《I SAID I LOVE YOU》EK DOOSRE SE KARTE HAIN PYAAR HUM
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TITLE TRANSLATION-We Love Each Other
"Aadi No dont"
"Please angel I promise it will b good"
"No"
"Yes"
"Aadi we don't have much time"
"Angel,Relax,I will make it quick,5 minutes tops..okay?"
Monu stood outside the door with a tray of tea chuckling to himself,Though the door was not locked but he did not dare to go inside,By listening to their conversation he could already imagine,what they were arguing about,He got reminded of all those scenarios which he had to witness when ever he barged into aadi and tara's room,He dont need a repeat of those again,His cheeks turned red due to embarrassment thinking about them.
Suddenly he got back to the world when someone smacked his head.
"Hmm Granny Granpa..Hello"
"Hello Mohith,What the hell you think are you doing?It is wrong to eavesdrop other's conversations,especially they are your anna and vadina...And why are you waiting out?go inside",Nudged Mr.kashyap.
"T-Th-that granpa..They seem to be busy",Monu replied shyly.By now Mrs.Kashyap also put an ear to their door.
"Aadi stupid ..do it faster,Dont you have strength?",came tara's voice.
"But angel I am trying my level best",said aadi huffing and puffing.
Now Mrs.Kashyap also turned beetroot,she dragged away her husband and monu from there,muttering to herself that 'aadi is indeed the king of romance'.
It was a pleasant sunday morning,And they three sat in their living room having their tea,Though it was a small house they were so happy....It has been almost on hour but there was no presence of aadi or tara yet ,Granny and mohith were grinning thinking about earlier situation where as grandpa was going insane seeing them.
"What the hell are you both laughing at from an hour?Have you both gone mad?",Bursted Mr.Kashyap unable to take more.
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"And where are aadi and his angel?I will go call them!",Grandpa said and started going towards their room,ignoring protests of his wife.
They three again reached the room and grandpa was about to knock the door.
"Down",shouted tara.
"No up",came her voice again.
"No down again,pleaseee",she said.
"Wow aadi thank you,It feels so good"..."My pleasure angel".
This time it was the turn of Mr.Kashyap to become a tomato.They three glued their ears to the door,and did not notice until tara came and jerked the door open.They almost fell down but regained their composure.
Tara came out,followed by aadi who was in his shorts and wife beater...Tara looked at three of them suspiciously.."What are you all doing here?",she asked granny,granpa and monu.
To which they three started looking everywhere expect towards aadi and tara,They also started shooing some non existent flies in the air.
By now tara understood something was definitely fishy,She folded her hands "Yes",she demanded an explaination.
"T-that W-we",monu said.."W-we came to i-invite you",added granny saving monu.
"Invite us?",aadi questioned.
"Yes for morning tea",This time it was grandpa.
"Ohh yes!Lets go and have breakfast too,I am so tired ..it was so hard,but the result was awesome",said aadi.
By now,those three stood surprised with their mouths hung open,to hear aadi talking so openly about their private moments.
"Do you want to see it?",Questioned tara.
"WHATTTTTT!!!!",Those three shouted in union,making tara and aadi puzzled.
"What the hell ...Have you kids gone mad,Why would we want to see that?",shouted both granny,granpa.
"Trust us ,we wont mind!",said aadi dragging them into their room.
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"NOOO!",they three shouted and closed there eyes,they slowly opened them to found aadi and tara looking at them quizzically,and slowly they shifted there gaze to find the renovated room,It was covered with their family pictures now.
"You were renovating the room?",Asked monu.
"Yes first I dont want since I thought it would take more time,but aadi said putting these pictures would take 5 minutes tops,but it took a hour",tara stomped her feet.
"Umm....You were shouting to do it faster?",asked granny.
"Oh I was asking to put the nails faster so that we can hang the photos,Aadi doesnot have ounce of strength..he was doing it slowly like a baby"
"Then you were arguing up or down?",it was grandpa this time.
"Ohh that,You see that",aadi said pointing to the big photo above thier bed,"I wanted to put that a little higher,a little up,but angel wants it down",aadi explained.
"Ohh all this time you were doing this?",They three asked.
"Yes what did you think?",questioned aadi innocently.
...............
After a while they were all laughing their hearts out.
"I cant imagine you thought that",said aadi.
"What else can we think... You never leave her alone,you look for a chance to touch her and talk to her. The feelings that passes between you both,you will not even turn your head away from her, You are always behind her...do you need more or is this enough?",monu said and laughed.
"What are you doing here?I thought you would be with nats to support her?",asked tara.
"I am already here",said natasha who was standing at the door and listening to their whole conversation.Later when she was seated everyone started their interrogation.
"How are you holding up?",everyone asked nats.
"Its difficult,But it had been a month already,Its his 1 month death cermony so I attended it and came..but now after listening to you all I feel light"
"Dont worry child... it was a battle between good and bad,and GOOD was bound to win. One side was Mr.Murthy and his anger, jealousy, greed, resentment, inferiority, lies and ego. The other is Aadi and tara and thier joy, peace, love, hope, humility, kindness & truth",said Mr.Kashyap.
"Yes Natasha he died because of his greed.... Greed will always leave you dissatisfied because you'll never be able to get everything you desire. Greed never allows you to think you have enough; it always destroys you by making you strive ever harder for more",said monu consoling nats.
"Even though we had always been poor, he was a happy man and rarely shed a tear. So he found ways to make himself sad so that his tears could make him rich. As the time passed by, so did his greed grow. It ended with him being lonely" ,said granny.
"Yes though he had the whole property his guilt ate him Inside...he felt alone and been left out, full of sadness and loneliness, a feeling that slowly consumed his life and killed him,And it's not your fault natasha",said tara.
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I thought to make it a cute chapter because these days I have been writing so much philosophy in my chapters,In this I thought to reduce my bashan..lol...I dont know how did it turn out!!Please comment your views!
PLEASE REWARD ME WITH VOTES AND COMMENTS :p ...I WORKED SO HARD FOR GIVING TWO CHAPTERS...VOTE AND COMMENT!!
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Sword System Academia
2/17 NOTICE: I'm putting this on hiatus, possibly permanently. I didn't want to spam with an "update chapter", so hopefully here and in the story blurb will get enough eyeballs. There are a couple reasons for ending SSA for now. 1) I wrote the next chapter but wasn't happy with it. I've been less and less satisfied with SSA's quality the more I thought about it. Part of the reason is... 2) I am seriously thinking about trying to publish some novels to help pay the bills, since I don't have my other source of income anymore. I have never asked for anything from SSA readers, no money, not even a review or rating. SSA is written for fun to amuse myself, primarily, and I would kind of feel bad actually charging someone money for something as unserious as that. I don't think it is good enough to ask anything in return. To use an analogy from music, SSA is more like a jam session with a bunch of friends. You're just chiling and having fun playing some music. I mean, if you are Mozart or even Eminem, your jam session is good enough to sell, but for an amateur beginner like myself, haha, no. If I want to publish something, I feel like I need to go the proper route of practice and rehearsals, which might be more similar to a classical concert performance. With SSA, I work from worldbuilding notes and a loose outline, but what you are essentially getting is the first draft with lots of so-called pantsing. Pushing out a web novel like this also means it is very difficult to go back and improve things without breaking everything else downstream. I wanted to try this "jamming" approach, as it was a good way to teach me about another aspect of writing, but to move forward, I think I need to hone my "classical" techniques, which emphasize rewriting, or at least, revising outlines. 3) While I intend to try to make $$$, my actual current goal is to "get gud". I've spent a lot of time recently trying to understand the self-publishing industry, and I'm pretty sure I can make some money by using short-term strategies with my current amateur skill level. But I've seen too many authors come and go/burnout, and really, the only way that I think I can enjoy writing and still make money on a long-term basis is to become a better writer. And the next step for me, which I haven't done much before, is to spend more time on rewriting and outlines. That is pretty much antithetical to the way SSA is developing. I've always been kind of 20/80 plotting/pantsing, but I want to spend a lot more time outlining before I even start writing. SSA jam sessions don't really fit my goal anymore. If you're curious about what's next, read on... Among other regrets, I regret not finishing SSA. It's the first story I've dropped, but then again, it's the first web novel I've attempted, so I suppose that's not a surprise. I don't think traditional web novel formats suit me that well. The whole SSA story I had loosely planned (beyond a first book or major arc) is way too large as well. Big story = good for neverending webnovel with Patreons, bad for penniless and fickle writer like me. I am currently outlining a complete trilogy to another story in great detail. I want the story to end concisely, and I also want the chance to really spend a lot of time on the full outline to spot pacing problems, character issues, lost themes, and so on. I'll still share this story on RR. What I intend to do is finish book 1, flash-publish the whole thing here for a few weeks, then publish on the big Zon. Repeat for books 2 and 3. The upcoming story will be about crafting heroes. The backdrop is an isekai-like setting, where elves will summon humans to their world as heroes, but the whole hero crafting business is still in its infancy. The elven mage researchers are figuring out how to imbue heroes with power, while the heroes are trying to figure out how to use the powers that they gain. Humans are the best hero templates because they are blank and have no intrinsic magic. Or at least that what the elves thought. The human MC has his own secrets... There will be some similarities with litrpgs, but I would call it more a progression fantasy or gamelit story. For example, the stats are very low, at least initially. Say we have a stat called Str. Going from Str = 1 to Str = 2 is a huge deal. Also, going from Dex = 0 to Dex = 1 is an even bigger deal. I guess you could call it a "low-stat litrpg", haha. Also, the heroes won't be gaining stats simply by killing things or leveling up. You can't increase stats arbitrarily, either. There will be rules to how stats can increase, and how they work with each other. The elven mages will be figuring out these rules in order to craft stronger and stronger heroes. Some inspiration will be from cultivation magic systems, but there won't be overt cultivation, at least for now. A theme I really want to explore is the idea of interactions. That includes things like hero crafter vs hero, tactics vs strategy, skill synergies, racial interactions (dwarves, elves, etc), and son. Yeah, so hero crafting. I'm super excited about this project and venturing into publishing. If you want to check out the upcoming story, you can follow my RR author profile to see when it drops here. Finally... THANK YOU TO EVERYONE! I'm very sorry that SSA is stopping, but I hope at least some of you will find the next story at least as enjoyable, if not more. Thanks to all the readers who gave SSA a shot. Big hug or solid fistbump to all of you, whichever you prefer! I hope this message is not a downer but an upper, because I am psyched!! -purlcray -------------- BLURB: Talen, youngest Master of the Koroi, makes his way to the Empire's capital to salvage his clan's fate. 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