《Tera Fitoor Jabse Chadh Gya [Completed✓]》Part 21
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After two weeks
Priveer marriage day
All elders present in hall and youngesters went outside except om. He was also present in hall
Jahnavi: Tej tumne kaali ko call kar diya hai na
Om grins: kab tak ayegi Gauri
Tejvi shanky Dadi:😒😒😒😒😒😒
Om in mind: mara
To elders: kab tak ayegi Gauri kab Tak aayegi bhavya kab tak ayenge Kaali uncle kab tak ayengi Komal Aunty. Hehehehe
Tej: arre arre ho gya aane hi vale hain sab
Tejvi shanky went from there
Dadi: oye om putar idhar aa
Om came and sit beside Dadi
Dadi: ek baat puchni thi
Om: ji Dadi boliye
Dadi: aaj kal dekh rhi hun tujhe
Om (cutting her): Dadi aap toh bachpan se dekh rahi ho mujhe
Dadi hits his head: oye khoteya puri gal sunn. Tu aaj kal bahut khush nazar aa rha hai. Koi college me mil gyi kya koi lady professor
Om think about Gauri and smiled: professor nhi Dadi
Dadi: phir Kon
Om came in sense: arre Dadi kya aap bhi jab Dekho shuru ho jati ho
Dadi pinched his ears: abe oye teri jaisi Dadi kisi ko nhi mili. Mai apne poti poton(granddaughter Grandson)
se itna khul kar baat karti Hun aur tumsab ho ki kuch batate hi nhi ho
Om: Dadi aap sabse unique ho sach me
Dadi: Aacha chl ab chupa mat batade kon hai voh khushnaseeb jise tu pyaar karta hai
Om: hai koi waqt aane par sabko pata chl jayega. Wait Dadi wait
Dadi: chl na bata beta. Mai bhi kalyani Singh oberoi Hun pata laga lungi
Om patted her cheeks: ok Dadi aap laga Lena pata ok. Abhi mujhe Jana hai.
Just then kaali komal Gauri and bhavya entered
Om: arre sasu...i mean uncle Aunty
Dadi: aoo bacchon
Om went to them and took blessings from kaali and Komal
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Om: aao bhavya, aao sakshi Richa
Kaali komal and bhavya and rishi went inside
Om came to Gauri: aaiye Mrs oberoi
Gauri blushed went inside and sit beside Dadi
Dadi hugged her: kaisi hai puttar
Gauri smiled: acche hain Dadi aur aap
Dadi: mai toh bahut hi changi Hun
Om came and sit in front of Gauri
Dadi: oye tujhe toh kahin Jana tha na
Om: Dadi mai baad me chla jata Hun Ghar me (eyeing to Gauri) special log aaye hain aur mai aise chla jaun not fair
Bhavya and rishi understand and pinched Gauri: ohho special
Gauri: chup marvayegi Kya
Just then tejvi shanky shivika Rudy priveer and Ranveer parents came
All sat in hall
Komal: Omkara beta Gauri acche se padh rahi hai na pareshan to nhi karti. Itni badi hone par bhi bachpana nhi gaya is ladki ke andar se
All youngsters 😏😏 haan haan bolo
Rikara glared at them
Om: pareshan to bahut karti hai
All youngsters were controlling their smile
Gauri eyes widen
Komal: kyun Gauri
Gauri: ham nhi
Om: jhuth mat bolo
Gauri: accha ham kya karte hain
Om : aunty koi project mango to chaar hafte baad submit karti hai
And notes toh saare incomplete rhte Hain
Gauri in mind: Aacha hamari shikayat karne ka mauka mila hai toh bahut uchal rhe Hain
To om: Aacha sir toh aap hame kuch kehte kyun nhi hamne toh kabhi mana nhi kiya ki hame mat daatiye
Om: tum kaali uncle aur komal Aunty ki beti ho na isliye unhe bura na lage
Komal: nhi mujhe Kyu bura lagega data Karo beta .( To Gauri): tu Ghar chal
Gauri gulps
Kaali: Kya yaar faltu me Meri bacchi ko daant ti rahti ho
Bhavya: papa mujhe bhi dant ti Hain faltu me
Komal glared at her: kyaa phir se bolna
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Bhavya gulps: nhi kuch Nhi hehe
All chukled
All elders were chit chatting and our love birds rikara were busy in staring each other
All youngsters were watching them
Gauri: Aunty hame pyaas lagi hai ham pani pee kar aate Hain
Jahnavi: haan beta
She left
Om was going somewhere
Tej: beta tum Kahan
Om: vv..v.voh dad mai aya ek important call karni thi
He also went to kitchen
Gauri: aap
Om: kyun nhi aa skta
Gauri: nhi aap hi ka ghar hai
Om wrap his hands around her waist and pulled her closer
Om: Mrs Omkara Singh Oberoi yeh aapka bhi ghar hai
Gauri: kya kar rhe hain aap chodiye koi aa jayega
Om: koi nhi aayega
He pulled her more closer
Eyelock 😍😍😍😍 😍
There faces are inches apart
Just then a voice came: kya ho rha hai
Rikara hurridly leaves each other
Om: dad vo
Om saw there was our rudy boy who stands at door and make the voice of Tej
Om slapped him lightly on cheeks: gadhe tune dara diya. Meri toh jaan hi nikal gyi thi. Mujhe laga dad Hain
Rudra: kaisi lagi meri acting bola na mai ekdm Dad jaisa
Om: abe gadhe tujhe apni acting dikhane ke liye ham hi mile the
Gauri left from there
Om: achha khasa mood kharab kar diya ass
At night
In Priyanka's room
Anirivya and rishi were teasing her and helping her getting ready for marriage
Prinku : chup karo yaar tum sab itna tang mat karo ki suhaag raat ke din mai sharma kar Ghar se bahar bhag jaun
All chukled
Prinku: vaise Gauri bhabhi aapka college kab tak khatam hoga
Gauri: agle month exams Hain
Anika: wow Matlab ek aur Shaadi
Gauri: Shaadi kiski
Bhavya: oho Didi aapke college ke bad aap ki aur om jiju ki shaadi hogi
Gauri smiled: chup paglon
After sometime priyanka with all girls come towards mandap
Imagine priyanka 👆
Anika look 👆
Gauri look 👆
Bhavya look 👆
Richa look 👆
Sakshi look 👆
Ranveer look 👆
Shivaay look 👆
Omkara look 👆
Rudra look 👆
Ranveer look priyanka and awestruck by her look
Om snapped his finger: jija ji control
Rudra: aap toh bolo mat O aap phle khud control kar lo. Baat idhar kar rhe ho aur nigahen udhar
Om: shut up rudra stupid
After sometime
Pandit ji: vivah sampan hua
After vidai
Jahnavi: priyanka ki bhi Shaadi ho gyi ab bas omru ki bachi hai. Ab kuch hi maheene me Mai om ki bhi Shaadi tay kar dungi
Om: nhi.. mom mujhe abhi shaadi nhi karni
Jahnavi: na toh tu koi ladhki pasand kar rha hai na hi hame karne de rha hai. Agar tujhe koi pasand hai toh bata de
Om: n.nhi Mai voh.....Jo bhi ho mujhe dobara Shaadi nhi karni
All youngsters glared at him
Om bites his tounge: i..i..m.mean ki abhi abhi toh prinku ki shaadi hui hai. Ghar se crowd khatm hua hai and abhi fir se itne saare log ghar me..mai bardaash nhi kar paunga
Komal: Aacha ham chlte hain
Jahnavi: ji
Kaali komal Gauri and bhavya Left
Precape: Rikara marriage fixed 😍😍😍
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