《Tera Fitoor Jabse Chadh Gya [Completed✓]》Part 7
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Next day
In college
In class
Om: so guys i have to tell you something interesting
Samaira: what sir
Gauri glares her
Om: hamare college me function hone vala hai . So lunch ke baad Jo Jo interested hai auditorium me aa Jana
All nodded
After lunch
All students went to auditorium
Ru: hi O
Om glares at him
Bhav: stupid ye tumhara ghar nhi hai sir bolo
Ru: hi sir
Just then 3 year students came
Om: hello everyone
So i m incharge of Heer-Ranjha play. So i want to select heer ranjha. Kon Kon ranjha ban ne me interested hai?
All boys raise their hand
Om: mujhe kuch dialogue bol ke dikho
All say some shayri
Finally Rudra was selected
Om: so now it's turn of heer .
All students except samaira: sir Gauri is best, Gauri is perfect
Gauri: chup chup
Om: so Gauri aap kuch sunaiye
Gauri: sir hame nhi aati koi shayri
Bhavya: di jhoot mat bolo
Gauri: sir please hame nhi
Om: Gauri please
Gauri (in mind): hamara pati itne pyaar se bol rha hai toh sunana hi padega
To om:
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All clapped
Rikara came in sense
Om clapped and smiled: beautiful
Samaira fumes in anger
Om: so kal se practice start hogi. Script kon likh lega
Samaira: sir mai likh dun
Gauri: sir hame Bhi likhna hai
Om : tum dono likh kar Lana mujhe jiska pasand ayega mai select kar lunga
In Sharma mansion
At night
Gauri was thinking about script
Gauri: bas uss chudail samaira ki script na select ho jaye agar uski script select hui toh ham yeh play nhi krenge
Just then bhavya came
Bhavya: kyaa likha di
Gauri: kuch smjh nhi aa rha kya karen bhavu
Bhav: bas di Omkara bhaiya ke baare me socho jo dil me aaye likh daalo
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Gauri think about their marriage
Gauri: Achha ab tu jaa hame likhne de
Bhavya leave Gauri started writing
Next day
In college auditorium
Om: samaira and Gauri aap dono apni apni scripts dijiye
Om first read samaira's script
Samaira in mind: sir ko meri hi script pasand aayegi
Om : heer:ranjha i love you ranjha: I love you too baby
He control his laugh and started reading again
Om: heer: mere babu ne khana khaya
Ranjha: nhi bacha
Heer: Babu kha lo varna beemar pdh jaoge na
All students control their laugh
Om was continuously reading
Om: saparation scenes
Heer: ranjha my uncle has fixed my marriage in another village
Ranjha: but we love each other baby
Here: baby ab kya karen
Om controlling his laughter: samaira tumhari script acchi hai but English me hai toh sorry
He started reading Gauri's script and Impressed
Om: nice bahut achha likha hai tumne
Gauri smiled shyly: thank you sir
Om: so can we start
Rudra read the script and say
Om: phle separation scene kar lete hain
You have 30 minutes learn the script
After 30 minutes
Om: so you have learned the dialogue feel the pain and start play
Rudra was saying his dialogues and started laughing
Om: rudra Kya hua
Ru: O..I mean sir Gauri Didi hasa rahin Hain
Om glared at Gauri
Rudra again started Reading
Om: Rudy Kya Kar rha hai feel the pain and then say
Ru: sir aap hi ek baar Kar ke bata do na
Om: ok
He went closer to Gauri and hold her shoulders looking in her eyes
Om in husky voice :Bhale hi in aankho ke naseeb me ab tera deedar naa likha ho,Par jab tak ISS ranjhe ka Dil dhadkega uski dhadhkan me bas ek hi naam hoga ......Heer
Om cupping her face: izazat de mujhe ae mere Sanam...bada hi mushkil safar Tay karna hai mujhe....apne pyaar ki salamti ke liye... iss rooh ko jism se juda karna hai mujhe
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Then Gauri place her one hand on his cheek and looked in his eyes
And say her lines
Gauri: tere bina hame salamat nhi rhna....rakh ho jayegi yeh heer iss nafrat ki aag me...jab Tere pyaar ka saaya iss se door ho jayega....nhi qubool mujhe aisi zindagi jisme tera ehsas nhi... tujhe jana hai toh jaa....par jaane se phle mujhe iss duniya se jaane ki izazat dete jaana
All clapped but Rikara were still lost in each other and standing in same position
Rudra came and clapped infront of their faces
They came in sense
Om: nn... nice
Gauri: th.... thanks sir
Om: so next week play hai sab acche se practice karna mai nhi chahta ki koi gadbad ho
All nodded
At night
In OM
Om was sitting on the pool side area
Shivru came there
Shivaay: hii om so kaisi chl rhi hai teri practice
Om: nice
Ru: haan nice toh hogi hi Gauri Didi jo hain
Om: shut up rudra besharm kahin ka student hai meri
Ru: accha dialogues bolte waqt nhi yaad aaya ki student hai
Shiv: what
Ru: haan bhaiya O aur Gauri didi dialogues bolte waqt aise ek doosre me khoye hue the jaise ki ham sab real ke heer ranjha ko dekh rhe Hain
Shiv: really
Om: just shut up rudra. Shivaay yeh pagal hai iski baaton par Dhyan mat de
Shivaay chuckled
Ru: sach sabko kadwa lagta hai O
Om: ab tu chup ho jaa varna
Ru: varna
He came and going to slap rudra but rudra started running he ran behind him . Finally om catch him
Om smirked: ab tujhe kon bachayega
Ru: arre Gauri di aap yahan
Om looked at window
Ru: hahahaha budhu banaya hahaha
Om: tujhe toh Mai (he slapped him lightly on cheeks)
Stupid
They went to their respective rooms and sleep
Om think about today's incident and smiled and slept.
Precape: drunk Gauri
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