《Hate But Love》11
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Everyone in angaan were standing confusing looking at shiva....
Gombhi : shiva kya baat hai tune sabko aise angaan mai q bulaya??
(Shiva looks at raavi)
Raavi : (slowly) Shiva plz mat kar ye sab....sabko bhot taklif hogi....
Maa : aa Shiva bata na kya baat karne hai tujhe??
Krish : maa Shiva ap sab se kuch zaruri baat karna chahta hai par plz ab sabse phele uski puri baat sun Lena fir he react karna....
Raavi : (slowly) Krish plz nhi....
Krish : (slowly) bhabhi kuch nhi hoga....mai aur shiva ap k sath hai.....aur sab ko sach batana bhot zaruri hai....
Dhara : Shiva bol na kya batana hai tujhe??
Dev ; Shiva tu chup q khada hai bol na kya baat hai??
(Shiva takes a deep breath)
Shiva : jiya meri beti hai...mai aur raavi ek dusre se pyar karte hai....
(Everyone look at them with shock and confused face)
Gombhi : Shiva ye tu kya bol rha hai?? Dimag thik tho hai na??
Shiva : gombhi mai sach keh rha hu jiya dev ki nhi meri aur raavi ki beti hai.....mai jiya ka baap hu....
(Raavi was in tears)
Dev : (angrily holds Shiva's collar) teri himmat bhi kaise hui raavi k sath ye sab karni ki....tune us masum ladki ki jindagi barbad kardi.....
(Krish tries to stop)
Krish : dev kya kar rha hai chod....chod....
Dev : (shouting angrily) are in sab ko aur tujhe tho andaza bhi nhi hai kya biti hai raavi pe in do saalo Mai....Roz yaad karti rhe hai wo tujhe....jiya k aane k bad usse jeene ki nayi wajha mili thi par fir bhi wo tujhe kabhi bhul nhi payi.....roz raat ko uth k roti rheti thi aur mai chah k bhi kuch nhi kar pata tha.....maine kabhi nhi socha tha ye sab mere khud k Bhai ne kiya hoga....bata q kiya tune ye sab uske sath....agar usse pyar nhi karta tha tho q use Kiya usse....aur agar usse pyar krta tha tho q Shruti se shadi kar k usse dhoka de diya..?? Bata q kiya ye sab??
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(Shiva pushes dev angrily)
Shiva : kitne baar batana padega sabko maine raavi ko koi dhoka nhi diya hai....pyar karta tha usse.....tho kaise usse khud ki wajha se dukhi kar deta.....kaise?? Itna matlabi nhi tha mera pyar ki uske sath reh kar usse aur taklif deta....
Raavi : (angrily) kaisi takalif?? Tujhe lagta hai mere tere pas hone se mujhe taklif hoti?? Are pyar karti thi tere se.....isliye tho tere sath physical hone se phele ek baar bhi nhi socha tha maine.....par tu bhi baki ladko jaisa nikla tune bhi mujhe use Kiya aur fir kisi aur k pas chala gya.....
Dhara : (angrily) Shiva maine tujhse ye umid kabhi nhi ki thi?? Shiva mai janti hu tu raavi se nafrat krta tha par Tune usse use kaise kar liya??? Tu itna kise gir gya...??
Krish : bhabhi ek baar usse apni baat kehne ka tho mauka do....
Gombhi : konsa mauka Krish?? Mauka usse milta hai jo galti karte hai aur isne tho gunhah kar diya hai....
(Maa wipes her tears)
Maa : Shiva jo kuch bhi tune raavi k sath kiya hai us k liye shayad tujhe bhagwan bhi maaf kar de par mai kabhi nhi karungi.....mujhe nhi pata tha jisse mai Hera samjhti thi wo koyala se bhi battar hoga.....par kahi na kahi mera dil ye sach ko man ne se inkar kar rha hai.....dil keh raha hai mera Shiva aisa kabhi kisi bhi ladki k sath nhi kar sakta.....isliye mai tujhe mauka deti hu apni baat rakhne ka....
Gombhi : par maa itna sab hone k bad bhi tu isse.....
(Shiva goes to maa and holds her hand and tells everything)
*FLASHBACK*
On call...
Shiva : raavi sun mai aaj maa se teri aur meri shadi ki baat karne ja rha hu....
Raavi : (tensed) Shiva mai khush tho bhot hu par kaki maan jayengi na??
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Shiva : raavi tu tension mat le mai maa ko mana lunga....maa mujhse bhot pyar krti hai maa maan jayegi....
Raavi : Shiva mujhe sachi bhot dar lag rha hai...agar kaki ne masimaa ko bata diya tho.....unko tho heartattack he aajayega....
Shiva : raavi dekh tu dar mat sab thik he hoga....mai sab sambhal lunga....
Raavi : Shiva pakka sab thik he hoga na??
Shiva : ha bacha tu tension mat le.....
Raavi : (crying) Shiva mujhe sachi bhot dar lag rha hai....agar kaki ne hamari shadi karane se mana kar diya tho....??
Shiva : raavi tu q itna negative soch rhi hai?? Mai hu na....bharosa hai na mujhpe??
Raavi : Shiva bharosa tho tujhpe khud se bhi zada hai par dar lag rha kaki masi gombhi sabne mana kar diya tho??
Shiva : (jokes) tho tu ek kaam kar dena sabko keh dena tu mere bache ki maa banne wali hai fir tho sab hamari shadi karwa he denge na??
Raavi : Shiva mujhe idar itni tension ho rhi hai aur tujhe mazak sujh rha hai??
Shiva : acha thik hai sab kuch chod .....mujhe bas itna bata ki tu chahti hai ya nhi ki mai maa se baat Karu hamare bare mai??
Raavi ; offcourse chahti hu par....
Shiva : par war kuch nhi....bas mujhpe bharosa rakh....chal ab mai rakhta hu aur Jake maa se baat karta hu....
Raavi : hmm... bye....aur plz baat hone k bad mujhe call kar dena....
Shiva : thik hai par ab tu tension mat lena.... bye....
Raavi : bye....
(Shiva keeps the phone)
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