And here we have another book written by edara1999! Only this time, there's more to the plot than bittersweet romance.

The story is about Abel, a boy who is blamed for the death of his brother by his parents. He is kept isolated from the world and deprived from everything. His life is miserable, until a girl named Ariella becomes his new neighbour.

First off, let me say that I like this plot a lot better than Is 'it too much to ask for your heart?''s plot. It just has more substance, though it still isn't the most original thing I've seen. I do think that it still has a lot of rather unrealistic plot holes that should be fixed sooner or later (the book has only 4 chapters so far, so I'll let it slide for now). For example, how come the parents are so sadistic? Most importantly, how come other people don't notice the sudden disappearance of the only son they have left? There's room for improvement there.

We haven't seen much of the characters yet, so of course they still need some development. So far, they're pretty interesting. Be sure not to ruin them!

Gps? Aside from the occasional grammar/editing mistakes, it's fine. No problems with it.

Rating: 7!