《Jjba oneshots》Have I improved?
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Mkay so like I was going over my book personally and I cringed the entire time until I got like up to Diego so now I have one question and I would lover your guys opinions on it. The question is have I improved my writing style and well just my writing style in general?
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The End Of Life
"THE END IS HERE"
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Cian is a broke, freshly graduated engineering student working as a janitor when he gets the opportunity to play a new VR MMO. Touted by fans as "More Real than Reality," it has taken the world by storm and in-game credits are even traded on real world currency markets. It's a potential path to real world riches, or financial ruin. But Cian soon realizes this game is more than it seems. A series of events leads him to question the nature of the game and his own reality. What is the true nature of the Weave? Who are the Weaveborn? And why do the game masters want him dead?
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When Gale Storm is murdered, death brings with it an unexpected ticket to the fantastical world of Mioverold - a place rife with dangerous creatures and political conflict. While the adversaries may be driven by common goals, they have vastly different approaches. Faced with these uniquely powerful combatants, and no chance to return to life as he knows it, Gale must decide what to do next. Choosing a side to spend his afterlife with isn't going to be easy, since war is just as much about perspectives as it is about the absolutes of right or wrong.
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A-Zero
Prisoner 145 is a high-risk criminal kept at the world renowned prison complex Militant Base Prison Zexar aka MBPZ. Due to the numerous, horrendous crimes he had committed before arriving at the prison, it was assumed that Prisoner 145 would be sentenced to death. In the meantime, the King of Zeria, suddenly thought of an ingenious plan to expand Zerian territory without incurring the wrath of surrounding countries. This plan just happened to involve sending the most dangerous of criminals into the world. In a wicked twist of fate Prisoner 145 is released back into the world after ten years of solitary confinement as a part of this plan. How will he adapt to a world he has never seen? Who will still remember him? Does he even remember himself after all this time? I'm completely rewriting it. Cause I'm upping the quality. So uh, yeah. UPDATE: As suggested, old chapters (1-19) have been removed from RRL. If you feel like reading it, then visit my wordpress site: https://aspiringnewbie.wordpress.com/ For more information on this change go to my blog post: https://aspiringnewbie.wordpress.com/2016/03/19/welp-im-sorry-but-im-back/ Updates are super slow. Be Warned.
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My Bodyguard Can't Fight Girls!
Clere Sigrun was a regular schoolgirl who was born into an extraordinary family of secrets. Her family safeguarded secrets and gathered intelligence throughout the world for authorities and organizations. One day, her mother informed that Clere was going to have a personal bodyguard because a criminal syndicate was out to kidnap her. That bodyguard turned out to be Gale Gainsborough, a new mysterious transfer student in her school and he had a strange weakness where he becomes physically weak whenever he had to fight girls! What would happen if the enemies were girls? News snippet - 4th December 2019 Read my latest update: Tempus Fegit. It's already Feb! Schedule Release Page: https://lemuelmoo.com/schedule-release/ Next Chapter Updates: I have decided to reward all pre-released chapters at Patron. Updates will be bi-weekly as usual. I have about 20 chapters ahead of the what is currently available but I have not done any proofreading or editing on them yet so they are not ready to be published. It will come speedily. As we head to the wuxia portion of the novel, I have included my own glossary of terms here: Glossary of Terms Release Schedule This is my part-time gig, and I will be using much of the time to develop the story, get illustrations etc. For the public: Once every 2 weeks, each update usually above 3000 words. For Assassins (Patreon): Access all pre-released chapters at Patreon! Access all artwork exclusively at Patreon! All updates will usually be made during office hours at Sat EST.
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Yearning
When Shouta Aizawa lets his best friend convince him to go to a strip club with him (despite his better judgment) he might just have met the love of his life. And he might also have invited a lot of problems into his life.HEAVY TRIGGER WARNINGS. SMUT HEAVY. Read at your own risk. Dead Dove - Do Not Eat.
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