《Jjba oneshots》Have I improved?
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Mkay so like I was going over my book personally and I cringed the entire time until I got like up to Diego so now I have one question and I would lover your guys opinions on it. The question is have I improved my writing style and well just my writing style in general?
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The Primal Hunter
On just another normal Monday, the world changed. The universe had reached a threshold humanity didn’t even know existed, and it was time to finally be integrated into the vast multiverse. A world where power is the only thing that one can truly rely on.Jake, a seemingly average office worker, finds himself thrust into this new world. Into a tutorial filled with dangers and opportunities. In a world that should breed fear and concern, an environment that makes his fellow coworkers falter, Jake instead finds himself thriving.Perhaps… Jake was born for this kind of world, to begin with.***Author Note: Tags and content warnings are mainly to give me creative freedom later on. This is my first novel ever, and English isn’t my native language, so go easy on me chaps.
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The Life of a Goddess and a Fox in the Cultivation World
In the Wanderer's Realms, where many beings fight to gain more powers and lifespan by breaking through to higher Ranks, a mysterious man sent two unknown Seals in two of the three main Realms. One was found by a masked woman who seemed to hide a tragic past, while the other was directly absorbed in the body of newborn with an Immortal Fox Bloodline. Two beings that should have never met each other, two seals that seemed to attract one another. What will they experience? Adventures, fights, love, pain? Only by reading this novel will you know the answers to those questions. Greetings dear readers! I am Calm Wanderer and I present to you my first novel in the universe I created, the Wanderer's Realms. This story is mostly about the story of Bai Yue and Guang Yang. It will follow how their relationship evolve and how Guang Yang matures from an innocent child to a powerful cultivator. I will do my best to avoid 1 dimensional characters and also to avoid plot holes. The first few chapters will present more and more information on the important characters and set up the universe I decided to write in: The Wanderer's Realms. If you have any questions or advice, feel free to comment. I'll do my best to answer you as quickly as possible. Release rate: For now I'm planning to release 1 chapter on Friday. The average length of the chapters are 3000 words each. Quite lengthy compare to a lot of other novels.
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Inside a novel as the Hero's useless brother[Progressive Fantasy]
How to turn the most insignificant character in the story, described in just a couple of lines in the book, into the most interesting one?It's extremely simple! Make him a nobody!His older brother is the protagonist of the novel. As it is to be expected, an OP with a harem...His twin sister is a powerful reincarnator, collecting all the cheat items around the world...Even his wife is not only an incredible beauty, but also a hidden goddess...What about the character himself?Well...the author of this novel seems to have forgotten about him!Talent? Superpowers? Attractive appearance... or maybe at least wealth? None of that! " Of all the possible cannon fodder, why did I move into this exact body? How am I supposed to survive?"Follow Arthur Hayes on his arduous journey through the world of the novel, that he has read, as the useless brother of the main hero.
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Olympus
A man broken, and contemplating suicide. He's saved by a dear friend who refused to give up on him, and a game that allowed him to walk once more. The VR reality game called Olympus, set in a fantasy world revolving around Greek and Roman hystory. Join out hero as he learns the game as one of the first 5000 to test it, and experience it before the rest of the world. See his trials and tribulations, and his indomitable spirit as he deals with his reality with the aid of two friends who never allowed him to give up.[hr]Hey folks! This is my second fiction, decided to give VR a try. This won't be updated often until my first fiction, Blood Born is fully released to volume one. But when it is I'll be alternating between the two, and releasing daily for both fictions once I have a written plan for volume two in my first and primary fiction. I hope you enjoy this one however!
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Land Before Love.
Aleenia is forced into an arranged marriage. It wasn't uncommon for her not to know the man she is going to wed. But it would seem nobody knows who her soon to be husband is. As no-one goes and no-one talks about the people from the Southern lands. At least, not positive talk. In a deal to save her people, she is thrown into an ancient tribe. Their clothes, food, customs' and language foreign to her. And her husband becomes the greatest mystery to her of all. There are different creatures lurking in the woods. Ageless tales of their people that have her questioning everything. And something is closing in on the horizon that can bring down all that she has ever believed and cared about. Aleenia must tread carefully. As she must make a decision. Land before Love?.-.-.-.-.-.-.( #2 Historical Fiction August 19th 2018)( #355 in Romance August 14th 2018)(#152 in Werewolf December 9th 2017)
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Hasëki Mihrisah Sułtan
Cecylia/Hasëki Mihrisah - niewolnica pochodzenia Hiszpańskiego. Urodzona 19 maja 1559 roku jako córka Henryka i Roksolany, siostra Diany. Porwana do haremu Sułtana Mehmeda Khäna w 1577 roku. Matka ósemki dzieci: Orhana, Gulum,Kasima, Ayse, Ahmeda, Afife, Ibrahima oraz Menekse. Przepiękną okładkę wykonała: @AmelyaOffical
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