《Best friends To Lovers ✔️》Chapter 28
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*Edited*
We woke up the next morning to my alarm ringing at 8:30.
Groaning, I rolled over and woke Brennan up.
Today was going to be a long day. And hopefully a special one too.
"Good morning baby." Brennan said when I woke up.
"Come on baby we need to get up and start the day." I said to Brennan as I was walking into the bathroom.
Today we were planning on going to see the Eiffel Tower again and go to the Louvre.
I'm also super excited to see the Mona Lisa and other paintings.
I know Brennan is a big fan of art so he'll be excited too.
Tonight is also the night. I'm going to make it super special for us.
I took a quick shower and got into something really cute.
After I finished getting dressed, I let Brennan go to the bathroom after me.
He came out looking hot as ever in all black.
"Ready baby?" Brennan snapped me out of my day dreaming about him.
"Uh- uh yeah. Let's go." I said snapping out of my trance.
We walked hand in hand out of the room to the elevator.
We decided we'd get breakfast in the hotel because it's already paid for so there's no point in wasting more money.
I told Brennan that I had to go to the bathroom so he could go in and get us a table in the hotel restaurant.
I didn't actually have to go to the bathroom.
I went up to reception to ask them a question.
"Excuse me. Hi. I was just wondering if you'd be able to help me out with something?" I asked the lady behind the counter.
"Eh. That depends on what it is." She said back to me with a thick french accent.
"You see, me and my boyfriend and kind of celebrating his birthday. I was just wondering if you might be able to go up to our room at around 8:30 and like set out some petals? Would that be possible?" I asked her awkwardly.
"Well you see we're not meant to do that. But my shift finishes at 8 so I think I might be able to help you out." She said back to me.
"Oh thank you so much. Ehm, how much would you like for it?" I mean like I doubt she'll do it for free.
"Oh no. No, I don't want your money." Weird.
"Are you sure? I feel bad." I do feel awful about it.
"Honestly it's ok. I don't mind. Here." She said writing down something on a piece of paper.
"It's my number. I'll be moving to America in a few months for college so maybe we might be in the same state? I don't know but still, take it."
I took her number off her, reached over the desk and grabbed her note pad to write my number too.
"Here's my number. Call me whenever. Thank you again but I need to get going. Don't want my boyfriend to get suspicious." I said laughing to her.
We said our goodbyes and I was on my way to the hotel restaurant.
Hopefully Brennan doesn't think I was gone for too long and ask where I was.
"What took so long Baby?" Brennan asked when I sat down at the table with him.
"Sorry. The line was actually long and then Emma rang me too so I answered. Sorry for keeping you waiting."
"It's ok baby. I don't ever mind waiting for you." With that, he started eating his breakfast.
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For the next few hours, we went back to the Eiffel Tower, went to see the mona Liza and went to the Louvre.
We did loads of other stuff but it's just too much to list off.
We had a beautiful dinner at a restaurant beside the Eiffel Tower.
After dinner, we decided to go up to the top of the Eiffel Tower. The view was absolutely amazing and their was violinist up there playing a romantic song.
We started swaying to the music before Brennan spoke up.
"Hey baby. There's something I want to give you." "What is it? This trip is for you, not me." I told him
"Oh hush. I wanted to get you something that shows you how much I love you and want to be with you for the rest of my life." He said pulling something out of his pocket.
"B..... what is this?" I said with a shaky voice.
"It's a promise ring." He said opening the box. "I want to be with you for the rest of my life. This ring is only temporary. You'll be getting something more permanent when I can get your parents to agree." He said laughing.
Tears were in my eyes. I couldn't believe this. He slipped the ring on my finger and we continued to dance.
We sealed our night up on the Eiffel Tower with a kiss and made our way back down the tower.
^Her promise ring^
I was getting kind of nervous because I knew we'd be heading back to the hotel soon.
I know I'm ready for this, but that doesn't stop me from being nervous.
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It was around 8 by the time we got back to the hotel.
Olivia asked me to get some drinks from the hotel bar and bring them up to the room as she goes up to the room before me.
I decided on getting a nice bottle of white wine and two glasses.
I paid for the wine and headed up to our room.
Walking into our hotel room, the lights were off. The only thing that illuminated the room was candles.
Going further into the room, I noticed Olivia sitting on the bed in nothing but red lingerie.
I almost dropped the wine then and there because I was not expecting that.
"What's this?" I asked her as I ventured further into the room.
"This. Is your birthday present." She said to me.
"Baby. You don't have to."
"I want to." She said as she wrapped her arms around my neck.
Instead of responding, I picked her up and lightly tossed her on our bed.
Just the sight of her in her red lingerie spread out in our bed with the look of desire was enough to want me to tip off her lingerie.
But the nervousness swirling in her eyes made me want to cradle her in my arms instead.
"We don't have to do this if you're not ready."
The moment the words left my lips, she immediately shook her head.
"I'm ready. I want this. I'm just a little bit nervous."
Her voice clearly expressed her emotions. And I could hear her excitement.
I leaned down and held her head in my hands.
"You can tell me if you want to stop, at any time. Do you understand?" I asked her very softly.
I needed to make sure she knew that I was serious about her feelings about this. If she didn't want to do it then I wasn't going to do it.
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She nodded but quickly corrected herself as my hand went down to her ass to pinch it.
"Yes daddy."
I stood over her and took in a deep breath as I felt my dick twitch in my boxers.
Olivia looked up at me with that look still in her eyes. That innocent look. It's almost like she knew what she was doing to me.
I pulled off my shirt and threw it to the side.
I let her wrap her arms around my neck as I lifted her hips until she wrapped them around my waist.
I looked down between us to notice that there was no space between us.
She followed my movement and eyed the gap between us.
I chuckled before leaning down and capturing her lips.
I made sure to take it slow. I held her thigh with one hand and with the other I held her cheek.
Her fingers found their way into my hair within a few seconds.
When she began to get out of breath, I moved my lips to her neck.
The first moan came once I sucked on a part of her lower neck. Much more followed when I lowered my hips to hers.
I swiftly ripped off her red lingerie, earning a gasp from her.
"Brennan. Do you know how much this cost." She said while slapping my shoulder.
Instead of answering, I continued sucking on her neck.
She started to whimper with want when I continued to leave hickeys all over her neck and not venture any further.
As I distracted her with slowly grinding my hips into hers, it gave me time to admire her beautiful chest.
I pressed my chest onto her now exposed skin. She moaned from both the feeling of my boner digging into her lower region and from the feeling of her harden nipples pushing against my skin.
"Daddy..."
She moaned as I wrapped my lips around her left nipples.
This amount of pleasure, unexperienced pleasure, caused her to gasp and moan. I have barely touched her, yet I was almost sure the rooms around us would be able to hear her any second.
I seemed harder and rolled my tongue around her bud as her finger gripped my hair.
I quickly switched to the right one before continuing.
A couple of whimpers left her mouth when I released her nipple, but they silenced as she realised where my mouth was going.
I left an open-mouth kiss right below her belly button.
I looked up at her to see her biting her lip and sealing her eyes shut.
"Do you want me to stop-"
"No! Please don't stop, daddy." She rushed out while snapping her eyes open. Once she made eye conscripts with me, her face heated up.
"Shhh, I won't stop then, baby."
She let her head fall back on the pillow and moved her hands away from my hair to the sheet beside her. Her fingers gripped the fabric until her knuckles turned white.
I stood up for a second to get a good look at what I was about to taste.
My dick started to push painfully against my boxers but I ignored it and got into my previous position. I then moved her legs until both were over my shoulders.
"Fuck, Livy." I groaned as her scent hit me full force. She was so wet, she was basically dripping.
Without wasting anymore time, I pushed my tongue against her.
Holy shit. She tasted better than I imagined.
Her body shook from the pleasure as she released another moan.
I held her thighs firmly before licking and sucking her lower lips. She started to cry out as I continued. I'm not sure how long I kept on doing it but it was enough to make her body shake as she begged me to let her cum.
"Daddy, please...."
I sucked on her bud for a second before pulling away. I didn't want to make her wait too long for her first orgasm.
I stood up and grabbed the condoms that have been waiting for us. I ripped the package with my teeth before taking my boxers off.
Olivia's eyes widened as my dick sprung free.
"Baby, are you ready?"
She nodded and took in another deep breath. I slid the condom on and pushed my top between her folds. She moaned and whined as it hit her bud a few times.
I gripped her hips before slowly pushing myself in.
Olivia's eyes sewed shut in pain as I in bed myself for a few seconds.
I stopped once I was fully settled in her. I sucked in a deep breath and tried my best not to move too much.
She was very tight and her awks were squeezing the shit out of me.
I lifted my hand until it was holding her face. I gently brushed my thumb against her lips until she opened her mouth and started to suck on it.
"You're being such a good girl, Livy." I praised her as she continued to suck my thumb.
I didn't want to bring up any kinks I knew she had during her first time.
For the next couple of minutes, I stayed still and let her breath through it. I had no clue how much pain she was in but I knew it had to be very painful. If it was painful for me to push into her then it just be a lot more painful for her.
Once the pain passed, she opened her tear-filled hazel eyes and nodded softly.
Being as gentle as possible, I pulled out before pushing back in.
After doing that for a minute or two, Olivia started to moan. I took my thumb out of her mouth and moved my hand back to her hip. I was able to grip her hip and use that to thrust into her.
Ignoring how painful this was becoming for me, I kept my thrusts on the slower side to let Olivia enjoy this.
The room was filled with her moans, whines and whimpers. It was like music to my ears.
Her walks started to squeeze harder, which meant she was getting close to her orgasm.
"Daddy, please.... I'm so close."
I smirked as my prediction was correct.
"Just wait a little bit more." I grunted out as I felt myself getting closer.
I gripped her hips harder as my thrust got messier.
"Cum, baby."
With a scream of my name, she obeyed and released her juices all over my dick. I can shortly after her and rode it out for a little until I slid my dick out from her.
Olivia whimpered from the loss of contact as she panted with a thin layer of sweat on her skin.
I pulled off the condom and threw it in the trash can beside the bed.
I laid next to Olivia and lifted her until she was laying down on top of me.
Her arms wrapped around my neck as she stuck her head into my neck.
"I love you." I whispered in her ear.
Before falling asleep, I heard her whisper, "I love you too," Back to me.
That night was the best night of my life.
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