《Orphan Girl》Orphan Girl (28)
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Hey guys, chapter 28 right here. its coming to an end.... :((((
I no I’m pretty upset. i was telling my teacher about my story and he thinks I should stop it soon and put it on Amazon, so if you wanted to finish reading it you would have to buy it. I don’t think I could do that though. i dunno, I’m thinking that maybe when it is done ill keep it on here for a little while longer than take it off and post it on Amazon and charge like $1 for it. i dunno. I’m thinking about it.
anyway, tell me if you think it’s a good idea, i need advice.
Thanks everyone for all the support. I'd also like to state the fact that none of my friends have read this. not even my parents. you guys are the first. i told them all once it’s gone ill let them read it, but i also want to get it edited before they do. so if any of you guys know of an editor, or you are an editor and wouldn't mind editing this give me a shout. It doesn’t need much i don’t think, just a few spelling and all that, yeah the usual. hahha thanks so much for reading,
please comment and vote. it would mean the world to me. i was thinking of putting this on the watty awards, so all votes would be amazing!!
SORRY FOR THE POINT OF VEIW CHANGING SO MUCH TOO!! ILY
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Scott’s P.O.V
It had been days since I was locked in here. I was going mental. I hated it here. I swear I could hear her voice. I must be hearing things. I just wanted to see her. I didn’t know how long it had been since I had seen her, but I missed her so much.
I missed the way she smelt. The way she smiled when she didn’t know what else to say. I missed how easy it was to make her blush. I missed her altogether.
I had given up trying to get out. It was pointless. There was no use. If they wanted me out, then they would un chain me. I hate feeling this weak but I didn’t have a choice. I hated knowing that they had Oakley.
I have no idea what they were doing to her. But I can’t imagine it would be pleasant. I can still feel her sometimes, so I guess that’s a good thing. She isn’t dead or else I would feel it. That’s another good thing about our bond. If only I had mated her earlier and I could talk to her through our minds.
There’s nothing I could do. This was how I was going to die. Alone and scared. Not for me, but for the love of my life.
Oakley’s P.O.V
It was dark all day long. I couldn’t see an inch of sunlight. Lucky I had my watch on me so I could see the time. It had been four days now. Four long miserable days since those monsters locked me in here. I was hungry and cold, not to mention bored out of my brains. After a few hours in here I walked around (with my hands in front of my body so I didn’t knock into anything) and tried to see if there was anything interesting in here. I found a little bathroom. A toilet and a little sink. Lucky, there was no way in the world I could last four days without the toilet.
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I wanted them to get it over with. Whatever they were going to do to me, I wanted them to hurry it up. I wanted to see Scott desperately. I knew he was here in this house somewhere. I just had no clue where. I still didn’t get why. I knew what they were going to do to the two of us, but I didn’t understand why.
I sat back down and closed my eyes. I was going to eat my left arm off if I didn’t get food soon. They fed me three pieces of bread and two glasses of water each day. I think I have lost 10 kilograms just being here. It was torture.
***
I was awoken by keys unlocking my chamber door. My head shot up and my eyes searched the dark room. I heard footsteps walking closer towards me but I couldn’t see who it was. God I hated the dark! It was horribly scary.
“Who’s there?” I asked, my voice coming out croaky. I hadn’t used it in a few days. No wonder it hurt to talk.
“I brought you food Oakley.” A soft voice said to me.
“Jason?” I asked, my voice slowly sounding normal again.
“Oakley, please eat it.”
“Why would I eat it? It’s probably poison for all I know. Isn’t that what your trying to do here, kill me?”
“Oakley you have to eat something. I know they haven’t fed you in days. You’re not going to last very longer if you don’t eat. It’s not much, but you need to eat something.”
“I don’t care. I don’t want your food, I just want to get out of here.”
“Oakley please.” He was almost begging now.
“Leave Jason. I trusted you.”
“You still can Oakley, please. It’s still me. I haven’t changed.” Jason looked as if he was going to cry.
I don’t know why he was going to cry. They weren’t keeping him captive and going to kill him. Least I don’t think they were.
“Get out of here Jason.” I whispered.
“Please?” He begged.
I was hungry. The sound that my stomach was making was full proof that I was. Finally I gave in. I moved a little closer to him when more footsteps coming.
“Jason what are you going in here?” Edge roared.
Jason dropped the plate of food and turned around to face Edge. Jason can in here without telling anyone? Maybe he did care.
“I was just giving her the leftovers Edge. You haven’t fed her all day.” Jason looked at his shoes, embarrassed.
“So you went behind my back?” Edge asked taking a step closer to Jason.
He lifted his hand and brought it closer to Jason’s face. Before it could make any contact with I screamed.
“Don’t touch him!” Although I was stuck here and Jason has something to do with all this, he was still my little brother. I promised I would look after him.
Edge looked at me, smiling.
“Oakley, to think I almost forgot you were in here. You’re looking well.” He smirked.
“Seen yourself?” I snapped back.
Edge walked closer to me, pushing Jason to the floor as he tried to stop him. He kneeled down in front of me and lifted my chin with his hand. He forced me to look at him.
“You face is looking a little blue still. Didn’t think it would take this long to heal. What’s the matter with you?” He asked.
I tried so hard not to look at him. His grip was too hard.
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He opened his mouth to speak again but the sounds of chains clinging together stopped him.
“Where was my invite? You’re all in here having a little party and didn’t think of inviting me. That isn’t really nice, is it Oakley?” Jim smiled at me. His smiled still brought chills down in spin, it made me want to run and hide and never be found.
“Jim, I found this is brat trying to sneak her some food.” He nodded towards Jason.
“Jason my boy, what did I tell you?”
“I’m not your boy. I never have been I never will be.”
“I’m the closest to family you will ever had you sad little orphan boy.” He smirked.
“You took me away from my family. I had a perfect life until you came along. For a matter of fact I still have a family too. You are most defiantly not my father, nor my brother of cousin or anything.” He yelled standing up to Jim.
“Your little family didn’t want you; you’re lucky I found you and took you in as my own.” Jim growled. This wasn’t going to end well.
“You didn’t find me, you took me. You took me away from the people I loved. You ruined my life. And I hate you for that.” Jason yelled, tears streaming down his face.
“Get out of here before I do something I will regret Jason I swear.” Jim clenched his jaw tightly.
You didn’t have to tell Jason twice. He looked back at me then ran out the room brushing past Jim on his way out.
“I think I need to teach that boy another lesson.” He shook his head.
“Jim, what are you doing here? I didn’t think you would get back till later.” Edge asked. He finally let go of my chin and he turned his back to me.
“I have things to do here. I couldn’t miss out on tonight.”
Tonight? What was happening tonight? I didn’t even know it was night-time. I didn’t know anything in the real world. Being stuck in a dark room with no communication does get hard sometimes.
“Want me to get him?” Edge smiled.
“Please. While you do that, Oakley and I will have a little chat together.” Jim smiled at me. Edge laughed exiting the room.
It was just Jim and I now. I tried not to show fear. I couldn’t let him see that I was petrified.
He walked slowly towards me and his smile got wider.
“I understand that you have been kept in here for some time now. And I feel terrible about it. So terrible that I got you something. It’s come in soon you better be on your best behaviour. Promise?” He asked.
I nodded; I didn’t understand what he was talking about. I didn’t want anything expect to see sunlight right now.
He suddenly grabbed my arms forcefully and pulled them behind my back. He pulled out the rope from behind his back and tired my wrists together tightly. I tried to shove him off, with all my might but he was too strong. What was the point? He was a werewolf; there was no point in even trying to fight him.
“You need to cooperate Oakley. It’s hurt more if you fight it.” He breathed in my neck.
What the hell was he doing?
A tear of pure fear fell from my eye. I was scared. Terrified even. I didn’t have a single clue what he was going to do, but I knew it wasn’t going to be a walk in the park.
I looked at what was behind him back and gasped. Why did he have chains? I thought he was kidding when he walked in with them.
“This is for your own good Oakley. I’m protecting you.” He opened the lock on one of the chains and locked it on my ankle. He them clipped it to the wall and locked it with a padlock. It was tight on my leg; I could feel it was going to drive me insane.
“I hope you rot in hell.” I said to him as he stood up smiling now at me, proud of what he achieved.
He slapped me.
He slapped me hard across the face, I couldn’t feel anything. The left side of my face was numb. I could feel blood starting to fall. Oh how much I hated Jim.
“Don’t you even talk like that to me Oakley, do you understand? You will respect me.” He yelled. I nodded, so scared to do anything else.
“Jim, I got him.” Edge yelled from the doorway.
“Bring him in.” Jim yelled and my heard started to race even faster than it was earlier.
Bring who in? Not Jason please not Jason! He didn’t do anything. He was a good kid. He was angry before that was it.
Edge walked in with a lifeless body over his shoulder. I saw the back of the body he was carrying and I gasped. I knew that bottom.
“No, no, no, no, no!” I shook my head.
“Put him down.” Jim smiled after seeing my reaction.
Edge didn’t care how he fell. He just dropped him on the floor. He fell with a loud thump.
“Glad you could join us Mr Williams. We wouldn’t want you to miss out on the party.” He smiled looking down at the bloodied body lying almost lifeless on the concrete floor. I couldn’t look. I hadn’t seen him in god knows how long and this is what he looks like? I’m never going to get this image out of my head.
Scott moved his head and took in his surroundings. They automatically stopped when they reached Jim’s.
“My, my Scott. What happened to you? I asked Edge to bring you in. I didn’t think you were in this bad of a state.” He laughed kicking him in the stomach causing Scott to hurl in pain.
“Stop!” I got up, only to fall down again realising I couldn’t go anywhere. My leg was chained to the wall and my hands were tied.
Scott forced his eyes open and he looked at me.
“Oakley?” He whispered.
“Scott.” I replied my whole body shaking. He was here. He was alive. Everything was going to be okay.
“What did you do to her?” Scott growled at Jim.
“Scott, dear I don’t think you are in a position to be asking questions here.” Jim laughed.
“Let her go.” Scott whispered. I think he knew himself that there was no use. He wasn’t strong at the moment. He was hurt.
“What was that boy?” Jim asked kicking him once again. I winced with him. He wasn’t going to last much longer. The poor boy was beaten and blue. Jim was going to kill him if he didn’t stop soon.
“I’ll come and check on you both tomorrow. Sleep tight Scott.” Jim smiled at me them once again kicked Scott in the head. Scott eyes where closed as he fell unconscious.
“SCOTT!” I yelled trying to get up again. I fell right back down on my stomach and cried.
He was too far away, and he wasn’t responding to me. That’s why I was tied up.
Bastards.
***
Scott’s P.O.V
I heard a door open. Finally I was going to die of starvation soon. I was so hungry. My thoughts were on Oakley. If they were barley feeding me, imagine what she was getting? I couldn’t imagine her any skinnier. They wouldn’t be feeding her here, so she would even more fragile now. It hurts to think about her, but it’s the only thing that getting me through the days here.
Edge walked through the door and I groaned. Not him again. He came in empty handed. So he defiantly wasn’t here to feed me.
“You getting out of here today.” He smiled.
“What?”
“Do you seriously want me to repeat it? I’m getting your out of this room.”
“I don’t want to.” I shook my head.
“Excuse me?” Edge laughed.
“I’m not leaving this place without Oakley.” I snapped.
“I didn’t mean you were getting of the house idiot. I meant this room. You’re getting an upgrade.”
“What?”
“I honestly thought you were smarter than this Scotty boy. Are you really going to make me repeat myself once again?” He asked.
“Where’s Oakley?” I demanded.
“I’m going to take you to her.” He smiled.
I couldn’t trust him. I didn’t believe that he would just give in and take me to her after all this time keeping us apart. It was too good to believe.
“Why?”
“Why not? I didn’t think you would have argued to see you beloved girlfriend again. I expected you to jump up ready and packed the minute it left my mouth.” He proclaimed.
He was right. I should be the happiest man right now. I get to see Oakley after how many days. Why did I still think this was some sort of trap? A big set up that will only get one of us hurt.
“Get up.” Edge snapped.
I looked at him like he was the biggest idiot.
“Do you think if I could get up I would have a long time ago?” I snapped. I was probably in no place to be talking to him like this. But when he messed with my family. They mess with me. And that’s not cool.
Edge was now shaking. His whole body filled with rage. His face turning redder by the minute. I had seen this before. It was a human’s worst nightmare.
All his anger was getting to his head. He was turning into a werewolf right in front of me.
I was stuck, chained to the floor. This was not good.
Before he had changed completely he ripped his clothes of and burned my eyes. I don’t think I can ever get this image out of my head even if I tried.
Screaming, there was no longer a man in front of me, but a big growling, black werewolf. My heart started to race.
I wasn’t normally worried about wolves. I was Alpha’s son. Therefore I was already stronger than any other wolf.
But not today. I tried to shift as the wolf came closer to me, but it was no use. I tried so hard. That dam liquid was still in my system. How long does it take to get out?
With my back straight, I waited. I waited to be shredded to pieces. It was only a matter of minutes before I was.
Edge came closer to me and snarled. He was still anger. Looking for revenge. I knew why they had taken us. Oakley especially.
It’s not like it was her fault though. It was her mongrel of a father who should be suffering instead of her. She didn’t do anything wrong. That’s what Jim doesn’t understand.
Unexpectedly Edge lunged at me and bit my arm, he was digging into the skin hitting all the right nerves.
Shouting in pain, I begged him to stop. What else could I do?
After giving up I realised that he wasn’t going to chew my arm off he lashed out and with his claws scratched my stomach, ripping my top along the way.
There was blood everywhere. I couldn’t do anything about it though. My arms and legs were tied down.
This made me wonder if they were doing the same to Oakley. She wasn’t as strong as me. The poor girl is too fragile to even see something like this. It was Oakley who kept me going. I wasn’t going to pass out and I most defiantly wasn’t going to die.
If I died today she would be stuck here. Tyler wouldn’t know where so was. She would be forever a slave to Jim Kelang. There was no way in the world I was going to let her suffer like that.
I held through all the pain. Edge slashed at me many more times. He kicked me multiple times and didn’t have any shame to bite me in all sort of different places. At this point I was sweating. It was hard to keep my eyes open. I felt so weak and useless. I was tired. I had lost so much blood.
I could hear bones cracking. Thank god this was over. He was changing back.
I didn’t want to open my eyes. I had already seen him naked once. I didn’t need to see him like that again. Not a pretty sight.
“Scott Williams isn’t as tough as people say he is?” Edge laughed.
I looked up at him. I didn’t want to waste my breath on him. If he wasn’t kidding about taking me to Oakley then I wanted to save every last breath I had to talk to her.
“Come on them Scotty, let’s go see you lovely Oakley. She’s not in as bad as shape as you, don’t worry.” He smirked. Dirty dog.
He unclipped the locks around my hands and feet, and I could actually feel my feet. I wiggled my toes and breathed a small hasty breath of relief. I still didn’t think I would be able to walk anywhere though. Not after that beating I couldn’t.
Without being able to heal quickly like my werewolf can, this was going take awhile for me to be back to normal again.
“You’re weak Scott. You can’t handle a little knock around, what makes you think you will be able to take on Jim and win your little Oakley back? There is no way you will win this battle mate. You’re done for.” He smiled looking deep into my eyes.
Dam I hated this guy.
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