《Book reviews *Requests Closed*》'Greater than' by seeker_27
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Right. I went in with high expectations. The description and the prologue were promising. Sadly, it all went down from there.
Mikhail Aeons is an infremia. Infremias are like slaves to supremias, people with superpowers.
The plot was a little... meh. It reminded me a lot of the book 'Red Queen', which also had normal humans and royal humans with superpowers.
The vocabulary and punctuation is fine, but the rest... oh god. The tenses switch way too often, grammar mistakes... no. Please. I can't handle it.
I also couldn't like the characters, but this might be because of above mentioned issues.
On a more positive note, I live for those nice Author's notes at the end. It just sounds so nice and happy and I love them ^^
Rating: 6.5
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