《KARNA - MAHADEV'S DECIPLE》ARRIVAL, DATES AND CELEBRATION
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Today was day when Ujjain royals were going to arrive. The whole Anga was decorated like newly bride. Flower beds were layed everywhere. The people of Anga were most excited they knew their soon to be queen will arrive today with her family. They all carefully decorated Their kingdom on their own accord if anyone didn't knew they will feel like festival of Diwali came early in Anga. The decoration of city was done by people with their own accord, Karna wanted to help by paying the expenses of all decoration but was ruthlessly rejected in his own Sabha by all the representative. They were adamant that people didn't do decoration for him but for their soon to be queen. They shooed him like he was just pest. He argued that the soon to be queen will be his wife but the representative at sabha seemed like they didn't listen to him. He was speechless, he didn't saw this side of his sabha. Everyone got a good laugh at his expense at sabha. Krishna, Ashwatthama, Arjun and Nakul were laughing while rolling on floor. Yudhishthir, Duryodhana and beem were too suppressing their laugh. Bheeshma looked amused by such casual disobedience. They all knew the representative didn't do it disrespect Karna but because of love for Karna. For the people Karna wasn't just a King but he is their son, brother, father etc. They always saw what karna did for them but this time they wanted to do things for him. Karna too understood and let the matter go.
The people of anga today opened their store with special enthusiasm. They even decided to give huge discount for their products till People of Ujjain will stay. Schools were closed and children were waiting in side of roads to do flower shower for their queen. All the adults too were there. Karna with his family and others were at palace gates waiting for guests to arrive.
Soon the news of three Chariot and three carts with some soldiers with Ujjain flags coming to entrance of city came and all people got ready. As soon as they arrived the people of Anga did the flowers shower. Seeing all the welcome Avantika and her family stood up. Avantika folded her hands and greeted everyone, the people got excited and stated cheering “Angrani”. They have already accepted her after hearing the news but this guesture of Avantika touched their heart. They whole heartedly blessed her and cheered for her. Avantika blushed hearing this. King Vikramaditya and his family were seeing the welcome and acceptance of people of Anga. Soon the group entered the palace gates and people dispersed to go back to their job. The chariots and carts entered the palce gates and reached the main gates of palace. Their Everyone was waiting for them. As usual Radha and Adhiratha were in minimum jwellery and in royal clothes but others were fully dressed. Radha held Aarti thali in her hand.
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King Vikramaditya, Queen Mithila descended fom one Chariot, them Rajmata Pushpa and Avantika decended from another. Karna was looking at Avantika only she looked beautiful, he haven't seen for close to two months she looked more best than before. Avantika too felt his gaze and blushed hard.
Ashwatthama : Mitra Karna control yourself.
Krishna: Yes sakha and please close your opened mouth.
Karana close his mouth and blushed. But he didn't stopped staring. He looked towards Avantika and their eyes met. Avantika shyly bowed her head down while karna smiled.Everyone in younger generation snickered whole elders were amused.
A sage decended from third chariot, only Karna, krishna and Bheeshma recognised him. Radha was panicking whether she should do aarti or not. What if sage got angry. The thali on her hand was shaking as her hands were trembling. Sage saw that and understood.
Sage (smiles) : You can do aarti without worring about any thing putri.
Radha smiled and did the aarti and tilak of them.
Everyone (from groom side) : Pranipat sage.
Sage : Kalyan ho.
Everyone (from groom. Side) : Pranipat.
Royals of Ujjain : Pranipat.
Adhiratha : I hope you journey was smooth. I adhiratha Karna's father, this is my wife Radha. This is Mahamahim Bheeshma, Maharani Gandhari, maharani kunti, Dwarkadhish Krishna his wife Rukmini, crown prince of Hastinapur Yudhishthir, Prince Duryodhana, prince Bheem, Prince Arjun, Prince Nakul, Prince Sahdev, Panchal raj Ashwatthama, Princess Dushala and this is my son Karna.
Karna : Pranipat.
King Vikramaditya : Aayushman bahva, journey was pleasant, you have not met us let me introduce. This is sage vishwamitra the teacher of our Avantika, this is my mother Raj mata of Ujjain Devi Pushpa, I am Vikramaditya, this is my wife Mithila and this is my daughter Avantika.
Avantika : Pranipat
Adhiratha : Aayushman bahva putri.
Most people knew each other but traditions mus be followed so they did customarily introduction. But everyone except who knows was shocked sage vishwamitra presense and her being teacher of Avantika.
Adhiratha : Lets go inside.
They went inside but karna signalled a servant to take care of other people who came with the Ujjain royas. The servant nodded and did so. He took the to guest house and animal and carts to animals care center. Both families with their guests reached inside the palace and sat.
Sage Vishwamitra : Your kingdom and Palace are very beautiful especially the symbolism for tridevs Angraj.
Karna : Thanks, but it was collective efforts of people of Anga.
Sage Vishwamitra : It is indeed, when everyone comes together they create something so beautiful that it seemed like work og dev. Your kingdom and palace is great example of that though it is built by mortals but it looks like work of lord Vishwakarma.
Karna : Thank you. You honour us with such complement.
Sage vishwamitra : It is nothing but truth.
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Soon the arrangement for refreshments and breakfast were arranged. After breakfast Adhiratha and Radha told Ujjain people to rest they will discuss the matters after lunch. Dushala, Subhadra and Rukmini went with Avantika to talk with her. Rest went to their chamber following various dasi. Ashwatthama,. Arjun, krishna, Nakul, and Sahdev remained with Karna. Duryodhana too stayed
Ashwatthama : If this is your condition now, what will happen after marriage Mitra.
Nakul : What Elsa he will be under her control. Imagine Maharathi Karna cowering under the might and anger of his beloved wife, our bhabhishree.
Arjun, Sahdev and Duryodhana laughed.
Krishna : Laugh all you idiots laugh for now, you will soon know power of a wife over her husband soon enough. Even tridevs didn't have guts to anger their wife, we are just mortals. Karna I can understand For I am married too.
Karna was blushing hearing this hard. They all took their time and teased him. The condition of Avantika wasn't any better she too was teased by Dushala, Subhadra and Rukmini.
Soon the afternoon came and they all had lunch and gathered in royal guests chamber. Both families excited asked sage vishwamitra to fix a date. The saint closed their eyes and told them after 15 days there is perfect auspicious mahurat (time) for getting married. A mahurat came every 1000 years and it would be best to do ceremony at this time. Both families agreed as they didn't want to miss this opportunity. Sage vishwamitra told them this marriage will be epic and all people of world will want to witness this marriage even Dev's. Both families excitedly discuss the rituals and preparation of marriage. Soon the gift exchange ceremony took place both families exchanged gifts. Then they went to their chambers. Radha went to Avantika to talk to her.
Radha went to Avantika room and knocked. Door opened and Avantika was their with Dushala and Subhadra. Seeing radha they welcomed her inside.
Dushala : Kaki why are you here? The ceremony just ended.
Radha : I came to talk to Avantika.
Dushala : Oh ! Then let me and Subhadra leave.
Radha nodded and they left.Radha went near Avantika and took out a pair of bangles from her hands, they looked old but wasn't very precious they all can tell but Radha seemed to have emotional attachment to it. Radha placed them in her hand.
Radha : Putri, this our family inherited bangles my mother in law passed it to me when I was to become bride, now I am passing it to you. I know it isn't precious but it hols a lot of emotional value to us.
Avantika : I will always wear them aunty.
Avantika said and wore them. Radha had tears in her eyes she thought Avantika will probably place it somewhere and keep it safe. She didn't expect her to wear it. She hugged her.
Radha : Call mata putri, I never had daughter but it seems my this unfulfilled wish will soon be fulfilled. You aren't going to be daughter in law but daughter to me I just knew it from the time I saw it. Call it a mother's intuition.
Avantika : I will happily be your daughter mata.
Radha : Putri, you are going to marry my Radhey, remember he is a kind and gentle soul who will always protect you and respect you that I know. He has endured a lot and never wished anything more than love and respect. He is patient bu sometimes quick to anger. All you need to be with him. Putri, he endured a lot in his short life. He will endure everything himself to make his loved ones happy. Putri do me a favor and briny happiness in his life. He has several deep scars hidden inside his heart which only you can heal. Be with him putri,I know he told you about him but I can assure you he didn't told you true harshness of his life as he didn't want you to pity him or feel bad for him. He recently learned a very disturbing thing about himself. He is bottling it inside him, it causes him pain. He tries to hide it but I know my Radhey too well to see pain and suffering in his eyes. Talk to him about it he will tell you, Putri listen to him and help him to ease his pain.
Avantika : I will mata, l promise you to listen to him and help him in easing his pain and also help him to heal his scars.
Radha : Thank you Putri. I am happy that Karna chose you as his wife. You will be his strength and guidance.
They both talked and Radha left. Soon dates were announced to public and they cheered. A whole kingdom feast was organised and people happily ate and celebrated. Gold's were distributed all through out kingdom. Be it citizens, tourist or petitioner they accepted the gold and blessed soon to be married couple. The celebration ended late at night. Everyone was tired and went back to home to sleep.benen royals went to sleep. Only Karna and Avantika were awake. Karna was in garden on the swing waiting for Avantika. After seeing the swing in Ujjain, Karna too build a swing at Anga Palace garden. He was waiting for Avantika, he has already sent message for this to Avantika through a maid.
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