areyy kya hogya mere champ ko..muh kyu latkaya hei?
Raavish:(hugs her) mummma aapko pata hei papa mujhe kabhi support nhi karte bss choti se pyaar karte hei papa..
Raavi: kyu...Bhoothnath kya kiya tunne..??
Shiva: ayee Chipkali tera beta bhi tere jesa hi hei ek number ka nautanki...humesa apne aakho ka nal khol leta hei...meri shivi kitni pyaari hei kabhi roti nhi.... Heinaaa shivii..(teasing Raavish)
Shivi: yess pppa...
Raavish: dekha mumma aapne...
Raavi: (stares shiva) shivaa kyu sata rha hei mere bete ko...
(Shiva chuckles)
Raavi: Aap shivi se bade honaa tho aap ko shivi se pehle bohot pyaar milaaa hei abhi shivi ki turn heina....aur wese bhi papa sabse jadha pyaar kisse karte hei pata hei?
Raavish: aapse..
Raavi: nhi...papa sabse jadha pyaar Raavish se karte hei aur firh shivi se firhhh pure family se...
Raavish: sachiii (excited)
Raavi: haaa....aur wese bhi papa aapke team mei nhi hei tho kya hua mei hu Naa..(kisses him)
Raavish: haaa parh i love papa (with a cute pout)
Shiva: i love my champ moree..
Raavi: Shivaaaaa😭
Shiva: tujhe kya hogya abh?
Raavi: mere dono bacche Terese jadha pyaar karte hei...🙁
Shiva: haa tho mei hu hi itnaa khas.....
Raavi: mujhe tujhse baat nhi karni🙁
Shiva: sharam kar sharam...do baccho ki maa ban gyi parh tere nakhre kamh nhi hue... Chipkali kahi ki..
(Shivi and Raavish giggle)
Raavi: baccho k saamne tho Chipkali math bula 🙁
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(Raavish and shivi were busy playing with each other)
Shiva pulls raavi in his lap...
Shiva: bulaunga meri chipkali meri marzi..
Wese tu subhe subhe saare mei bohot sundar lag rhi hei..
Raavi: acha...thode der pehle baccho se fursat nhi thi tujhe abh bada aaya tarif karne wala....
Shiva: areyy gussa kyu ho rhi hei woh tho humare hi bacche hei...
(Kisses her on her neck)
Raavi: shiva bacche hei aas-pass thoda socha karr...
Shiva: acha ...abhi batata hu...
(Leans to kiss her)
But,
Shivi: ppa aap bss mumma ko pyaar karte ho🙁
Shiva: kyu betaa mei tho aapse bohot jadha pyaar karta hu...sabse jadha..
Raavish: parh papa mumma ne kaha aap mujhse sabse jadha pyaar karte ho...
Shiva:(looks at raavi) kidhr fasa diya mujhe🙄
Raavi: aur kar mere bacche mere bacche...
Shiva: Acha sorry (holds his hears) Raavish aur shivi dono se papa bohot jadha pyaar karte hei...
Shivi/Raavish : chipkali se bhi jadha...
Shiva: nhi..
(Raavi pinches him)
Shiva: ouchh! Mera mtlb tha Chipkali se bohottt jadhaa
(Kids hug him in excitement and Raavi look at them with a smile)
Shivi: papa mujhe kuch chhaiye(cute pout)
Shiva: acha kya chhaiye meri princess ko?
Shivi: Chipkali-bhoothnath love story(pout)
Shiva: nhii...
Shivi: please please...
Raavish: mujhe bhi sunna hei papa..
Shivi: please ppa (pout)
Shiva: yeh na 90% mere pe gyi hei aur 10% tere pe...humesa yeh cute sa pout bana ke mujhe manaleti hei...
Raavi: smiles..
Shivi/Raavish: let's start...
Shiva: Aapki mumma Somnath ki sabse beautiful, cute aur bubbly ladki thi I mean aapne aapse kehti thi...
Raavi: hawww...mei thi issliye bolti thi...aur babies aapke papa ish pure somnath k sabse handsome aur ho...horror waale Bhoothnath the...
Shiva: (leans near Raavi's ear) acha mujhe tho hot sunai diyaaa...
Raavish : papa continue..
Shiva: haa aapki mumma mere family se bohot pyaar karti thi...
Raavish: sabse jadha dev chachu se heinaa?
Shiva/Raavi (stare each other with wide eyes)
Shivi: ppa bolo na..
Shiva: haa thodi bhudhu thi aapki mumma...kisi ko bhi py.....
Raavi: k..kya shiva baccho ko story continue karke sunna na..yeh sab detail mei kyu bata rha hei..😅
Shiva: haa.....
Raavi: aur aapke papa mere family se bohott nafrat karte the.....
Shiva/Raavish: kiyuuu?
Shiva: kitna panchayat hei inlokk ko...tere pe hi gye hei..(in Raavi's ear)
Raavi: haww...mere pe nhi terepe gye hei...samjha
Shiva: aa Chipkali tu na...
Shivi: alee aaplok filse shulu hogye..
Raavish: humei kahani sunne nhi milegi mumma aap saanth bhetho na please..
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Shiva: dekha tera champ bhi mere team mei hei..
Shivi: alee baap Lee mummmaaa fingels on your lips(screams)...ppa continue
Shiva:🤣
Raavi:🙄😠
Shiva: 🤫
Shiva: theek hei tho baat yeh thi ki jab aapki mumma ki aur meri shaadi hui tabh hum bohot ladte thee aur firh ladte ladte pyaar hogya aur firh tum dono aagye..
Raavish: aise short mei nhi sunna ache se sunao...
Shiva: okay...parh pura story boring lagega issliye thoda interesting part bataunga okay?
Raavish/shivi: okayy
Flashback:
(HOSPITAL INCIDENT-CURRENT ONGOING TRACK)
Anita : agar meine yeh sab kiya hei tho raavi bhi mere saath thi usse hi puchle...
Shiva runs behind Anita and her hair gets cut and then Raavi slaps him and he loses him temper and takes Raavi along with him...
Shiva pulls Raavi with him outside in the corridor,
Shiva : (angrily) thapppaddd kese mara mujhe tunne Raavi...itna sab karne k baaad? Raavi mujhe tujhse yeh umeed nhi thi... Tu bhi nhi chahti dhara bhabhi pregnant ho? Aur ...
Raavi: bsss shiva! Aur kya? Bss itna hi vishwas hei tujhe mujhpeee...10 mahine hogye humei saath reh kar aur tho aur bachpan se jaanta hei tu mujhe ...itne jaldi vishwas Tut gya? Aur thappad issliye kyuki tu gusse mei kuch jadha hi kargyaa
Shiva: haa Tut gya...tunne..
Raavi: chup ekdam chup abhi mei bolungi aur tu sunega....
Yaad hei meine navratri k raat pe kaha tha ki Anita di gombhi se aaj bhi pyaar karti hei..kisine mujhpe vishwaas nhi kiya...ushke baad Anita di ne mujhe bataya ki unhe hardik Bhai pasand hei issliye meine unki help karni chhai...bss aur tu harh baar ki tarah ish baar bhi vishwaas nhi karega...tujhe pata hei shiva mujhe na abh aisa lagta hei ki tu sachiii kabhi nhi badlega...mei bhi kaha tere saath apni zindagi bitane ka soch rhi thi..tujhe pasand kya pyaar karna lagi thi aur tu...tu tho mujhpe vishwaas bhi nhi karta...zindagi bhar kya 1 mahina aur bhi hum saath nhi reh payenge aise...(tears flowing)
Shiva: Ra ...
Raavi: (shows her hand to stop him)
Shiva: nhi sunh....aisa nhi hei mei tujhpe wiswaas nhi karta parh tu aise acahnk dhara bhabhi se gussa karne lagi firh Anita se najdik hogyi firh woh Rishita bhabhi ki bua k saath woh photo...sab mere dimag mei aur abhi filal dhara bhabhi ke bacche ka sapna Tut gyaa issliye mei apna gussa control nhi kar paaya ...m..me..mei bhi tujhe bohot pyaar karta hu...i love you Raavi...
Raavi: (hugs him tightly) sorrrry parhh tabhi woh thappad ki bohot zarurat thi...aur baat rhi dhara di ki unhone mere upar Anita di ko vishwaas kiya aur tho aur woh plan mei mujhe shamil nhi kiya aur tu mujhe support karne k badle mere se hi jhagde jaa rha hei.... tu hi bata mujhe bura nhi lagta?..🥺
Shiva: sorry maaf karde apne bhoothnath ko aaj k baad humesa tere saath khada rahunga...
Raavi: abh chal bahar..itna hungama karke aaya hei...
(Police enters)
Prafulla: ayee inspector Saab ish jungli shiva ko arrest karlo issne meri beti k Baal kaat diye...
(Shows the video)
Police: (slaps him) bohot herogiri dikha rha hei? Chal police station abhi batata hu...
Flashback pause:
Raavish: anitaaa maasi kitni bad hei....aur papa aap poolice station gye? Bohot maza aaya hoga na gunde, police , theifs sabko mile honge na?
Shiva: areyy woh lok koi filmstar thodi hei joh mujhe mazha aata.....
(Raavi and shivi laugh)
Shiva: aur wese bhi teri mumma yaaniki meri chipkali ne mujhe jaane hi nhi diyaaa....
Shivi: kesee?
Shiva: batata hu...
Flashback continue:
Raavi: ek minute inspector, Aap mere husband ko aise arrest nhi kar sakte...aur yeh video aadha sach hei... Puri baat mei aapko batati hu ki kese Anita di itnii badi planning ki aur dhara di ko dhoka diyaa...
Anita: Raa..Raavi tu yeh kya keh rhi hei tujhe tho pata heina mei nirdosh hu...abh ish shiva k liye tu mujhe...
Raavi: chup ekdam chup naam math lena mera apne muh se...aur shiva mera pati hei.
Raavi: Tho inspector baat yeh hei ki...Anita di ne .....(she tells the whole incident to everyone...)
Raavi: tho abh aapke saamne pura sach hei...MERA shiva nhi Anita di arrest hone k laayak hei...
Dhara: bilkul sahi kaha raavi ne...inspector isne mere saath (.......................) Kiya issliye mei Anita k khilaaf report likha rhi hu.....
(And Anita gets arrested......dhara feels sad that now IVF can't be done.....but raavi promise her that in 2- 3 months they will be doing her ivf again they'll work hard and some how arrange the money and everyone agrees....)
Raavi: aur masi apko mai last baar bol rhi hu mere parivar aur mere Shiva se dur rahiye.....agar apne kuch galat karne k baare mai socha bhi na tho mai bhul jaungi ap meri masi maa ho.....
(Masi nods ok)
(Everyone comes back home and have their food and go to their rooms to sleep and raavi was in kitchen cleaning everything.....Shiva comes in the room to take his charger and gets shocked seeing the decorations....)
Do tell in comments how was it!!
thank you babe for the whole idea❤️
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