《Book reviews *Requests Closed*》'High Risk' by KiaraLotts
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This review is going to be... very similar to the other one.
This story is about Candy, a young stripper. One day, her unstable ex-boyfriend tries to have her killed and he gets sent to prison. Candy will testify and Tristan, a police officer in an unhappy marriage, is assigned to keep her safe. What will happen between them?
This plot isn't that original and again, poorly executed. Alex just sorta gets bailed out after shooting four people? His entire crime is just used as a plot device? Tristan never really does his job of protecting her because the threat of Alex is randomly reduced? Please.
Same spiel for the characters: underdeveloped. I know what they , but I don't know . What do they like? What do they want? Who are they? I don't know.
The GPS, again, needs major editing. Same issues as I've pointed out in 'His Barbie'.
On a more positive note, I will give some diversity points again. However, as for the rest, this story should probably be improved. A lot.
Rating: 3.5
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