《Book reviews *Requests Closed*》'Wings' by SlytherLiz
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This story might be pretty... hard to handle for the weaker people among us. I'm sorry, that's just how it is. Not everyone will enjoy this story and- and-
...That's so sad Alexa play Despacito
Aight, time to cut the crap. What I just did is called 'memeing with the tools you're given': I used the main characters name for this awful intro. It would be very nice if the readers listened to Despacito while reading this, but I won't force you.
So this story is about Alexa and Alexander, two Alexes. They live in a world where people have wings, the size and amount of feathers showing how loved you are. Alexander's wings are huge. Alexa's are nonexistent. However, not everything is as it seems. Can they fix each other?
I really like the plot and story set up. It's original and an interesting take on a fascinating concept. I also like how it doesn't shy away from showing the ugly things in the world, for example: abusive relationships. Not everything is always fun and games, not even in FictionLand.
The characters are also well-developed and realistic. They are people, experiencing both good and bad things. It's fun to see how their relationships progress and how they interact with each other. Plus, bisexual main character who isn't wattpad's standard cliché beauty.
The GPS is pretty much perfect. I wouldn't waste a lot of time on editing.
A word of warning: this story does contain triggers such as rape, abuse, etc. Just putting it out there in case someone considers reading this (which you should, if you can handle it). I won't go into details; the author dedicated the first chapter to list most of the triggers, so take a look at that. Thus, bonus points to SlytherLiz for taking her readers into consideration.
Rating: 9! (If you're nice to me, I might give you some bonus points for allowing me to meme with your protagonist)
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