《Tera Fitoor Jabse Chadh Gya [Completed✓]》Part 5
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Next day
In Sharma mansion
Kaali: aaj ham sab dinner ke liye mere friend ke ghar challenge
Komal: kon friend
Kaali: arre Tej Jahnavi pinky Shakti yaad hai na tumhe
Komal: haan woh log yahan
Kaali: arre ham sab kitne saalon se yahin hain phir bhi ab tak nhi mile
Kal Mai ek meeting me gaya
Wahan maine Shakti ko dekha usne hame with family dinner par bulaya hai
Komal: achha
In OM
Tej to khanna: aaj special banana hai kuch tum servents ko yeh list dedo aur bolo yehi sab taiyaar Karen
Just then shivomru came downstairs
Shivaay: bade papa yeh sab aaj kuch special hai kya
Jahnavi: arre beta aaj mere pinky Shakti aur inke bachpan ke dost aane vale hain Dinner par with family isiliye
Om: Dad kon bachpan ke dost
Shakti: woh sab kitne saalon se yahin hain phir bhi ham aaj mile. School se college tak ka saath tha ham sab ka kal mujhe meeting me kaali bhaisahab mile jabse maine Tej bhaisahab ko yeh baat batayi hai tab se inse intezar nhi ho raha.
Ru: chote papa aap unhe bhaisahab kyun bol rhe ho aap ke toh friend hain woh
Shakti: arre woh inke aur jahnavi bhabhi ke dost Hain aur unki wife komal meri aur Pinky ki.
Shi: aap kaali sharma ki baat Kar rhe Hain
Tej: haan sharma industries ke Malik Jo ki India ke 2 best company hai
At night
Sharma went to OM
Tej : aa Gaye
They all hugged each other
Omkara in mind: accha Gauri inki daughter hai
Gauri in mind: hey Shankar ji aap kitne acche hain
Tej: kaali tu bilkul bhi nhi badla phle bhi darawna lagta tha abhi bhi darawna lagta hai
Gauri Bhavya and komal laughed
Kaali: aur tu bhi Kahan badla hai mere dost phle bhi mota tha abhi bhi mota hai
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Prishivomru, Shanky jahnavi and Dadi laughed
They take the blessings of elders
Tej: acha chlo sab dinner karte hain
They sit on dining table and started eating
Jahnavi: vaise Gauri ki shadi nhi hui na
Komal: nhi lekin mai soch rhi hun
Food struck in Rikara throat
Anika gave them water
Jahnavi: thik ho om Gauri
Rikara: ji
Khaali: vaise Omkara ki shaadi kab kroge
Tej: mera vas chale toh abhi karva dun
Om: Dad please
Jhanvi: kya please arre hame bhi toh sukh do pota poti ka chehra dekhne ka .
Om: mom
Dadi: kya mom sahi toh keh rhi hai na khud dhundh rhe ho na hi hame dhundhne de rhe ho .
Anika: haan om jldi se Shaadi kar lo aur mere liye khubsoorat si mere hi tarah ekdm khidkitod Devraani Lana
Ru: haan mujhe aur Anika bhabhi ko ek aur crime partner ki jaroorat hai
Om: shut up rudra!
Komal: Mai soch rhi hun ki Gauri ke liye abhi se ldhka dhundhna shuru kar dete Hain
Om looked at komal
Gauri: yaar please mummy hamne kitni baar mana kiya hai ki hame Shaadi nhi karni
Jahnavi: arre komal abhi Gauri ko nhi krni toh kyun jabardasti kar rhi ho
Gauri: aunty aap bahut achhi Hain
Jahnavi smiled
After dinner
Kaali: ab ham chalte Hain
Tej: aaj ruk jaao na itne saalo baad mile hai
Komal: nhi bhaiya ab chalna hoga
Shakti: please yaar ruk jaao bhaisahab please
They agreed
Pinky: prinku tu bhavya ko apne room me le ja Anika tu Gauri ke saath ja aur shivom ek room me ho jayenge
They went
Anika and Gauri were chit chatting
Gauri: bhabhi kitchen Kahan hai
Ani: are tum bolo Kya chahiye Mai le aati Hun
Gauri: nhi bhabhi aap bas direction bata dijiye ham le lenge
Anika: hall se Left side me
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Gauri nodded and went to kitchen
She drank water and about to go but her leg slipped she was about to fall but some one catch her by waist
She closed her eyes in fear
Gauri: Gaye toh aaj. Nhi bach gye
She opened her eyes and saw om was holding her
*Eyelock*😍😍😍
Om broke the eyelock . He make her stands
Om: are you ok
Gauri: ji
Om: Dhyan se chala karo hamesha girti rehti ho
Gauri: sorry. Thank you
Om smiled: welcome and take care
Gauri: ji
Om: ok goodnight
Gauri: good night
He left from there
Gauri to herself: kitne cute lagte hain haste hue hamare jatadhari hippie . Hamesha aise hi haste rahen
She also left from there
Next day
All were present in hall except Gauri
Kaali: achha ham chlte hain
Komal: ek min Gauri kahan hai
Just then Gauri came.
Gauri (sleepy): kahan jaa rhe hain
Bhavya: ghar
Gauri: accha byy milte rehna
Komal: hey bhagwan yeh ladhki fir se need me chlne lagi hai
Tej: kya Gauri need me chlti hai
Hamari Anika bhi need me chlti hai
Komal: arre sab raat me need me chlte hain yeh subhah bhi need me chlte hain
Gauri singing and roaming here and there (actually not singing she was shouting): pehla nasha pehla khumaar naya pyaar hai naya intezar
Priyanka: yeh toh need se jyada nashe me lag rhi Hain
Bhav: jab di need me chlti hai toh woh aisi hi harkaten karti Hain
Om to himself: ajeeb hai
Tej: tum sab jao ham isse baad me bejva denge
All left
Tej: prinku beta isse apne room me lekar jaa
Priyanka nodded she was going to enter in her room but Gauri went to Omkara's room and slept on his bed
Pri: Gauri Didi utho yeh Om Bhaiya ka room hai
Yeh toh so gayi mai ek kaam krti Hun jaa kar Bhaiya ko bol deti hun
She went to om: bhaiya Gauri Didi aapke room me so gayi
Om: mere room me??
Pri: haan bhaiya woh need me aapke kamare me chli gayin woh unhen toh aap bol dena ki mere room me aa jayen
Om: ok mai bol dunga
Om went to his room. He saw Gauri she was looking so cute. Om smiled at her cutness. He saw she was going to fall on floor he went and make her sleep properly
Om: tabhi late hoti hai
After sometime Gauri woke up: Good morning Gauri
Om saw her she also saw him
Gauri: yeh jatadhaari hippie hamare sapne me toh aate hi Hain ab uthne ke baad bhi aa gaye
She came in sense
Gauri: Omkara sir aap hamare kamre me kya kar rhe Hain
Om: ji Gauri ma'am ham aapke kamre me nhi balki aap hamare kamre me Hain
Gauri saw whole room: ham toh Anika bhabhi ke room me the
Om told her everything that happened
Om: tum prinku ke room me chli Jana
She stands from the bed
She was about to go but om holds her hand. Gauri was shocked
Om stood up from chair and come closer to her. She controll her heart beat
Om: tum mujhe jatadhaari hippie bol rhi thi .And what's that???
Gauri: v....vo jatadhaari matlb Jo sir per jata matlb choti banaya rehta hai aur hippie Matlab julfen.Aapke baal lambe Hain aur aap kabhi kabhi apne baalon ki choti banaye rhte hain na to hamare muh se nikal gaya
Om pulled her more closer: aur tumhare sapne me mai aata hun
Gauri: kkk....kya mtlb
Omhold her waist and pulled her more closer she can feel his breath: abhi jo tumne bola ki mai tumhare sapne me
Gauri: hhh....haan voh hamne sapna dekha ki aap hame padha rahe Hain
Isliye hamne bol diya
Ab hame Jane dijiye
Om leaves her
She went from there blushing
Om smiled and went back to his work
Gauri went back to her home
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