《Book reviews *Requests Closed*》'Experience The Light' by TheAmateurWriter1
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Hello, friends! It is pride month and that is a very good thing indeed!
I went through my requests and found this book, which features LGBT+! So naturally, I decided to start this wonderful month by reviewing this book!
The book is about Rian Kellberg, a Christian boy who 'hates' LGBT+ people. However, when a boy called Cyrus Lopez tries to change his mind while trying to become Rian's friend, Rian discovers some things about himself.
The plot isn't the most original I've seen, but it's always a nice one to read about. It's interesting, fun, and also the quality gay content we long for in this time of the year.
The characters seem developed enough and are all likeable. However, their interactions are fast and a bit unrealistic. It would be nice to kind of, give them their own 'voice', if you catch my drift.
I'll be honest with you, it needs editing. A lot of it. There are occasional spelling mistakes and my friend. Using it makes your story a lot easier to read and gives the story a much better flow.
However, because it's pride month, I'll go easy on you. You get a few extra points for the gay and for adressing issues between homophobes and LGBT+ people!
Rating: 7!
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