《Hate But Love》2
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In evening raavi jiya and dev come.... everyone sees them and become very happy.....they all meet...maa takes jiya in her lap....(jiya is dev and raavi's 6 month old daughter) Shiva and raavi look at eachother.....
Maa : (happily) meri gudiya....(kisses her) ab mere bacho ko kahi nhi jaane dungi.....
Dhara : raavi dev tum dono ja k fresh ho jao maine tumhara kamra bhi saaf kar diya hai....
Raavi : bhabhi agar jiya rone lagegi tho plz ap usse mere pas le aana.....
Dhara : ha tu tension mat le agar wo royegi tho hum usse tere pas le aayenge.....hum sab jante hai teri Jaan basti hai jiya hai.....
(Raavi looks at shiva angrily.....then she goes in her room....Shiva too goes in his room and locks the door....he sees his and raavi's pics before they got married....and smiles)
*FLASHBACK*
(Shivi had come to a garden to spend some time together.....raavi sees a khulfi wala and smiles)
Raavi : (exictedly) Shiva khulfi!!!
(Shiva looks at Direction where she was pointing)
Shiva : ha tho??
Raavi : uff off chal na khate hai.....kitna maza aayega....waise thand mai kulfi khane ka maza he kuch aur hai....
Shiva : aa gadhedi koi kulfi nhi milne wali hai tujhe aayi badi kulfi khane wali....bhul mat 2 din phele tujhe Sardi hui thi.....
Raavi : 2 din phele hui thi abhi mai bilkul thik hu.....chal na plz.....
Shiva : nhi raavi.....tujhe kuch aur chahiye tho bol par kulfi nhi sorry....
Raavi : tho tu mujhe kulfi nhi dilayega??
Shiva : nhi....
(Raavi drags him to the kulfi shop)
Shiva : ye kya hai raavi maine bola na tu kulfi nhi kha sakti hai....chal yaha se....
(Raavi makes a cute puppy face as she knows he will melt)
Shiva : thik hai chal kha le.....
(Raavi pulls his cheeks and says him thank you....the bhaiya gives them 2 kulfi.....they have kulfi but bymistake raavi's kulfi falls down....raavi makes sad face)
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Shiva : ek number ki gadhedi hai....kabhi khud girte pirte rheti hai aur kabhi apni kulfi girati hai....gadhedi....ye le meri kha....
(Shiva gives him his kulfi and they share some kulfi)
Raavi : ruk tere shirt pe lag gyi hai....
(Raavi wipes it from her dupatta)
Shiva : ab kulfi hogya tho ghar pe chale....warna humhe dhundte dhundte sab yaha aajayenge.....
(Raavi laughs.....then they get on thier bike and go back home)
*FLASHBACK END*
(Thinking about the old happy days Shiva was in tears.....he wipes his tears and goes to have dinner..... everyone sits and have their dinner)
Shiva : nhi bhabhi mujhe ye sabzi nhi chahiye....
Dhara : Shiva ye tu kya bol rha hai....ye raavi k hath k baigan hai....tujhe tho pasand the na raavi k hath k baigan.....??
(Shiva looks at raavi)
Shiva : pasand tha bhabhi ab nhi hai.....time k sath badal gya hai....
Raavi : jiya uth gyi hogi mai usse dekh k aati hu....
(Raavi goes in his room)
(Everyone has their food and Shiva leaves)
Gombhi : mujhe tho kuch samjh nhi nhi aata in dono ka phele bachpan se ek dusre se nafrat karte the fir bich mai aisa lag rha hai ye dono ki dosti ho rhi hai ab fir se dono ek dusre se nafrat karne lage hai.....
Dhara : baat tho tum sahi keh rhe ho gombhi mujhe bhi kuch samjh nhi aaya ki achanak se in dono k bich aise kya baat hogyi???
(Krish and Shruti looked at eachother as they were the only one who knew 2 years back raavi and Shiva loved eachother but no one knew why they started hating each other)
*FLASHBACK*
It was a beautiful Monday morning....maa gombhi and dhara had gone to mandir....dev had gone out of Somnath for some work.....Shiva was in his room sleeping and Krish too was sleeping in angaan....but that morning Krish woked up early as it was very hot.....he went to take shower.....and as he was passing her heard someone giggling....but there was no one at house.....it was only Shiva and he himself.....so he went to check in Shiva's room.....the door was little open.....he couldn't believe what he just saw.....raavi was on top of Shiva and they both were smiling looking at eachother.....
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Krish : (shouting) bhoot bhoot!! Hamare ghar mai raavi ka bhoot hai....
(Shivi looked at the door which was little open they saw Krish screaming..... Krish went in angaan and shivi followed them)
Krish : bhoot bhoot....
Shiva : aa gadhede chup kar....
Krish : (scared) Shiva hat waha se dekh raavi ka bhoot tere piche hai....
Shiva : (gave him a tapli) bakwas band kar koi bhoot whoot nhi hai....
Krish : (confused) matlab ye sach mai raavi hai??
Shiva : ha ab kya likh k du....??
Krish ; par ye itni subhe yaha kya kar rhi hai?? Aur jo maine kamre mai dekha wo kya tha??
Raavi : (shyly) wo...wo...mai...
Krish : Shiva mai bol rha hu isse mami ne bheja hoga yaha se kuch gayab karne ko....
Raavi : Krish!!!!
Shiva : (gives one more tapli) bakwas band kar usse maine bulaya hai.....
(Krish couldn't believe what he just saw and just listen)
Krish : matlab tum dono ka chakkar chal rha hai..??
Shiva : aa gadhede ye chakkar bikkar kya hota hai?? Pyar krta hu mai usse.....
(Krish's eyes widened.....he couldn't believe Shiva who just hated raavi's presence near him said that he loves her)
Krish : Shiva tujhe bukaar tho nhi hua hai na?? Tu is mami ki bhen ki beti se pyar karta hai.....?
Shiva : (angrily) aa gadhede mami ki bhen ki beti sirf mai bol sakta hu......aur Krish khabardar agar aur kisi ko is bare mai kuch pata chala tho.......pure Somnath mai bhaga bhaga k marunga....
Krish : (innocently) thik hai kisi ko kuch nhi bataunga par uske badle mujhe kya milega....
Raavi : kya chahiye tujhe??
Krish : abhi tho kuch nhi chahiye par jab zarurat hogi tab bata dunga....waise Jani dushmano mai pyar kaise aur kab hua koi bateyega???
Raavi : (blushes) 6 mahine phele....
(Raavi's phone rings....she checks)
Raavi : Shiva mai chalti hu sab k aane ka time hogya....
(She hugs Shiva and leaves)
Krish : (confused) Shiva raavi ko kaise pata chala sab k aane ka time hogya??
Shiva : ab har Monday ko aati hai tho usse andaz hogya hai sab mandir se kitne baje tak lautte hai....
Krish : (shocked) matlab ye bhi kaafi time se chal raha hai.....waise mai tho darwaze k pas he soya tha tho mujhe darwaze kholne ki aawaj q nhi aayi???
Shiva : wo darwaze se nhi khedaki se aati hai isliye.....
(Krish was getting shock one by one...he couldn't Shiva)
Shiva : Krish agar kiski ko bhi is bare mai pata chala na mujhse bura koi nhi hoga.....
(Shiva leaves)
*FLASHBACK END*
Everyone finish their food and go to their rooms....
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