《Mrs Preeta Karan Luthra》Part:10
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After preeta goes.
Sameer comes there.
Sam: kya hua bhai.aap thik to hai.
Karan breakdown in tears.
Kar: Mai kaise thik ho sakta hu sammy.tujhe pata bhi nahi Maine babydoll ke saath kya kya kiya hai.(weeping)jabki uski koi galti nahi thi. Wo mujhe baar baar samjhati rahi ki usne kuch bhi nahi kiya lekin maine....Maine uski ek bhi nahi suni. Maine apni babydoll pe trust nahi kiya. Aur ab wo mujhe maaf bhi nahi Kar rahi hai😭😭(smile bitterly) maaf..mafi ke layak to Mai hu bhi nahi.(he again brokedown in tears).
Sammer was feeling very bad after seeing him like this.
Sam: Bhai sambhaliye khud ko.sab thik ho jaiga.(hugs him) sab thik ho jaiga bhai. Aap saant ho jaiye.
Kar: kuch thik nahi hoga Sammy kuch thik hone ke liye bacha bhi kya hai.you know what Sammy mujhe jeena ka koi hak nahi hai Mai apni babydoll ki life barbaad Kar di sirf ek misunderstanding ki wajh se.
Sammer also break down in tears.
Sam: sab thik ho jaiga bhai. Preeta bhi aapko maaf kar degi wo bahut achi hai. Aap please saant ho jaiye.
He gives him some hope.
( After sometimes he become normal) but deep inside he was feeling very guilty.
Kritika again comes there.
She was scared to face him.
Kri(scared): wo..wo Bhai aapko sab niche bula rahe hai.
Kar:haa tu chal ham aate hai.
She goes from there.
Sam: chalye bhai.
Kar: kya yar mehendi to ho gai hai.ab Mai kya karunga niche jaakar.
Sam: original mehendi ho gai hai. Ab Duplicate Saadi ko torna bhi to hai.
Kar: haa Mai to bhul hi gya.chal niche chalte hai.
Both come downstairs.
Karan sees preeta(she turns her face another side).
Karan prov: ab nahi preeta bahut seh liya tumne ab aur nahi.
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Mahira hug him making everyone shoked.
Mahira: Karan Chalo na hamari mehendi start hone wali hai.
She started dragging towards stage.
But Karan stopped.
Karan: I'm sorry mahira. Mai ye Saadi nahi Kar sakta. Kyuki meri Saadi pehle hi ho chuki hai.
Goes towards preeta.and stands in front of her.
Holds her hend.
Kar: ye hai Meri Wife
Preeta and everyone was shoked.
Kar: I'm sorry preeta Maine tumhare saath bahut galat kiya hai Maine tuhe us galti ki saza di hai jo tumne kabhi ki hi nahi. Please mujhe maaf kar do.
Mahira: Karan ye tum kya bol rahe ho.
Kareena: ha Karan beta tum ye kya bol rahe ho.tum is middle class ladk...
Karan: middle class nahi hai wo biwi hai Meri hai wo.
Everyone were shoked by watching his angry side.
Mahira: lekin Karan tum to preeta se nafrat karte ho na. To fir ye sab.
Kar: Yahi to galti ki hai Maine apni babydoll pe yakin nahi kiya jabki is laki(points towards sharlin) pr bharosa kr liye iske laaye hue un morphed photos pr yakeen Kar liya.
Aur apni babydoll ke saath itna galat kiya.
Kareena: ye tum kya keh rahe ho Karan in sabme sharlin bich me kaha se aa gai.
Kar: oh please bua aapki wajeh se aapki wajeh se sharlin jaisi ladki se mere Bhai ki Saadi ho gai saari galti aapki hai.
Kareena glare him.
Rakhi: Karan bado se kaise baat karte hai ye mujhe fir se sikhana hoga tujhe. Aur ye tu kya bolta jaa raha h.......
Someone: Mai batata hu.
Everyone turns behind and was shoked to see the person.
And
The
Person
Is
None
Other
Than
...............
Baad me bataungi 😁😁
Suspense 😏😏
Bye bye
Soochte raho kon hai wo.
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