《Hate But Love》Intro
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In Pandya niwas
Doctor : dekhiye mai tho ab apko ek he baat bolunga agar ap log chahte ho inke halat aur kharab na ho tho inhe khush rakhna bhot zaruri hai....mai ye baat apko pichle 1 saal se bolta arha hu par ap log inhe khush he nhi rakh rhe ho.....I'm sorry to say par agar aise he chalta rha tho ap log unhe kho denge.....plz is bare mai socheye.....mai chalta hu....
(The doctor leaves)
Dhara : gombhi abhi bas bhot hogya mujhe Shiva aur dev is ghar mai wapis chahiye.....mai maa ko aur taklif mai nhi dekh sakti....
Gombhi : dhara maa ko tho mai bhi aise nhi dekh sakta par hum kar bhi kya sakte hai....
Dhara : gombhi mai kuch nhi janti ab bas bhot hogya....unki khushiyo k liye mai maa ko Marta hua nhi dekh sakti....
Gombhi : maine dev aur shiva ko kitne baar kaha hai wapis aane ko par wo dono he mere baat nhi maan rhe hai....
(Guara goes in maa's room.....they see maa taking dev's and Shiva's name in sleep and feel helpless)
Dhara : (wipes her tears) ab bas aur taklif nhi hone dungi mai maa ko....chahe jo ho jaye ab tho dev raavi jiya Shiva Shruti sab ko mai is ghar mai lake he rahungi.....mai mere bacho ko itna tho janti hu ki wo apni khushi k liye apni maa tho itni taklif mai nhi dekh payenge....
Gombhi : mai bhi chahta hu mere dono bhai wapis aajaye aur hamara ye adhura pariwar fir se ek ho jaye....
(Guara hug and then they go down)
(Gombhi calls Dev and dhara calls Shiva)
Guara : sunno tum dono....1.5 years ho gye hai tum dono ko ye ghar aur Somnath chode hue.....humne aur maa ne bhot khoshish ki tumhe samjhane ki par tum nhi samjhe.....tum dono k Karan maa ki Tabet kharab hone lagi....
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Shiva/dev : par bhabhi/gombhi hum aate rhete hai na maa aur ap sab se milne....
Guara : ab usse kuch nhi hone wala hai.... jab bhi maa tum dono se thodi der k liye milti hai unko aur bura lagta hai.....tumhe andaza bhi hai in 1.5 saalo mai maa pe kya bheti hai??? Ab bas bhot hogya ab tho doctor ne bhi keh diya hai agar aise he chalta rha tho hum maa ko kho denge.....mai ab tum dono se akhri baar bol rhi hu jaldi se wapis aajao maa k pas apne ghar mai.....aur ab bhi tum log nhi aaye aur tumhari wajha se maa ki Tabet aur bhi kharab hui tho mujhse bura koi nhi hoga....ab sab tumhare hath mai hai tum maa ko khush dekhna chahte ho ya nhi.....
(Guara cuts the call)
Dhara : gombhi mere bache aayenge na wapis???
Gombhi : mujhe nhi pata dhara.....mai bhi chahta hu mera pariwar fir se phele jaisa hasta khelta rahe....
Dhara : 1.5 saal phele Tak tho sab kuch kitna sahi tha fir pata nhi kis ki nazar lag gyi hamere pariwar ko.....
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