《KARNA - MAHADEV'S DECIPLE》RETURN TO ANGA AND ????
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Next morning Karna woke and did his pooja. The rest of barati too woke up and ang got ready to return Anga with bride. As per King Vikramaditya's proposal they all had breakfast and went to Ujjain palace gates to return to kingdom. Vidai ceremony took place. Avantika hugged her parents and family while crying as she was about to leave for Anga to begin her married life. King Vikramaditya in tears asked Karna to care of her daughter, Karna assured him and his family that till he is breathing no harm will come to Avantika. The return journey began after that.
The return journey was some what slow as new queen of Anga was coming to Anga in palanquin. They reached Anga in afternoon. There all the people of kingdom were showering rose petals and music were playing to welcome the returning barat. The streets were looking like flower bed. People were cheering for newly weds. They reached palace gates. The palanquin stopped before palace gates. A velvet carpet was laid for Karna and Avantika to enter the palace. At palace gates ladies were waiting to see the newly weds. They came and entrance ceremony for bride took place. The bride was taken to different chamber for now to rest. Vikram informed Karna that people of Anga arranged a program to welcome their queen in the evening. Karna agreed and told him that after sunset he with Avantika and his family will come for the program. For now everyone went to their room to rest. Ashwatthama, krishna, Arjun, Nakul and Sahdev were teasing Karna for his first night.
In the evening Karna did his pooja and returned to palace and changed to attend the program arranged by people of Anga for them. He has already informed Avantika and others about that. They all got ready and exited the palace. Sun was already set but whole Anga was still bright. It was heavily decorated with chandelier, diya and Mashal. The reached the stadium for the occasion. The stadium was already full by people.
The stadium was special significance to Anga it was the place where proceedings of court used to takes place before Palace was built so architect decided to build a stadium here. The stadium was large enough to accommodate all people of Anga and much more it was built for whenever King want Judgements and proceedings to take place in attendance of all people of Anga for a very heinous crime to set example. Those situations never occurred in Anga so it was closed till now but it was a very beautiful beautiful building and show case of prowess of master of Architects of Anga. The whole stadium an be covered with ceiling to protect from rain or anything. The seats were arranged in such manner the people will able to see everything thing happening in centre of field and the royals present there. It was built in such way that the even covered everything can be easily seen by either sunlight or moonlight. If it was cloudy day or night time several places for Torch and diya were in buil to light up the place. The could be easily herd by everyone present there no matter the distance. Today the stadium was covered and decorated beautifully. The red curtains were hanging all around. Two large throne was arranged for Bride and groom and several seats in various places around them for royal family and guests.
Everyone was mesmerized by such structure it beauty was truly never seen in any kingdom. Karna and Avantika folded their hands in front of their subjects. Karna introduced the new queen of Anga to its people. Avantika too thanked the people for beautiful welcome and pledge to do her duties of a queen seriously. The people saying "Angraj ki jay", "Angrani ki jay". Soon The people calmed down and every took their seats. Vikram then came to centre of ring and spoke though he spoke with normal volume royal guests and Tourist were amazed ho clearly the can hear him. The program then stated various things like dance, instrument playing, songa were performed.
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Yudhishthir jeolousy were reaching to new heights as he never Talked to locals to know their opinion on their King because he knew he wouldn't like the truth but seeing the lavish celebration thrown by people willingly and the way they were praising Karna through their songs was making him most uncomfortable. He clenched his hands. He didn't knew but few people were seeing all this. Bheeshma was very disappointed with Yudhishthir since he came to Anga, he never said anything because it was a happy occasion and he didn't want to ruin it. Krishna was sadly looking at him, he was disappointed at his behaviour. Karna too saw and observe Yudhishthir since he came Anga, he didn't want to admit but he felt disappointed and sad by his brother's behaviour. Bheem too saw Yudhishthir clenching fist and he was already angry and frustrated. He decided to do something he stood up.
Bheem : Stop This.
The program stopped by his sudden interruption. Bheem the turned around to Karna.
Bheem : Angraj, what is the meaning of all this. You called us here to see this, people praising you as greatest king of all aryavart. You who got Kingdom in charity by my pitamah.
Everyone was shocked. Especially Bheeshma, Arjun Nakul and Sahdev. Yudhishthir and Kunti didn't show but we're pleased that his/her son/brother finally showed Karna his place and broke all the happy occasion that were suffocating them internally. Karna looks blankly at him but Avantika saw disappointment in his eyes.
Karna (calmly) : Prince Bheem my intention for inviting you here was to enjoy the evening. These people were showing what they had prepared. Gangaputr Bheeshma has never said he was doing charity while aI was made king. Your accusations are baseless.
Bheeshma (angrily) : What the hell are you saying Bheem. Where did you get the this disturbing idea. Are you mad.
Bheem (arrogantly) : Pitamah I am not mad. Since I came here all we heard is how great he is and whatever. It surely isn't true he must have instructed them to do so. I mean how can he be king let anyone grat one he is Sutputra and we know suta doesn't have capabilities of king. He became king in first place because of your generousity.
Avantika was watching everything happening, she saw how Karna clutched his hands at word of sutputra and insults thrown at him. She also saw at others they looked shocked and angry especially Bheeshma, Ashwatthama and Dushala. Radha was crying. She can feel their genuine concern as love for Karna and anger for Bheem even Ghandhari and Duryodhana was absolutely agast at Bheem' behaviour. She then looked towards Kunti and Pandavas. Arjun, Nakul, and Sahdev were frowning but she was shocked looking at Kunti and Yudhishthir the both had blank face but she can see pleasure in their eyes, all six of them as if they are enjoying this. She got angry and stood up.
Avantika (Angrily) : You are crossing your limits Prince Bheem. You said Gangaputr Bheeshma gave kingdom to my husband in charity but the truth is Gangaputr only gave him Anga to make him ally and doesn't want him to be enemy as he know even whole Hastinapur with all their army couldn't defeat him. Especially not you or your other Devputra brothers. You are insulting my husband he may endure your rude behaviour but I will not. You insulted my husband as low cast, you consider yourself great. You are nothing but a coward who can shout and hid behind your mother and elders as you know my husband will no sour his relationship with others and Hastinapur because of your behaviour. you just barking here because yo know my husband can defeat you in fact he has already done that quite easily and casually I might add if you are so powerful Oh great son of vayu, the person with 1000 elephants strength prince Bheem then why were you unable to free your self when my husband pressed you with one hand. Why were you kneeling then in front of whole sabha of your brothers soon to be kingdom Hastinapur. You want yourself to compare to my husband you are not worth licking his feet then what right does you have question him. Yuvraj Yudhishthir teach you brother some manner he is shouting like mad elephant and one doesn't have any options but to kill mad elephant.
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Everyone was again shocked by anger of Avantika anger and words Kunti and Pandavas paled hearing last sentence. Duryodhana was happy he was liking Anga more and more. Ashwatthama looked pleased. Avantika humiliated Bheem but never brought his father's name he was greatfull for that. Radha and ady was happy that Avantika stood up for their son, karna now has some one who will stood for him too. Bheeshma has mixed feelings. Krishna Just watched all this with sad smile he knew rift between Karna and Pandavas will be created here but he couldn't blame Avantika for that it was Bheem's arrogance and Yudhishthir's jealousy that had led to this. Bheem face got red of anger and humiliation. He planned to humiliate Karna but instead he got humiliated and incident where he was helpless brought up in front of others, that incident hurted his ego. The people of Anga were happy to see their queen standing up and replying to this arrogant prince.
Bheem (angry) : You apples Princess of Ujjain. How dare you, you choose to marry this suta, you areshame to kshatriya but what could we expect from princess of a kingdom that cowardly isolated themselves. May be you are lowly like him too.
Bheem was going to continue but the stadium shook. He looked up and saw Karna very angry and lokking at him. He saw visual image of him dying painfully in hands of Karna. He feared for his life and looked around to see everyone was staring at him with disbelief and anger.
Karna was actually happy that someone stood for him. He was shocked seeing the silence of Arjun, Nakul and Sahdev regarding the on going matter. He never felt slight hostility from them when they arrived at Anga, but it seems they have hidden it quite well may be because he was of use to them. May be when he would have taught Arjuna Five methods of Archery their true nature would have appeared. When he heard Bheem insulting Avantika his anger exploded he stomped the ground and stady shook.
Karna : Rajmata Kunti control your son or you will have only four sons alive today. Yuvraj Yudhishthir, Arjun Nakul and Sahdev, your silence is appreciated here, if you want you brother alive then leave Anga and never return here again. None of you said any thing means you agree with your brothers I don't wish to keep friendlier relationship with someone who has such thoughts, I Angraj Karna now severe all my relationship with Pandavas and Rajmata Kunti. Get out of my kingdom now or I will kill your brother and you all to if you come in between that I am promising you.
Pandavas paled hearing that the younger trio of Pandavas knew thier plans have gone waste. They were very angry at Karna fo defeating and nearly killing Dronacharya especially Arjun as he was favourite disciple of his and considers him father. He blamed Karna for punishment Ardhnarishwar has give to his guru and sudden seclusion of his guru. He was going to cut off all his relations with Karna. He told his thinking to Nakul and Sahdev. They stopped him and made him understand that Karna defeated Guru Drona with all five methods of Archery so he first have to learn it than only they will cut off his relations with him so they swallowed their anger and decide to learn from Karna himself to defeat him. They too like their brothers were irritated since songs of praise of Karna was going on but they suppressed it well for their plan but now their silence has exposed their plans.
Bheeshma : You all go, Bheem you will be punished for what you did. You have not just humiliated youself but Hastinapur too. Yudhishthir now it became clear to me that you are not capable of handling you responsibility of yuvraj now, I will personally see your rights as yuvraj to be revoked till you understand your duties and if you cannot understand your duties your position as Yuvraj will also be revoked. Go now I am ashamed of you all.
Pandavas left the stadium with Kunti. Not before giving an hateful look to Karna and Avantika who just ignored them. Pandavas knew Bheeshma was truly angry and will follow through his words. Kunti was scared that his son won't get his right. They all blamed Karna for this. Bheeshma turned towards Karna and Avantika.
Bheeshma : I am sorry for their behaviour.
Karna : You are our elder Mahamahim Bheeshma, you need not to say sorry. I under stand it's their opinion not everybody's.
Avantika : Aarya is right Pitamah we won't spoil the mood of everyone for few people. Lets enjoy what our people prepared for us before they got interrupted but madness.
Then people got happy and celebration continued. The atmosphere returned jovial. The celebration went ou till dinner. They all ate dinner at stadium as the people too arranged food for everyone. Then the all went to their room. The royals were escorted back to castle. Dushala and Subhadra came to take Avantika with her. Ashwatthama, Duryodhana and Krishna came to karna
Krishna : I am sorry for their behaviour.
Karna : It's okay, no need.
Ashwatthama : True their behaviour crossed all boundaries of arrogance today.
Duryodhana : Even I did expect that and people call them epitome of Dharm laughable.
Karna : No need to waste our time on them.
Ashwatthama (miscellaneouly) : Yes, why wou you waste time thinking about them before your first night with bhabhishree?
Karna blushed and everyone laughed. They teased him a lot. Soo. They parted their ways and Karna went in his chamber. Chamber was beautifully decorated and in the centre of bed sat his wife Avantika. He came on the bed and unveil her. They looked at eachother's with love. Their eyes locked at one another. They soon forgot everything else.
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