《Mrs Preeta Karan Luthra》Part:7
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(😁😁Kis kisne Kabir socha tha)
Kaaj:How dare you.(holding him through coler) himmat kaise hui tumhari Meri friend ke character pe ungli uthane ki.hote kon ho tum uske baare me aisa bolne wale.
Kabir come there
Kab(while holding kaajal): kya Kar rahi hai kaajal chor use aise logo ke muh nahi lagte.
Kunj: haa kaajal chor de use.
Goes towards Karan
Kunj: and you mister tum jo bhi ho kisike character pe ungli uthane se pehle uske baare me jaan Lena jaruri hota hai samjhe. Aaj Mai tumhe chor raha hu aainda tumne aisi galti ki to Mai tumhe chorunga nahi yaad rakhna.
Chal baby (hold preeta)started walking but again turns back.
Kunj:aur haa Mr koi bhi preeta meri,iski aur iski bf mtlb best friend hai....samjhe.
Karan was just standing there wondering what the hell just happened.
Kar prov: oh no shit ye Maine kya Kar diya Mai apni babydoll ke character pe ungli uthai jabki uski koi galti bhi nahi hai ye Maine kya Kar diya.lekin Mai nahi dekh sakta apni babydoll ko kisike saath aur jealousy me Maine ye kya Kar diya..no..no..I have to stop her.i have to talk to her.
Preeta prov:iss baar tumne saari hade paar Kar di hai Karan tumne mujhe dhokhe se Saadi ki fir bich raaste me chor diya aur fir rooj torture. And finally dusri Saadi aur usse bhi chain nahi Mila to tumne mujhe apne mehendi function me bulaya. Lekin fir bhi Mai bewakufo ki tarah chup chap sehti rahi lekin ab tumne limit cross Kar diya hai. Tumne mere character par ungli uthai.tumhe saayad pata bhi na ho lekin ek ladki ke liye uska character sabse jyada important hota hai karan aur tumne mere character pe ungli uthai. I just hate you Karan luthra.i hate you.
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But her thoughts stop by Karan.
Kar: preeta mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai.
Kaaj: lekin ise tumse koi baat nahi karni hai samjhe Mr luthra.
Kab: kaajal ek min haa to kya baat karni hai aapko Mr luthra.yahi ki aap isse apologize karna cahte hai. Sorry bolna cahte hai.but I'm sorry Mr luthra ye to kya koi bhi aapko iss baat ke liye maaf nahi karega.
Kar: mujhe preeta se baat karni hai.
Kunj:ek baar me samajh nahi aata wo nahi baat karegi tumse. Jaao raha se.
Kar: preeta please mujhe bas ek baar tumse baat karni hai.
Kaaj: tuhe ek baat samaj......
Shristhi (wo bhi hai Mai bhul gai thi😁): ek min Karan sir aapko baat karni hai na.
Karan nod
Shr:aapne Meri dii se pucha ki unhe aapse baat karni hai ya nahi.dii aap bataiye aapko inse baat karni hai
Pr(angrily): mujhe kisise koi baat nahi karni chalo tumlog.
Kar:preeta please bas ek baar sunlo.
Kunj:ohh hello tumhe....
Karan(angrily):bichme mat bolna Mai apni se baat Kar raha hu.
All were shocked by his sudden confession.(including family members)
Karan(holding preeta hend): Chalo mere saath.
Preeta was shocked by his confession she doesn't know what was happening around her.
Her mind was revolving around one word i.e
She don't know why but she was feeling very happy today.but her thoughts were distracted by sound of door closing.
Karan(while closing the door): dekho preeta please niche jo kuch bhi hua uske liye I'm sorry mujh.....
Preeta: please Karan mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni.mujhe jaane do.
She started to go but he held her hand.
He bend on his knees
Kar: I'm sorry preeta please mujhe maaf kardo mujhe wo sab nahi bolna cahiye tha par Mai khudko control nahi Kar paya tumhe kisi aur ke saath dekhkar aur maine bol diya mujhe khud nahi pta ye kaise ho gya lekin Maine wo sab intensionally nahi kiya please mujhe maaj kardo.
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Preeta (while moving backward): dekho Karan.....(but her leg slips and karan tried to hold her but both falls on bed Karan was over preeta)
Both were lost in each other.
Some hair strains were blocking his view so he tugged them.
Jaavin chhod ke na,
Tere naal rehna ve,
Tu shingaar mera,
Tu ae maahi gehna ve haaye,
Tu hi hai vairi,
Jinna tu mera ohni main teri,
Both were lost in each other
Mere sohneya sohneya ve,
Ve maahi mera kitthe naiyo dil lagna,
He unknowingly moving towards her lips.
Mere sohneya sohneya ve,
Ve maahi mera kitthe naiyo dil lagna,
Maahi...
Their lips where inches apart when
Kab(knocking the door): jaan tu thik to hai na.
Both come back into reality
Both were feeling embarrassed.
Karan get up from her and give his hand.
But preeta instead of hold his she get up from her own.
Kar: I'm sorry for that. I'm really really sorry.
He goes from there.
Ab baad me
Bye
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