《Book reviews *Requests Closed*》'Give me light (rewritten version)' by DBauthorSudor
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This story is a fun read... if you're if you're a Christian.
Nicoletta Daniels is a blind girl who goes to a vocal academy and tries to find "the light" through God.
Grammar, punctuation, spelling? Perfect. You did well.
Did you accurately portray a blind person? I dunno, I'm not blind. I think you did that good too.
The story though. The story. This book is only fun if you're a Christian. The whole 'storyline' feels like one big wrapping paper, solely there as an excuse to write about all the goodness of God and the Bible and Christianity. Jeesh. I didn't give a damn about the characters or the plot in this story, it was just a big "all hail Lord Jesus"
It's only further fueling my ambitions to become Queen of Hell someday.
If you're an atheist (like me) or if you're just not Christian (but, eh, a buddhist, for example), you should avoid this story like the plague. You're not gonna enjoy it, trust me.
However, if you're a Christian, you should probably go and read it. It's got good grammar and your friendly neighbourhood God guy, plenty to enjoy.
Rating: 6
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