《KARNA - MAHADEV'S DECIPLE》FIGHTING ASURS AND MEETING KRISHNA
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Karna, Subhadra and arjun started their journey two days ago. In these two days Karna and Subhadra were mentally laughing and Arjun was very getting more angry. Karna didn't leave any chances to show Arjun how he was close to Subhadra. Karna even helped Subhadra in doing chores on the way be it preparing food, setting up tent etc etc. Being a Prince, Arjun didn't know how to help in chores. He didn't know neither ever tried to do chores himself. He was for the first time cursing himself as why he was born as princes. He was getting more and more jealous of Karna seeing him close to Subhadra and helping her. While he just stands there as spectator. He tried to pick faults in Karna's Job but couldn't every thing from food to tent was perfect.
Subhadra was also having fun these days, she was laughing mostly. The chariot was were comfortable she didn't feel any jerks on the way. She and Bharata Karna teased Arjun on every opportunity. When they started to make food or tents she and karna did most of work Arjun too tried to help but was unable to, causing her laughs. She saw how Arjun was acting like all jealous and angry at both of them. She sighed at childish prank that was arranged by Dhushala and Karna but it doesn't mean she didn't enjoyed it.
After 4 more days trio was just hast to cross one more forest to reach dwarka. As soon as the entered the forest, expression of karna became serious. Seeing change in his expression Arjun too turned focused and Subhadra started praying to the almighty. Karna could tell they were being watched he could feel it and was able to hear sound of several footsteps which Asur's tried hiding behind illusions but he was immune to it as per Shukracharya's boon.
As they reached centre of forest they were attached by shower of arrows both Arjun and karna took out their bows to counter the arrows and fired divyastra to counter the rains of arrows and illusions surrounding them. After that they saw there were atleast thousands of asurs marching to wards them fro less than 5 miles. Karna told Subhadra to remain in the chariot no matter what happens. He stood before her completely covering her. Both Arjun and got ready got reagy and started firing arrows and killing the asurs. Though it was two against thousands it was hardly a fair fight. The killed more than three quarters of them in 10 minutes. Then kalyawan arrived with 7 different powerful asurs. Arjun in his confidence rode his horse towards them to fight them himself and to show Subhadra his talent. Karna saw this and cursed the idiotic prince. He soon killed rest of cannon fodder asurs to go and help the idiotic prince who was eager to die.
After killing the asurs he jumped down from the chariot and ran towards Arjun's n who was fighting 8 mighty asurs. Karna saw though Arjun wasn't winning but he wasn't loosing either. He saw the asurs were not fighting with best unlike Arjun who was fighting with all his might. He arrived just in time to save arjun from arrows fired from back. Karna kavach came to existence and blocked the arrows. Arjun was shocked he didn't expect these asurs would use such low method to kill him, he was slightly injured in arms which resulted in letting go of his bow from his hands few seconds earlier. Kalyawan left there as soon as he saw Karna jumping down chariot and leaving Subhadra alone he realised it was his opportunity to kidnap yadhav Princess.
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The remaining seven asurs saw new comer and started firing more wepons but karna neutralised them. The asurs started fighting with all they got they brought out their weapons such as spiked mace and swords to fight. The fight was getting intense by every moment. Arjun was witnessing the how intense the fight was the asurs who were fighting him were now fighting karna. But there was stark difference, earlier he was getting overwhelmed now it were asur who were getting overwhelmed by Karna. Arjun can see this fight was more intense than his fight but still karna was winning. Arjun was so awed by Karna fighting prowess that he didn't even try to pickup his bow from the ground and was looking fight with wide eyes.
The fight between Karna and asur was going on. He killed thre of seven asurs. Rest Asur were trying to regroup and fight him. He saw that kalyawan was not in sight. He turned around to look for him and saw that he was near his chariot trying to destroy it to get to Subhadra but was failing to do so, he then looked Arjun whose bow is still on the ground and was looking at his fight with wide eyes.
Karna (angrily) : Rajkumar Arjun kripya kar apna dhanush uthaiye aur jaa kar Subhadra ke sahayta kijiye.
(Arjun, pickup you bow and go to Subhadra to help her)
Arjun came came out of his trance and was ashamed, he immediately picked up his bow and ran towards Karna's chariot. Karna resumed his fight and killed all these remaining asurs after sometimes. Then he heard “BHARATA KARNA” by Subhadra, he turned around to see Subhadra was forcefully taken by Kalyawan and Arjun were laying there injured. He aimed at arrow at kalwan causing him to lose balance but in doing so the unknowingly pushed Subhadra into water fall. Arjun too saw this and jumped to save her. Karna too used his arrow to help them but they were too far. He did ensure their safe landing in water but didn't knew the dept of the fall.
Karna became furious his kavach and kundals were glowing too brightly. Kalyawan saw him for the first time and seeing his kavach he realised who he was. He has also heard about him from shukracharya, Mahadev's disciple he was hot topic in Asurlok too, but in the overconfidence of his boon to be killed by only krishna he started to fight him. Land shook surrounding changed by fight of two warrior. Kalyawan soon realised his mistake as Karna was angry so he fought with all his might. One of his arrow struck kalyan and he was thrown form top of water fall to downward on opposite bank where waterfall touched the ground. Karna too jumped there and both countinued there battle.
ARJUN'S P.O.V.
After reminded by Angraj, I went towards Subhadra and saw kalyawan trying to attack chariot but Subhadra was safe in there. I then challenged kalyawan for fight our fight took place on top of waterfall so Subhadra wuold be safe. I thought since he was alone I could win easily but I was proven wrong once again. He displayed why other asurs were under him. He defeated me, I was injured and was laying on ground, but he didn't kill me. He was waiting for something, I was deardful thinking that. Soon I saw Subhadra running towards me and was down the chariot.
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She came near me with fears of my well being on her face. Soon my theory and as proven correct kalyawan knew he couldn't harm her on chariot so he delibrately decided to fight him to make Subhadra came down from chariot. I was feeling like such a fool I let my pride jeopardize Subhadra's safety for second time. Kalyawan came to Subhadra and started dragging he whe she called “ BHARATA KARNA”. I was shocked to see Karna had already killed other asurs. He turned around with concerned look and shot an arrow towards kalyawan. Kalyawan losses balance and pushed Subhadra down stream I jumped to save her I caught her, both of use were going to crash heavily on his water surface I was scared for Subhadra but suddenly an arrow came an created strong gust of wind thus nullify our momentum we gently landed in water. I didn't let go of Subhadra hands so we both were submerging in river. The dept of river was great, we fell for 5 minutes before reaching the base of river. During our fall I felt tremors even in water, I could guess Karna was fighting kalyawan and these shock waves were aftermath of the fight. I hoped that Karna would be better condition than us. As we reached bottom I looked towards Subhadra, she was struggling due to lack of oxygen. Sudden the water parted away from us. I heard footsteps. I saw a man in royal clothes coming towards us he was a very handsome some man in orange dhoti, yellow angavastra, ornaments and crown. What attracted me the most was his smile and peacock feather on his crown. Subhadra ran towards him and hugged him and called his name, I the realised who he was.
END OF ARJUN'S P.O.V.
Subhadra still hugging man : Bharata krishna Aap aa gaye.
( Brother Krishna you are here)
Krishna : Mujhe toh aana hi tha meri behen ki suraksha ke liye.
( I had to come Foy your safety)
Arjun : Pranipat Dwarkadhish. Main Arjun.
( Hello lord of dwarka, I am Arjun)
Krishna : Pranipat Arjun. Meri behen ki suraksha karne ke liye mai abhari hoon tumhara.
(Hello Arjun, I am thankful to you for protecting my sister)
Arjun (shamefully) : Maine suraksha nahi ki apitu mai toh Subhadra ke ghavon ka karan hoon. Yadi maine apne krodh aur Kshatriye Gaurav ko tyag diya hota to yeh nobat hi nahi aati. Abhar to aapko Angraj Karna karna chahiye.
(I didn't protect her, I ama reason for her injury. If I would have controlled my anger ans warrior ego it wouldn't have come to this. You should be thankful to Angraj Karna.)
Krishna (smiled) : Hmmm. Mujhe khushi hai ki tumhe apni galti ka bhan hai, isse sikh lo bhavishya mein isse mat dohrana.
(I am happy you realised your mistakes don't repeat this in future.)
Arjun : “Ji Dwakadheesh”
( Yes of course)
Suddenly they felt a very large tremor. The all jerked. Karna smiled.
Subhadra (suddenly and Worriedly) : Bharata Karna.
Krishna : Angraj ki chinta mat karo bhadra. Wo surakshit hai parantu sheeghra chalo aur unse milo warna unke is pralayankari yudh aur krodh ke karan dwarka sankat mein hoga.
(Karna is fine but we should go and meet him otherwise dwarka would be in danger because of his battle and anger.)
Arjun was shocked hearing confidence in Krishna's voice about karna well being. They left there to reach the banks of river. When the arrived at bank of river Arjun and Subhadra was shocked to see condition of surrounding the whole landscape have changed trees were uprooted, land were filled by craters. It looked like barren land there. They now realised severity of situation. They saw in one such crater angry Karna was standing there with sword in his hands over badly brutalized Kalyawan. They saw kalyawan was badly bleeding but was conscious and laughing. Arjun and Subhadra were shocked seeing such Angry Karna his kavach and kundals were shining brightly, his face had absolute rage. His eyes were red. He was looking like kaal Bhairav him self. His aura screamed of danger. Krishna was still smiling. Three of them moved closed to them kalyawan started talking to karna and they heard what Karna and kalyawan were talking. What they heard shocked them to their core.
WITH KARNA AND KALYAWAN
Karna has defeated kalyawan easily but wasn't able to kill him due to his boon. Though Karna was angry but he didn't want to use tridevs astra and vaasvi shakti given to him as they were dangerous and destructive and will cause destruction of whole Dwarka. Seeing this situation kalyawan started laughing.
Kalyawan (laughing evilly) : You can not kill me Karna. I got boon to be killed by Krishna's sudarshan only from lord Brahma himself. You may be Mahadev amd Mata Parvati's disciple but even you cannot go against the boon. Haa Haa ... Karna I know you are powerful and already had defeated Devraj Indra but what about people close to you. You can't kill me, I will be back and kill anyone precious to you that I promise. Ha ha ha..... I will avenge today's humiliation hahahahaha...
Karna was getting angrier with kalyawan laughs. But he remembered his teachings and restrained his anger, he close his eyes on and opened it with blank face on. He suddenly became calm. Kalyawan was scared seeing change in karna. He could see that behind Karna peaceful expression there was a promis of his destruction then amd there.
Karna (strangely calm voice) : Kalyawan you made big mistake of threating my family. Let me see if your boon is truly as you say I will use all tridevs given astra on you lets see whether you will truly survive even if you did you wouldn't be able condition to harm anyone after that.
Krishna : That's not necessary Angraj.
Karna was going to start chanting but heard a familiar voice. Krishna who was smiling till now now had serious face he knew if Karna did what he said the Dwarka with many nabouring ke kingdom would be wiped of Aryavart's map. So, he called karna to stop him. Karna turned backward to see Arjun and Subhadra were standing like statue and enchanting man beside him. He immediately recognised krishna as avtar of lord of Vishnu. Being deciple of Mahadev and Mata Parvati he was privileged to know at least some secrets. Krishna's endeavour from his childhood to now was well known in whole aryavart, many people think him as avtar, Karna was just sure of this fact. He respectfully lower his head in respect to Almighty Vishnu. Krishna acknowledge this and smiled.
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