《Unburnt》Chapter 4 III
Advertisement
Chapter 4
Part 3
Fine.
It was a pretty good speech.
Iroza nodded graciously as the nobles muttered their appreciation among themselves.
More impressed and awed looks from the suckups and groupies.
He avoided scowling when a few mutters made it through the noise.
Yes, he was coming in second to his sister.
Was it still impressive to be up for mastery at so young?
Also yes.
So they could all go fuck themselves.
Rama went on, either not noticing or wisely deciding not to.
"To that end," he said, quieting the crowd with a look. "I am pleased no, honored to announce that his grace, Prince Iroza, will be joining the ranks of Wan Bhing's military in an official capacity. By my authority as both General and Governor of Wan Bhing, Prince Iroza will receive the highest honor I can bestow."
He gestured to Iroza, and the crowd hung on his every word with bated breath.
The guy knew how to play a crowd.
Even Iroza was a little excited, though he tried not to look like it.
Then Rama kept talking.
"Please join me in welcoming Prince Iroza, Supreme Royal Adjutant of Wan Bhing!"
There was a lot of applause.
In the back of his mind, Iroza vaguely remembered to smile and raise his glass.
Look pleased, Iroza.
Look genuinely surprised, Iroza.
Don't mess up this moment, Iroza.
This was all for you, after all.
How annoying was it that his sister was the nagging voice of reason in his head?
Very annoying.
Not to mention ironic.
He said several words of thanks to General Rama.
Humbled and honored.
That sort of thing.
He assured the nobles that he would do his best to serve Wan Bhing and combat the forces of Earth Kingdom.
Something along those lines.
Advertisement
He wasn't really focused on it.
Wasn't really paying attention.
At the exact moment Rama had said those words, Iroza had narrowed his eyes.
It was a minor lapse.
Just a teensy slipup.
His facade was forgotten for a brief few seconds before he remembered to smile again.
His mind had been transfixed on those words, and the way Rama had said them.
Supreme.
Royal.
Adjutant.
Huh.
It was almost funny, how little those words meant when strung together like that.
Ha.
Haha.
Iroza smiled and looked pleased and thanked Rama and assured the nobles.
He did all of those things, and as he did them he quickly scanned the room.
It couldn't be an obvious scan.
His demeanor meant that he appeared as though he was looking around in shock or bewilderment.
He laughed once or twice in that 'too excited to speak' way, and a few nobles chuckled.
Including Rama.
As he looked around, he took in the faces of anyone of any sort of importance.
Their expressions.
Were they surprised?
Were they acting surprised?
Were they paying any attention at all?
He looked for the obvious first, with his limited time.
Knowing smiles.
Disinterested glances.
Amused looks.
Frowns.
Anything he could pick out.
Above all, anyone who looked smug, or pleased in an annoying way.
Like they had gained something or seen something through.
Nothing.
Nothing.
Nothing.
Despite himself, his heart was speeding up a bit.
Rama looked pleased, and he had no subtlety at all.
Could that be a ruse?
It was clever if it was one.
Pretend to be the bumbling fool, while keeping a sinister nature out of sight.
A classic.
Almost trope-like.
The nobles all looked as they ought to, from his quick glances.
Fuck.
This wasn't ideal at all.
He briefly met eyes with Mai, who wore the slightest of frowns for a few seconds before her expression went blank.
Advertisement
She looked right at him, gave a brief shake of her head, and then looked down at her plate.
So she hadn't seen anything either.
Damn.
His cursory scan of the room took only a handful of seconds, and it ended before he was satisfied with it.
But it wouldn't do at all to stay excited and overwhelmed, even if it gave him longer to look around.
Bad for appearances.
So.
Not a lot to go on.
But alarm bells were screaming in his head.
Nobody was acting like this was an insult.
Or a strange position for fucking royalty.
They were all cheering and many of them would likely be very drunk by the end of the night, which wasn't far off.
He mouthed the title again, making sure his eyes didn't look so dead as he did.
Supreme Royal Adjutant.
A nothing title with no authority to speak of.
From his limited knowledge, an adjutant was just an assistant.
It wasn't actually a position within the established military chain of command Fire Nation used.
It was a side thing.
A secretary role in service of senior officers, but called something different.
Not a combat role.
Not a leadership role.
An assistant role.
Either this was his father's doing, or something strange was going on.
Iroza thought about it, then tilted his head.
As much as his father hated him, and may not want Iroza earning any acclaim of his own, there was absolutely no way he would suffer his blood being saddled with an assistant title.
He would consider it a grave insult.
For that reason alone, Iroza was a little tempted to say nothing and play along.
But that was the thing.
It wasn't Ozai.
Couldn't be him.
Ozai didn't do subtle.
And he was too proud for this sort of thing.
Too wrapped up in his own family's legend to risk debasing it like this.
No.
This was something else.
Someone else, tampering somehow.
That, more than the title itself, was the most concerning part of all this.
Iroza breathed out slowly, relishing the heat that simmered beneath his skin.
A reflex.
For now, he let the heat recede and fade out. Returning to the moment and leaving his many thoughts for later, Iroza joined back in on the trite conversations with a smile.
A genuine one, this time.
He couldn't help it.
Something interesting had finally happened, and he was overjoyed.
Advertisement
- In Serial347 Chapters
The Menocht Loop
Ian Dunai thought he was powerless. He’s not alone: only a small percent of the population have high enough affinities to perform magic. But in the eyes of his father’s gifted family, Ian’s impotence is a disgrace—and the stain of his mother’s common blood. But on one fateful day, Ian awakens not in his college dorm but in the middle of the ocean on an old dinghy. Reaching land is the least of his problems as he encounters risen skeletons, tortured captives, and a shoreside city in the throes of contagion. Ian doesn’t last very long without magic. But death isn’t the end: Ian wakes back up on the dinghy and relives the day again...and again...and again. As Ian investigates the purpose of the loop and a way to escape, he begins to realize that he might be more powerful than anyone—especially himself—ever imagined. Release schedule: 2 chapters/week (Mon/Fri at 11:30 AM EST). Book 1, The Menocht Loop, is complete at ~100k words (~370 pages; chapters 1-41). Book 2, The False Ascendant, is complete at ~110k words (chapters 42-83) Book 3, The Eldemari's Wrath, is complete at ~145k words (chapters 84-143) Book 4, The Samsara Crucible, is complete at ~165k words (chapters 144-211). Book 5, The Seed of Chaos, is ongoing (chapters 212 and on). Constructive criticism welcome. Join the discord. Vote on Top Web Fiction! View the wiki. Cover art by the very talented Jeff Brown. (Higher res version here; 3840 x 2400 ultra high res wallpaper version here)
8 12459 - In Serial20 Chapters
Genesis - A LitRPG modern day cultivation story
The Grand Lotus Empire's Dynasty has risen with the rise of modern Technology. Its Scientists and Engineers have paved the way for a prosperous Populus. The Empires Generals leading their armies subduing wild lands and beast alike. The emperor himself has forced law and order upon the world’s sects ushering in the age of Corporate Sects. Cultivation has become available for the most common of people. Still the Sects push their influence on the world, but now they do it with advertising and education. In the Empire people cultivate mana pushing forward their concept. Every individual is born with a concept and idea that defines their cultivation. To apply your concept upon the world is the purpose of every Cultivator. Some use it in their everyday life, making art, using it in construction. Yet still the most prestigious use of your concept is to push yourself further on the path of Martial Arts and ascend the heavens. Although the Empire is safe and people live in peaceful days, the threat of monsters, demons, and beasts of the wild are undiminished. The armies and generals stand vigilant on the borders of civilization. Excursions made of sect disciples regularly set out to acquire rare resources such as the corpses of mana beasts, rare minerals, or strange plants. In this world were political intrigue clash with scientific research and traditional martial arts, Jade Saelee lives a pretty ordinary life. Like all the common people she mostly tries to survive and maneuver the attention of the government and sects. Her adoptive Mother, Mara, is a junior Alchemist in a minor local sect. The only uncertainty in her life is her origins. Abandoned as a babe she was left on Mara's doorstep. Her only possession an awakening stone left with her in her crib. Today is the day of her awakening ceremony, what concept will she awaken to, will she get her quiet life?
8 126 - In Serial15 Chapters
Tales of the Legendary Scholar
They meet in the most unlikely moment and turned their life around. Freidrech newly arrived in his own nation's capital city, which is so foreign to him compared to his village's idyllic and nondiscriminatory atmosphere, after he is forced to come. Now, he is facing a royal prince and tells him to bow. This draws out one of his late father's teachings from the deepest recesses in his mind. "The blood of your great ancestors runs in your veins. Don't easily bow down to anyone, or accept suppression by any being, not even from a monarch, unless you pledge your allegiance to him. Also, giving in to oppression is directly telling the oppressor that you're easy prey and open for manipulation." He is uncertain on how to face this oppression right now. Will he bows or not? What will he do to uphold his father's words while keeping his life safe? As for the prince, Theodrech has nothing to do with Freidrech, so he wishes to let this slip, but the boy opens his mouth and proposes the most ludicrous challenge he ever heard and triggers his curiosity. "I, Freidrech Goederf Gerboud, son of the late Village Chief Louvel Gerboud of Wrilon, will challenge you, Your Highness, to a battle of riddles… If you win, I will not only bow but be your servant for the rest of my life." This amuses the prince. It is the first he met a boy of the same age who is not intimidated by the air of authority he projects. Rather, this boy challenges him. "Why are you so headstrong? In fact, bowing to me is an honor. You saw the King's noble Knights. When they saw me, they bowed," says Theodrech, testing Freidrech. "Allow me to be forward, Your Highness. For me, bowing to a monarch does not guarantee loyalty. If I were you, I rather have men who stand straight in my presence but who got my back, than bowing men who are dreaming of my death," replies Freidrech. The prince’s curiosity increases. A huge smile is seen on his face. Prince Theodrech decides to take Freidrech under his wing. Little did they know, this boy who Prince Theodrech takes in as his confidant and friend in the most ridiculous fashion is someone indispensable in his life and the one who can help him succeed the throne when he almost believes he has lost. Thus, the Tales of the Legendary Scholar begins. ------ o ------ Old Synopsis: A famous ancient adage stated, behind a successful man is a woman BUT… In these lands, the monarchs are seeking not a woman to stand behind them but the man hailed as the Legendary Scholar. However, this legendary figure starts off in life as a youngster of humble birth, a newly orphaned lad named Freidrech, who courageously faces the high-strung aristocrats and big-bellied bureaucrats in the kingdom.He is held in contempt as unscholarly, ignorant, and a plebeian from the hinterlands.But he proved them wrong.Not with an iron-clad fist of which he has none, but with his studious nature, ingeniousness, courage, wit, and honesty. Also, with the assistance of two ousted beings: a former aka 'great wizard', and a burly fairy. Follow Freidrech’s adventures, on how he wins the heart of the future king of Xaeviel, befriends outlaws, prevents the people from being slaughtered from an unknown plague, rerouting the enemies’ attacks when reinforcements are denied, secures Prince Theodrech’s claim to the throne in the midst of utter despair, and many more.
8 237 - In Serial47 Chapters
Kyra (Completed)
To think it all started with a broken ankle and a pair of keys...#1 Urban - March 2020#1UrbanNovel - April 2021
8 74 - In Serial23 Chapters
Hero Of Olympus
My name is Perseus Jackson. I am a demigod son of Poseidon. I woke up in the middle of a forest covered in snow. I have no idea where I am. All I know is that some god has messed with me... again.I end up meeting a bunch of all powerful beings who cause my nose to bleed.You know... my life.
8 182 - In Serial6 Chapters
Left Broken
Addison Carter is a 23-year old working woman. She is a CEO of a huge advertising company as well as a single mother and she's proud of it. Her daughter Cassidy is the most precious thing in the world for her. But Addison is slowly mending herself from a past that had left her heartbroken. But when Landon Spencer, the famous actor and playboy comes to her company, all hell breaks lose. The past she had, comes crashing back to her and she fears her half mended heart will shatter once more. Read on to follow the crazy ride of Love, Family, Heartache and True Love.
8 60

