Okay. Werewolf stories. I rarely read those, you know why?

They're literally all the same. You read one, you've read them all. They all follow the same formula.

"Omg the jerky, abusive Alpha from the rival pack is my mate!!! :("

That's it. Werewolf stories are either that, or something like it. This story is no exception. I'm sorry friend, but you get zero points for originality. Too much clichés.

Hey, what if I wrote a chapter on how to avoid clichés? Who would like that?

To continue, GPS is okay, for the most part. Sometimes weird things happen with tense and grammar, but okay.

Also, what's up with the character names? Another werewolf cliché is that they have strange, supposedly "sexy" names?

Like, how do I pronounce "Aldrich"? All-drich? El-drich? All-drick? El-drick? Or the german way, like I've been doing?

And, uh, Xenia sounds like a name I'd give to an alien warrior from planet Xurg.

I wish I could give a higher rating, but there are just too many clichés.

Rating: 4.5