《Book reviews *Requests Closed*》'The monster within' by Lyssagirl7686
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Clarisse Braeburn, a princess, has been abused by her evil mother for a long time. Can she escape drom her mother's clutches when she gets bethrothed to king Cailean?
Now what does this remind me of? The fantast story with the royal princess as main character. The Runestone Guardians? Forsaken blood?
Kinda cliché, huh?
BUT
From what I've gathered, this story is a retelling of Snow White, the well known fairy tale. I've never seen a snow white retelling like this one, so that makes it less cliché.
The grammar, punctuation, spelling (Gonna call it GPS from now on)? It's flawless, nice going.
The characters are likeable enough. It takes a while to warm up to them, but they are good.
Compliment: Clarisse is obviously kinda traumatized because of what she went through with her mother, and I think you wrote that well (flashbacks and reactions to it and the like)
Not the longst review in the world, but I have nothing else to say. Just read it if you want to read a fantasy book.
Rating: 8.5
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