《Book reviews *Requests Closed*》"The Night Rider" by Captainsarcastic101
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This book is a fantasy story about Rider, Captain of the Night Force in a world called Para Dormus. I can't explain more. It's complex, okay?
So this story has around 45K reads (a lot, right?) And I think it deserves those. The world of Para Dormus sounds like it was thought out incredibly well. There are a lot of characters, who all become very interesting as the story progresses.
The vocabulary in this story is great, the spelling too, but the punctuation could use some work. Just a thingy with the commas here and there.
Something I do have to mention, however, is that this story is confusing. Para Dormus and its inhabitants and rituals are complex, making the story a bit messy. Sometimes I had no clue as to what was going on.
Or maybe I'm just really stupid. That's still a possibility.
Overall, if you like fantasy stories (and dragons), I recommend reading this.
Rating: 7!
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