《Book reviews *Requests Closed*》'Sleep paralysis' by disastersinwriting
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Sleep paralysis is a book about... well... Sleep paralysis, of course. What were you expecting?
Abigail suffers from her sleep paralysis, in which she meets monsters from another world, such as Fire-eyes and Sketch-man.
I like the plot of this story, really. This is not what the average person would think of while writing about sleep paralysis. Nice work on the plot.
The characters and monsters are overall likeable. I love Fire-eyes. Fire-eyes is precious.
GPS? Yeah, fine. I don't remember seeing mistakes.
Welp, short review! I don't know what more to say.
Rating: 8.5
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