《KARNA - MAHADEV'S DECIPLE》TESTS AND BOONS
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3years have passed since Karna returned to Kailash parvat. Mahadev and Mata Parvati gave him all the gyan of divyastra. Now karna was much stronger than before due to his yogic shakti and food of mata annapurna. He was now 6 feet tall has has lithe but muscular physique.
In these years karna also meet asurguru shukracharya karn also got his knowledge of illusions and knowledge of sanjeevni matra which he can use after getting asur guru permission.
Today was test of karna whether he completed his training successfully or not. Kana have to give tough pariksha. Karna was now mater of all kala, weapons and Shastra.
For karna kala test all apsara and Devi's of swarg lok will came to judge and were strictly informed to judge and report even little mistakes example Devi urvashi came to judge nartya kala, even trideviyan came mata saraswati was to judge music and instruments.
For Shasta pariksha he will face questions dev guru brihaspati , suryadev and Lord Vishwakarma will also came to see his son and grandson's performance.
For weapons it was most difficult as masters of each field was going to judge karna best of the best in each weapon. Asur Guru Shukracharya for spear, Lord Hanuman for mace and unarmed combat, Lord Shiva for dhanush, Lord Kartikeya for sword And judge for axe was a mystery.
All preparation was going on full throttle in Kailash both to welcome the guests as well as start of tests.
Karna woke up and was doing his surya pooja. He is as ready to be tested and will give nothing but his best for each test.
Soon all the guests arrived, All tridevs with tri Deviyan, dev guru, asur guru, lord Hanuman, Deviyan from swarg, suryadev, lord vishvakarma etc. Suddenly a gust of wind blew and lord Parshuram was there every body under stood he was judge foe karna axe training after all who else is better judge than Mahadev's first disciple and ans of lord Vishnu.
All residents of Kailash parvat welcomed the guests and seved them food and water. Soon karna came, according to Mahadev karna will be facing kind of hurdles test. He will have to complete test one test before going to another. His fist test was Shastra dwandh with dev guru brihaspati. Then his test for kalas and then weapon. Everyone present can watch karn all the time but karna will only able to see judge of test. And karna was not told about any judges.
Karna : Pranipat.
(Hello)
Brihaspati : kalya ho Putra. Mai dev guru brihaspati tumhare Shastra ki pariksha lene aaya hoon. Aarambh karein.
(Stay blessed I am brihaspati guru of god's let's start with knowledge test)
Karna : Ji Avashya.
(Yes of course)
Brihaspati : pahla prasan tumne suta hote hue bhi Shastra aur sastra gyan prapt ki chesta kyu ki?
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( Why despite being lower class you decide to get knowledge)
Karna (smiles) he knew it not just questions but even his ripus were also tested if he got angy he will fail, so he replied: Deivayanta kule janma madyantu tu porusham..... My valour is not dependent on my bith. It is sole mine. Rishi, river and parvat ka koi gotra nahi hota dev guru. Their wok is their identity so will be mine risivar.
Brihaspati ( smiles) : Sadho putra. Sadho
(So true son so true)
Everyone : sadho.
This event on for two hours. Dev guru blessed karna and left. Karna will get his results at end of tests. Then came tests for kalas. Karna went on and displayed all his nartya, sangeet, pakwan etc to all the Deviyan then he he left. Now was the last but not least weapons tests. Rules were set such as devastating astra sastra were not to be used other side all other skills, talents and experience to be used and. Karna as to stay undefeated/ standing or he should defeat the judges which is highly unlikely. Mata Parvati will heal. Him after each duel. Spear duel was first fight.
Karna : Pranipat guru shukracharya.
Hello teacher shukracharya)
Shukracharya : kalyan ho Putra, dwandh ke liye tayar.
(Stay blessed ready for battle)
Karna : jo agya guru dev.
( Yes teacher)
The clashed like mighty warrior they were karna was energetic and always keep attacking but shukracharya skill fully and having all the experience and illusions techniques nullify each his attacks being trained by asur guru himself and Lord Kartikeya karna was also able to nullify his attacks and illusions. The fight came to stagnation were both the fighter were unable to gain upper hand afer two hours it is as declared as draw. Everyone was surprised as they khow shukracharya expertise in using spear to be able fight on equal footing with him was something even Devas would be unable to do. Mata Parvati and Lord Shiva were smiling. Next was mace and unarmed combat.
Karna was surprised to see lord Hanuman's precense. He was absolutely astounded as he know the strength and skill of his opponent. He gulped hard, but there was no hesitation in his eyes.
Karna : Pranipat Ram bhakt.
( Hello ram's devotee)
Hanuman was happy hearing that : Pranipat karna today I have come to test you so come with full power, I won't fight half heartedly.
Both fighter soon stated to fight, karna was no match fo lord Hanuman's strength and skill but he skillfully deflected his attacks. After one and haf hour Hanuman decided for unarmed fight, karna was getting out performed from the beginning but he held his own through wits and willpower only. Battle soon ended and Devi Parvati healed karna. Hanuman blessed karna and left.
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Soon battle of swords started as both Lord Kartikeya and karna spared regularly their batter was also interesting.Both know each other move so it was draw but it doesn't mean it was easy it was like fight between apex predators. Soon for axe fight Bhagwan Parshuram entered the ground.
Karna (shocked and surprised) : Pranipat bagwan.
Parshuram (chuckles) : kalyan ho guru bharata.
(Stay blessed student of same teacher)
Karna has eye widned he simply forgot that Bhagwan Parshuram was also student of Mahadev.
Parshuram chuckles : Aao guru bhata mai bhi toh gurudev ke dusre shishya ka parakam dekhu.
( Lets fight show me your strength and valour)
Both karna and pashuram fight a destructive fight in which karna was able to stand at the end due to his stubbornness and willpower. He was able to fight Parshuram but battle experience and as vastly different for one who still has not completed his education vs one who killed all kshatriya of earth 21 time with his axe, here probably after tridev Parshuram has more battle experience. Last fight was of dhabir vidya karna first love so when he saw Lord Shiva himself going to be judge his all hopes died, he knew he won't be able to match his guru.
Lord Shiva smiled and close his eyes and both to use normal arrows for this match to make it slightly fair for his student, karna was very adamant since he came to Kailash that he will no raise weapons against the mata or Mahadev. But both sat him down and make him understand it was part of the process. Now after 12 years of his education he understood what his gurus meant. Both fight but it was one sided slaughter even with all restrictions karna was only on defence since the beginning but he held for two hours it was shocking for every body as there was probably no other human or dev alive which could do that in archery battle against mahadev except tridevs and Mata Parvati.
Test ended with that now karna as time of results. Karna was in front of everyone as they are about to give results. First dev guru brihaspati
Brihaspati : Putra karna maine is jeevan mein tumse adhi bhuddhiman aur dharam gyata manushya nahi dekha. Tumne na keval vedon ko phasa hai api use samjha bhi hai. Kalyan ho Putra. Mera ashirwad hai ki tum sansar ko Vedas ke sachche saar se avgat karoge Putra
( Son karna your are most intelligent and righteous person I know, you are knowledgeable. I bless you that you will spread essence of Vedas to world)
Karna : Dhanyavad.
(Thank you)
Devi Saraswati : Putra karna tum ne sabhi kalao mein maharath prapt kar li hai Putra. Mai tumhe vardan deti hoon ki tum apne veena vedan aur sangeet se na keval barish apitu har mausam ka ahvahan kar paoge.
( Son you have mastered the 63kalas, I bless you that you will be able to call rain and weather cahnge by you music and instruments playing)
Karna :. Dhanyawad mata.
(Thanks mother)
Shukracharya: Putra tumne aaj mujhe Gavit kiya hai, mai tumhe vardan deta hoon ki tumpe koi bhi kala jadoo or maya kaam nahi karegi.
( Son today iam proud, ibless you none black magic or illusions will harm you)
Karna (smiles) : Dhanyawad guru.
lord Hanuman : Vatsya tumne bahut parakam dikhaya hai, aaj mai tumhe vayu sa tej aur shaktishali hone ka vardan deta hoon.
(Son you valour impressed me, may you be as strong and fast as wind)
Karna : Dhanyawad Bhagwan.(as he felt his strength increased again.)
Lord Kartikeya : karn maine tumhe yaha ek balak se Yuvan hote hue dekha hai, mai tumhe apna talwalr bhet karta hoon.
( Karn I have seen you grow fro childhood to adulthood, I gift you my sword)
Karna: Dhanyawad bharata
(Thanks brother)
Bhagwan Parshuram : Mai tumhare parakam se ati prana hua puta mai tume ye Vijaya bow bhet karta hoon, tum vijaydhari kehlaoge putra main tumhe Digvijaya hone ka aashirwad deta hoon.
( I am impressed, I gifts you Vijaya bow and bless you to conquer four directions)
Karna : Dhanyawad Guru Bhata.
Lord Vishwakarma: Putra Mai tumhara samarthya dekh bahut prasnn hoon mai tumhe ek rath aur tarkas deta hoon jisse tumara teer kabhi samapt nahi hoga.
( Son I am happy with your valour, I gifts you a chariot and quiver whi will never run out of arrows)
Karna : Dhanyawad lord Vishwakarma.
Suryadev : Putra tumhara samarthya dekh mai gad gad ho utha. Aaj ke paschat tume Agrni ya surya ke kisi bhi astra ka koi bhi prabhav nahi padega.
( I bless you that no fire could harm you)
Everyone smiles knowingly at this.
Karna bowed his head down to thank him.
Mahadev : Putra tumhari sikhsha ab samapt hui.
( Son yor education ends now)
Karna with tears in his eyes : Mai sadev aapka rini rahunga guru dev.
( I will be eternally greatfull to you my lord)
Mahadev : Nahi Putra rin ka to prashnn hi nahi hota Putra. Gyan par to sabka adhikar hai Putra. Mai tumhe Ajay hone ka aashirwad deta hoon.
( No son, education is basic right to be given to everyone. I bless you to be undefeated)
Karna nodded with smile and bowed out in front of teacher to go ch his feet.
All the guests left except bramadev and Vishu dev.
After every one left tridev and Mata Parvati bestowed their promised astra sasta to karna. Mahadev told karna to rest as his new journey will begun from tomorrow.
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