《New year or New life?! (COMPLETED)》👩❤️💋👨First Night 🌙
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Veer and Bani are talking with their family when Veer was impatiently waiting for Bani to stop her conversation and take a decision to go their room. Jai saw Veer making annoying faces. Jai thought to ask him.
Jai:Veer😊....
Veer:Haan. Oh Jai tum. 😇Hmm bolo.
Jai:Kya hua tumhe? Aisi lagta hai you are🤨 not comfortable.
Veer:Aisa kuch 🙃bhi hai yaar.
Jai:Bolo na 🙂kya baat hai?
Veer:Yeh log sab kab mujhe jaane😏 denge?
Jai:Kisi ne tujhe roka🤔?
Veer:😐Nhi.
Jai:Toh kyu ho wahan jahan jaana hai😑 jao.
Veer:Room jaana 😁hai.
Jai:Thik hai 🙄jao.
Veer made faces.
Jai:🤨Ab kya?
Veer:Itni baatein karna 😐zaroori hai kya woh bhi iss raat ko.
Jai:Arrey tum aisi bol rahe ho jaise tum un sab ka baatein🤭 sunn rahe ho. Tum ne ab tak kuch nhi suna na?!
Veer:Haan😶 nhi suna.
Jai:🤗Jao aaram karo.
Veer:Nhi mujhe aaram ki 😑zaroorat nhi hai.
Jai:Tum ziddi bacchon ki tarah kyu behave kar rahe🙄 ho?
Veer:Shut 😬up!
Jai:Acha ab bataoge bhi tumhe kya😑 chahiye?
Veer:Dekho baad mei mat kehna ki mai aisi baatein kar raha 😒hoon....
Jai:🙃Bol na.
Veer:Mai warning⚠️ de raha hoon.
Jai:Batao toh 🙆🏻♂️sahi.
Veer:☺Pakka Milega na?
Jai:Zaroor par pehele tum batao kya🤦🏻♂️ chahiye?
Veer:Tumhari behen❤!
Jai:Kya😳?
Veer:Hee hee😁....woh mai bore ho raha hoon in sab ke saath reh kar inki😬 baatein sunn kar isi liye agar if guys permit us hum apni 🥰first night manayenge.
Jai:Tum...🙉yuck!
Jai closed his ears. Veer's expressions changed. Veer pulled his hands.
Veer:Oye! Kya 😠yuck? Huh?
Jai:Kaisi baatein karte ho yaar 🤢tum woh bhi mujhse....
Veer:Kya? Maine pehele🖐🏻 warning diya tha.
Jai:Mujhe kya 😫pata tum aisi baatein karne wale ho....
Veer rolled his eyes.
Jai:Woh 🤕meri behen hai....
Veer:Hello teri sirf behen😑 hai par woh meri sweetheart❣, gharwali💘, love💙....
Jai:Gharwali🤨?
Veer:Haan meri 😍biwi hai.
Jai:Kahan se laate ho aisi naam? Google mei 🤔dhoondte ho kya?
Veer:Nhi bas 😉thoda sa dimaag use karta hoon. Lagta hai tera paas woh 🤭nhi hai.
Murmured the last line.
Jai:Sunliya hai Maine😐
Veer was shocked.
Veer:Kahin punar janam mei bhai behen dono 😲naag naagin tho nhi the?
Jai:Kya bakwaas kar🤦🏻♂️ rahe ho yaar?
Veer:Nhi meri sweetheart ki kaan bhi bohot sharp hai waise tum uska bhai hai so us 😏mei 20% percentage toh Banta hai tere liye.
Jai's palm on his face. Veer was drooling over Bani. Jai saw him.
Veer:Oye...Teri behen bohot khubsurat 🧡hai yaar.
Jai:Veer please bas karo 🙏🏻aur yeh baatein....agar tumhe aisi baatein karni hai mai sunne 🙉nhi wala hoon.
Veer:Acha😃 ek baat puchun?
Jai:😶Puch kya hai?
Veer:Meri sweetheart🤨 tumhari hi behen hai kya?
Jai:Huh? Kya 🧐matlab?
Veer:Meri biwi ko kahin se utha🤔 kar toh nhi leke aaya tumhare gharwalo ne?
Jai:Hey kaisi baatein 🙊kar raha hai yaar?
Veer:Arrey bol na....Sach bol kahin se utha kar leke 🙄aaye ho na meri sweetheart ko.
Jai:Nhi...meri hi behen hai woh😞
Veer:Jhoot😏 mat bol.
Jai:Tujhe yeh doubt kyu🙆🏻♂️ aayi?
Veer:Woh kitni sweet hai cute🥰 hai pyaari😍 hai par tumhare ghar mei koi bhi aisi nhi hai. 🤩Na hi tu na hi mera sasur.
Jai:Maa ka😑 kya?
Veer:Nhi. Meri sweetheart 😏ki tarah koi nhi hai tumhari family mei.
Jai:Kuch🙄 bhi....
Veer:Udhar dekh us 😘lehenga meri sweetheart pe kitni awesome hai aisa lagta hai woh 🥻lehenga khaas kar ke mere sweetheart ke liye banaya hai.
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Jai:Kuch toh sharam kar 😖saala hoon mai tumhara. Mere saamne meri behen ke baare 🙉mei aisi waisi baatein kar rahe ho.
Veer:Kaha na mai 😻uska pati hoon. Aur yeh kya bolte jaa rahe ho tum? Tu aisi baat kar raha hai jaise aaj 😉tak tune Sanaya ki khubsurati ki tareef hi nhi ki.
Jai was silent. Veer was shocked.
Veer:😲Seriously? Bhai behen dono ek jaise hai....fully unromantic😒
Jai:Bas kar 😬na.
Jai was about to close his ears again but Veer didn't let him Veer held his hand.
Veer:Pata nhi kaisa pyaar hai tumhara? Pata😏 nhi tumhari marriage life kaise hoga?
Jai:Bas bas bas please🙏🏻 Veer.
Veer left him.
Veer:Unromantic🙄 family!
Veer went to Bani and held her by her hip.
Veer:Come on Sweetheart💗 let's go.
Ponky:Bhai 😑yeh kya hai hum baat kar rahe the na.
Veer:Nhi Bani mere saath aa rahi hai aur hum baat nhi karenge🥰 hum bohot kuch karenge.
Daksh:Bhai....sab hai🙅🏻♂️....idhar.
Bani:Apni 🙍🏻♀️bakwaas band karoge tum?
Veer:Arrey sone💤 ko keh raha hoon....
He makes fake yawning.
Veer:Mujhe neend aa rahi 🥱hai.
Daksh:Hmm pata hai humhe bohot achi se aap kiss ke 😆baare mei baat kar rahe hai.
Ponky:Toh chal jaa ke so jaiye na😐 bhabhi kya aap ko Lori sunayegi?
Veer:Miya biwi kuch😠 bhi kare tujhe kya?
Ponky:😒Mujhe kya? Jaiye.
Veer:So sweetheart💞 shall we?
Monil came to Ponky and whispered something in his ears. Veer was about to go.
Ponky:Veer 😊bhai wait.
Veer:🤨Ab kya?
Ponky:Just a second😄
Veer:Kya hai😶?
Ponky:Ek suprise hai🤩
Veer:Suprise really? You could do😂 suprise too?
Ponky:Veer bhai😉 trust me you will love it.
Veer:Fine 🙃bol kya hai?
Ponky:Nhi dikhaunga😁?
Veer:Hmm dikha😇
Ponky:👉🏻Toh aaye mere saath.
Veer:Hmm🙂
Ponky lead them to their room.
Veer:Yeh mera room😑 hai.
Ponky:😃Yeah exactly.
Veer:Sweetheart😕 why were you ignoring me from morning?
Bani:Ignore? 😯Mai? Nhi toh....you were the one who didn't come to see☹ me.
Veer:You and mom were🙁 the one who didn't let me.
Bani:🤨Seriously? Tum aisi kyu bol rahe ho jaise tum🤭 sab ke baat sunte ho?
Veer:Par iss Daksh ne mujhe bhar 😔bhi nhi aane di.
Bani rolled her eyes.
Veer:You 🙁could have came right?
Bani:Monil and Ponky 😞doesn't let me come to you.
Veer:🤨What?
Bani:Haan....sab in👉🏻 dono ki chaal hai.
Veer:Chaal🙄?
Bani:Yeah they locked me🙁 inside.
Veer:In🤨 our room?
Bani:No in guest room ☹they said you are in our room.
Veer:Nhi. I was in 😮another guest room.
Bani:What? 🧐They why didn't they let me to our room that too to get a 😐clip from my bag.
Veer:They said me that 😶you were in our room.
Bani:No I was 🙁not!
Veer:😠Daksh Ponky Monil.....
Daksh:Bhai Maine subah kaha na... pata nhi yeh Ponky aur Monil😐 kya kar rahe hai. Bas un dono ne aap ko guest room mei lock karne🔒 ke liye kaha aur Maine ki bas...mujhe iss ke aage pata nhi.
Veer:Un dono 🤨ne kaha aur tune ki?
Daksh:Bhai mera kya galti hai us ne kaha aap ko suprise karna 🙃hai isi liye help ki.
Veer:🤨Hmm....Monil Ponky.
Monil:Ji bhai😁
Veer:Explain😑....
Monil:Woh hum nhi badi ma ne kaha aap dono ko nhi milna 😃chahiye.
Veer:Oh🤨 really?
Ponky:Nhi bhai aap 😀ko suprise dena chahta tha.
Veer:Acha bol 😇kya hai?
Ponky was excited.
Ponky:Apna room kholo🤩
Veer opened the room he was shocked.
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Veer:Kya 😲hai yeh?
Ponky:Aap ko acha 😔nhi laga?
Veer:Kis ne ki🤨?
Monil:Ponky aur mai😕
Veer:Wah! Zindagi mei peheli baar tum dono ne kuch🤩 acha kaam kiya.
Ponky:Aap ko acha 🤔laga?
Veer:😊Bohot.
Ponky hugged him jumping.
Ponky:Thank you😍 bhai.
Veer:Arrey 😇thank you Mr.Pankaj.
Ponky:I am happy🥰
ROOM DECORATION.
Monil:Bhabhi aap ko acha 🙄nhi laga?
Bani:Bohot acha hai....thank you removing the🤭 black curtain and bedsheets.
Ponky:I was fearing what if incase Veer bhai ko acha nhi laga. 😞Because everything is in white and red.
Veer:Acha hai par😕 roz aisi nhi hota na.
Ponky:Toh roz hum aake aap ke room😲 decorate karun?
Veer:Haan free toh ho na🙃 har din karo.
Ponky:Hum ne yeh sab isi liye ki kyu ki aaj aap ki special👩❤️💋👨 day hai.
Veer:Toh kya hua....har din special😉 banayenge haina sweetheart.
Ponky:Woh toh pata hai😒
Murmuring.
Bani:Sunliya😑 hai maine.
Monil:Bhabhi ka kaan bohot 🙊sharp hai.
Veer:Acha woh sab chodo aur tum teeno bahar niklo☺
Ponky:Huh! Aise kon baat 😐karta hai.
Monil:That 😶was rude Veer bhai.
Veer:Jaaoge ya Dhaka de🤨 ke bahar nikalun.
Bani:😬Veer....
Daksh:Impatient😂 uncontrollable Veer bhai.
Monil:Chalo sab chalte🙃 hai.
They all left.
Veer closed the door Bani was about to go but Veer pulled her by her hand and pinned her to the door.
Bani:Veer yeh😑 kya kar rahe ho tum?
Veer:🥰Romance....nhi....Love❤....puri raat karunga aur ab toh Maine shuru bhi nhi ki par tum 😚abhi se complaint karne lagi ho.
Bani:Veer😶.....
Veer:🤫Shh....
He kissed her forehead.
Bani:Veer let me 🙃change.
Veer:Hmm🙂
Bani:Par mera 🙄bag?
Veer:🤨Kidhar hai?
Bani:Jai bhaiyya ke paas😕
Veer:Waise bhi kya farak padne wala hai sweetheart🥰 dress ho ya na ho.
Bani:Chi...band karo🙉
Veer:Arrey kya? Sach toh hai. Aaj first night😍 hai humara.
Bani:Veer please 🙊na band karo.
Veer:Thik hai par sab toh honewala hai itna sharmane😉 ki zaroorat nhi hai sweetheart💚
Bani:Veer....tumse baat karna🤦🏻♀️ bekhaar hai.
She pouted being angry. He pecked her pout.
Bani:☹Veer...
Veer:Kya hua😦 Sweetheart?
Bani:Dress uncomfortable😣 hai.
Veer:Koi baat nhi 🤗mera dress pehelo.
Bani:😳Tumhara?
Veer:Haan. 😇Come.
He gave her one of his favorite shirt.
Veer:Go and change😍
Bani:Par🙄....
Veer:🥰Jao na.
Bani went to the bathroom changed to the shirt. Bani sneaked her head out of the washroom when Veer was busy in scrolling his phone.
Bani:Veer🙃.....
Veer saw her. She was just having her head out.
Veer:Kya hua hai🤨 sweetheart? Bahar aao na.
Bani:Veer yeh bohot short hai🥴
Veer was confused he couldn't understand what she was saying.
Veer:Kya? Mujhe kuch 😐samajh mei nhi aa raha hai.
Bani came out and Veer went to la la land.
Veer:You look 🔥hot sweetheart.
Bani:☺Thank you.
Veer went near her and caught her waist pulled her more close. Bani's hand was in his chest. Veer bend his head and pulled her face up.
Veer:Yeh shirt tumpar 😍bohot jajti hai.
Bani blushed looking down.
Veer:Uff! Jaan 😉lene ka iraada hai kya?
Bani:😕Veeranshu....
She closed his mouth. He kissed her hand. Bani took her hand and looked the floor blushing.
Veer:Itna Blush mat karo💓 sweetheart.
Bani turned to go but her hair struck with buttons in Veer's kurta.
Monil and Ponky were passing Veer's room they heard Bani's voice.
Bani:Ouch...😖ahh...
Veer:😨Bani...
He went closer and pulled her more closer so that she won't feel any sort of pain.
Ponky:Oh! 😉
Monil:Chal chalte 😐hai.
Ponky:☺Nhi.
Ponky smirked and went near the door and kept his ears.
OK I AM REALLY SORRY FOR THE UPCOMING. BAS THODI SI.....NHI..... BOHOT MAZAAK KARDI MAINE. GALLI MAT DENA.
Bani:Veer it's😓 paining. Aahh....
They are in back hug position.
Veer:Wait wait don't 🙌🏻move I will get it done.
Veer was slowly pulling her hair from the button.
Bani:Veer....🥵please....ahh.....Vee...er...
Veer:Umm sweetheart 👍🏻wait....
He was concentrated on it as it must not give any pain for her.
Bani:😣Veer please slow....
Veer:Not more slow🤷🏻 than this sweetheart.
But still it was paining.
Bani:Ve...er🥺....uff!
Veer:Fine baby😚....I am slow....
Bani:Hmm😫....Ahh Veer!
Finally he pulled them out and removed his kurta.
THIS WAS THE PRECAP. I AM SORRY FOR THIS BAKWAAS.
Ponky was blushing hearing this when Monil was clueless.
Monil:Kya kar 🤨raha hai?
Ponky:🤫Chup!
Monil:Arrey Chi kya kar 🤢raha hai tu?
Daksh passed by. He saw them standing there and came to them.
Daksh:Kya kar rahe 🙄ho tum dono? Woh bhi idhar....Veer bhai ke room ke paas.
Ponky blushed seeing him.
Daksh:Kya🤨 hai?
Monil:Woh....Ponky ka ring 💍 girr gaya bas us se dhoond rahe hai.
Daksh saw Ponky with disgusting face.
Daksh:Yeh aisa kyu😒 kar raha hai?
Ponky:Kuch ☺bhi nhi.
Suddenly they heard Bani's sound.
Bani:Ahh😫....
Daksh's eyes poped out of the socket he felt embarrassed for standing near their room. Then he came to know why Ponky was standing there.
Daksh:Chi....saale kamine🤢 Veer bhai se boldunga chal 🤮yahan se.
Monil then understood why Ponky stood there.
Daksh:Monil 🤨😬tum bhi?
Monil:Arrey mujhe pata bhi 🙊nhi tha.
Daksh sighed.
Daksh:🤦🏻Jao.
They went from there.
Veer:Ho gayi😄
He saw her teared eyes and red nose.
Veer:Is it paining so 😰much sweetheart?
Bani:No 🙃I am ok.
Veer careesed her face and kissed her nose.
Veer:🤪So?
Bani:So🤨?
Veer:😚Shall we?
Bani:Huh🤔?
Veer kissed her lips without any warning and pulled her more closer and lifted her without breaking the kiss he moved to their bed and layed Bani on the bed still kissing her her hands were roaming on his hair and his hands on her waist he too was over her and they both were kissing passionately. After some time due to lack of oxygen.
Veer kissed her forehead. Bani kissed his nose.
Veer opened the first button of her shirt and just pecked her neck and bit their. When Bani's nails peirce into his neck making his skin remove from their.
When Bani asked something which made him loose his control over his temper. But Bani thought to make fun of him but he became angry.
Bani:Veer are you 🤨a virgin?
Veer pulled away. His face clearly showed anger. He stood up and went to his cupboard searching a t-shirt. Bani understood he was angry. She went to him.
Bani:😚Veer....
He didn't reply he was just searching for a t-shirt.
Bani:Veer....dekho 😊na....
He didn't even see her.
Bani:Veer mai bas mazaak kar rahi thi. I didn't mean😔 it I am sorry.
Veer too knew she doesn't mean it but it hurt him somewhere. He was about to turn to her but he felt his hand getting wet he suddenly turned and saw Bani crying.
Bani:I am sorry Veer. I am unlucky I can't keep anyone happy. 😢I always hurt you.
He hugged her.
Veer:Sweetheart....😧yeh kya keh rahi ho tum? 🤫Bas...nhi...shh...
He took her to the bed and made her sit he was still hugging her.
Bani:I am....sorry Veer😢....I don't... deserve your....love. I hurt you always. Lagta hai isi liye😭 koi mujhse pyaar nhi karte hai.
Veer:Bani...yeh kya bol rahi ho...aisa kuch bhi🙁 nhi hai sweetheart. I love you so much and even you 💘know it. So please don't speak like this.
He kissed her forehead.
Bani:No....I am😭...
He stopped her from speaking further.
Veer:Sweetheart Shh....no not more. You are my lucky charm💕 my everything so please Bani...not a word. I love you. I don't know why....I....I...reacted like that I am sorry 💓sweetheart.
He kissed her hairline.
Bani was sobbing.
Veer:Shh...no don't cry😚 baby.
Bani:I am 😿sorry.
Veer:Bani sweetheart I am not hurt I am ok. I just thought☹ to play with you.
Bani:Nhi...Sach 😪bolo.
Veer:Sach hai sweetheart❣ mai bas mazaak kar raha tha but you thought I am 🙁serious.
He said this to make her feel good.
Bani was sobbing.
Veer:Sach keh raha hoon sweetheart💜 I just thought 🙊to play with you nothing other than that.
Bani was slightly convinced. She was sobbing hugging him.
He pulled her and made her sit on his lap and kissed her nose.
Veer:Baby please don't😽 cry that really hurts here.
Bani's tears hurt him more than her words.
Bani:I am 😿sorry.
She hugged him tightly and kissed his chest.
Veer:Sweetheart don't feel yourself low you are my everything❤ I love you abundantly you are my lucky charm💞 no one can be you Bani you are the cutest🥰 ever the sweetest😍 of all lovely than anyone. You are the best my love.
Bani was still sobbing.
Veer:So please 😚don't cry.
AFTER SOME TIME.
Veer was kissing her hairline.
Veer:🖤Sweetheart....you ok?
She didn't reply.
Veer:It's ok sweetheart 😽leave na.
He heared her cute snore. At first he was shocked but smiled her at her cuteness. He made her sleep comfortably in the bed.
Veer:Yeh ladki bhi🙄 na first night pe kon sota hai yaar woh bhi itni achi decorated room scented candles 🕯 rose 🌹petals heart ❤ shaped balloons. Totally a romantic feel but she is sleeping. Koi baat nhi sab ki 😉badla lunga sweetheart.
Saying this he pecked her lips and slept with her.
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NEXT WILL BE BEST MOTHER IN LAW CHAPTER.
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SORRY FOR EXTRA TIME THAT I TOOK. I WILL TRY TO COMPLETE OTHER CHAPTERS SO SOON AND UPDATE SOON.
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HOPE YOU GUYS LIKE IT DO VOTE AND IGNORE MY SPELLING MISTAKES AND GRAMMATICAL ERRORS.
WITH LOVE 💘
AUTHOR.
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GOING THROUGH REVISION!!! FINAL DRAFT WILL BE RELEASED IN 2019 What would you do if the people who hated you most were the ones you were destined to save? Orphaned Arin lives in Olympia, Washington. When she is adopted by a strange new family her life begins to change, and not in a good way. As her new life takes different twists and turns she soon finds herself facing the Plaque. Now she is involved in an ancient war and all she wants is to go home. The Crimsons have other ideas, they want Arin to fight with them. She has no choice but to agree. If she helps these Crimsons win their war then she can go home. Only one thing is at stake, her own life. In the first book of the high fantasy series, Dimensional Travelers, three children must fight their ways through scores of Others for, not only their freedom, but the Crimsons' freedom. Armed with the elements and a single Rainbow Shard, the three most unlikely heroes must come together and save Fynne from imminent destruction; even if one of them does have a tendency to catch things on fire.
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My Titan Girl (Levi x Annie's sister reader)
I'm Abby Leonhart. The sister of Annie Leonhart. As a child our father said I was weak and left me in an underground city. It was their that I met Levi Ackerman and his mother Kuchel. Over time I missed Annie and said my farwells to Levi who now hadtwo friends: Isabel and Farlan. I returned home to find Annie,Reiner,and Bertohlt gone back to Wall Sina and are traitors. This is the story of when I returned home to find Levi as a survey corps captian, Annie,Reiner and Bertohlt are traitors,and murdering backstabers,and now I am all alone....well thats what I thought. Until Levi showed me the beauty of being me....and how he's felt about me since we met.Enjoy. PLZ VOTE!
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•Let me help you• (Lin Manuel Miranda)
About a month ago a young woman named sara started working at lin's local bodega across from his apartment. Since he's close with everyone in the neighborhood he's been trying to talk to her but she always seems timid and somewhat scared. Lin thinks it's strange but doesn't worry about it too much, but when he sees her in an aggresive confrontation with a man one evening that changes.
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