《In your hands (vkook)》part 4
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بازهم همون داستان قدیمی ، همون شب هایی که جانگکوک به شدت ازشون متنفر بود ، اما خب ......
چیکار میشد کرد ؟
این زندگی ای بود که سرنوست براس رقم زده بود ، و اون هم باید این و میپذیرفت .
با بوسه ای که تهیونگ زیر گردنش کاشت به خودش اومد و ناله ی ریزی کرد .
خیلی وقت بود که این معاشقه شروع شده بود و اونا وسط ماجرا بودن .
تهیونگ : ناله کن ........ ناله کن جانگکوک
و با این حرف مسقیم به پروستاتش ضربه زد و جانگکوک ناله جیغ مانندی سر داد و زمزمه کرد :
جانگکوک : دارم.........آهههههه........دارم....م....میام
و همون موقع بود که تهیونگ دم گوشش زمزمه کرد :
تهیونگ : یکم صبر کن بیبی ....... منم دارم ... آه ...دارم میام میام
و به ضربه زدن ادامه داد .
تهیونگ : آه .... لعنت بهت جانگکوک ....... خیلی تنگی ..... خیلی تنگی ولی من هنوز بعد از سه سال به این عادت نکردم .
و بعد از این حرف بود که هردوشون با هم کام شدن ، تهیونگ توی کاندوم و جانگکوک روی شکم خودش .
تهیونگ بوسه ای روی لبای جانگکوک کاشت و ازش بیرون کشید .
کاندوم رو در اورد و توی سطل اشغالی کنار تخت انداخت .
روی تخت دراز کشید و جانگکوک رو توی اغوش کشید .
هردوشون توی دنیا ی خودشون بودن ، تهیونگ توی دنیای لذتش سیر می کرد و جانگکوک توی عالم بدبختی هاش ، بی خبر از یه جفت چشم کوچولو که از توی قفل در شاهد تمام ماجرا بوده ، از اول تا اخرش .
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با صدای نجوای کسی توی گوشش از خواب بیدار شد .
یکم که دیدش واضح تر شد تونست آجومایی رو ببینه که نگران بالای سرش ایستاده بود .
آجوما : آقا ، جناب جانگکوک ، آقااااااا
جانگکوک : بله آجوما ، بیدارم...... چیشده؟
با لحن خسته و صدای خشداری پرسید و آجوما در جواب سوالش فقط یه اسم گفت :
آجوما : جونگ مین
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و همون لحظه بود که جانگکوک مثل شزم از جاش پرید و تازه اون موقع بود که تونست صدای گریه ها و جیغ های جونگ مین رو بشنوه .
سریع بلوز و شلوارش رو از روی زمین چنگ زد و با ملافه ای که دور خودش پیچیده بود به سمت اتاق لباس پا تند کرد .
با سرعتی که هیچوقت از خودش ندیده بود لباس هاش رو پوشید و ملافه رو همونجا ول کرد .
با دو خودش رو به اتاق پسرش رسوند و پسرش رو در حالی دید که روی تخت دراز کشیده و با تمام توان جیغ میزنه و گریه میکنه و صورتش از فشاری که به خودش اورده قرمز شده .
سریع به خودش اومد و جونگ مین رو بغل کرد و تکونش داد .
در همون حالت روبه آجوما کرد و پرسید :
جانگکوک : چیشده ؟
اجوما : نمی دونم اقا تقریبا از ده دقیقه پیش بیدار شدن و دارن گریه می کنن ، هر چقدر هم تلاش کردم بخوابونمشون نتیجه ای نداد .
جانگکوک بانگرانی به پسرش نگاه کرد و اون رو روی دستش خوابوند .
روبه اجوما گفت :
جانگکوک : میشه اون دارویی که دکتر بهش داده بود رو با یکمی شیر گرم مخلوط کنی و برام بیاری بالا ؟
آجوما فقط به یک سر تکون دادن اکتفا کرد و از اتاق بیرون رفت .
اما جانگکوک از این خبر نداشت که مشکل پسرش دل درد یا هرچیز دیگه ای نیست .
مشکل جونگ مین خیلی جدی تر از این حرفا بود .
در همون حین که منتظر آجوما بود جونگ مین رو روی دستش تکون می داد و توی گوشش حرفای قشنگ نجوا می کرد .
جانگکوک : پسرم ، عزیزم ، نمی خوای به مامان بگی چی شده ؟
و جواب جونگ مین فقط گریه های پشت سر هم و متوالیش بود .
جانگکوک با حالت زاری گفت :
جانگکوک : آخه عزیز دلم تو وقتی گریه می کنی که من متوجه نمیشم چی میخوای .
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و پشت بند حرفش بوسه ای روی دست های پسر کوچولوش که روی لباسش مشت شده بود کاشت .
بالاخره بعد از سپری شدن چند دقیقه که برای جانگکوک به اندازی چند سال گذشت آجوما با شیشه شیری که توی دستاش بود وارد اتاق شد .
تهیونگ شیشه شیر رو از دستای آجوما چنگ زد و به دهان جونگ مین نزدیک کرد و جونگ مین هم اوم رو با اغوشی باز پذیرفت .
بالاخره اون صداهای وحشتناک گریه ی جونگ مین خوابید و چند لحظه ی بعد تنها صدای میک زدن هاش به شیشه شیر بود که توی اتاق طنین انداز شد .
اما این اخر ماجرا نبود ، از اون به بعد کار هرشب جانگکوک همین بود ، جونگ مین حوالی صبح بلند می شد و گریه می کرد . و حتی این اتفاق به قدری ادامه پیداکرد که دیگه داروی خواب آور هم روی جونگ مین اثر نمی کرد .
♡پایان پارت چهارم♡
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سلام بچه ها!!!!!
من اومدم
امیدوارم که این پارت رو دوست داشته باشید
و یه معرفی کوچولو موچولو هم داریم😉🌸
معرفی می کنممممم:
کیم جونگ مین ملقب به مینی
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Sword System Academia
2/17 NOTICE: I'm putting this on hiatus, possibly permanently. I didn't want to spam with an "update chapter", so hopefully here and in the story blurb will get enough eyeballs. There are a couple reasons for ending SSA for now. 1) I wrote the next chapter but wasn't happy with it. I've been less and less satisfied with SSA's quality the more I thought about it. Part of the reason is... 2) I am seriously thinking about trying to publish some novels to help pay the bills, since I don't have my other source of income anymore. I have never asked for anything from SSA readers, no money, not even a review or rating. SSA is written for fun to amuse myself, primarily, and I would kind of feel bad actually charging someone money for something as unserious as that. I don't think it is good enough to ask anything in return. To use an analogy from music, SSA is more like a jam session with a bunch of friends. You're just chiling and having fun playing some music. I mean, if you are Mozart or even Eminem, your jam session is good enough to sell, but for an amateur beginner like myself, haha, no. If I want to publish something, I feel like I need to go the proper route of practice and rehearsals, which might be more similar to a classical concert performance. With SSA, I work from worldbuilding notes and a loose outline, but what you are essentially getting is the first draft with lots of so-called pantsing. Pushing out a web novel like this also means it is very difficult to go back and improve things without breaking everything else downstream. I wanted to try this "jamming" approach, as it was a good way to teach me about another aspect of writing, but to move forward, I think I need to hone my "classical" techniques, which emphasize rewriting, or at least, revising outlines. 3) While I intend to try to make $$$, my actual current goal is to "get gud". I've spent a lot of time recently trying to understand the self-publishing industry, and I'm pretty sure I can make some money by using short-term strategies with my current amateur skill level. But I've seen too many authors come and go/burnout, and really, the only way that I think I can enjoy writing and still make money on a long-term basis is to become a better writer. And the next step for me, which I haven't done much before, is to spend more time on rewriting and outlines. That is pretty much antithetical to the way SSA is developing. I've always been kind of 20/80 plotting/pantsing, but I want to spend a lot more time outlining before I even start writing. SSA jam sessions don't really fit my goal anymore. If you're curious about what's next, read on... Among other regrets, I regret not finishing SSA. It's the first story I've dropped, but then again, it's the first web novel I've attempted, so I suppose that's not a surprise. I don't think traditional web novel formats suit me that well. The whole SSA story I had loosely planned (beyond a first book or major arc) is way too large as well. Big story = good for neverending webnovel with Patreons, bad for penniless and fickle writer like me. I am currently outlining a complete trilogy to another story in great detail. I want the story to end concisely, and I also want the chance to really spend a lot of time on the full outline to spot pacing problems, character issues, lost themes, and so on. I'll still share this story on RR. What I intend to do is finish book 1, flash-publish the whole thing here for a few weeks, then publish on the big Zon. Repeat for books 2 and 3. The upcoming story will be about crafting heroes. The backdrop is an isekai-like setting, where elves will summon humans to their world as heroes, but the whole hero crafting business is still in its infancy. The elven mage researchers are figuring out how to imbue heroes with power, while the heroes are trying to figure out how to use the powers that they gain. Humans are the best hero templates because they are blank and have no intrinsic magic. Or at least that what the elves thought. The human MC has his own secrets... There will be some similarities with litrpgs, but I would call it more a progression fantasy or gamelit story. For example, the stats are very low, at least initially. Say we have a stat called Str. Going from Str = 1 to Str = 2 is a huge deal. Also, going from Dex = 0 to Dex = 1 is an even bigger deal. I guess you could call it a "low-stat litrpg", haha. Also, the heroes won't be gaining stats simply by killing things or leveling up. You can't increase stats arbitrarily, either. There will be rules to how stats can increase, and how they work with each other. The elven mages will be figuring out these rules in order to craft stronger and stronger heroes. Some inspiration will be from cultivation magic systems, but there won't be overt cultivation, at least for now. A theme I really want to explore is the idea of interactions. That includes things like hero crafter vs hero, tactics vs strategy, skill synergies, racial interactions (dwarves, elves, etc), and son. Yeah, so hero crafting. I'm super excited about this project and venturing into publishing. If you want to check out the upcoming story, you can follow my RR author profile to see when it drops here. Finally... THANK YOU TO EVERYONE! I'm very sorry that SSA is stopping, but I hope at least some of you will find the next story at least as enjoyable, if not more. Thanks to all the readers who gave SSA a shot. Big hug or solid fistbump to all of you, whichever you prefer! I hope this message is not a downer but an upper, because I am psyched!! -purlcray -------------- BLURB: Talen, youngest Master of the Koroi, makes his way to the Empire's capital to salvage his clan's fate. 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