《Abhira ff: Dil tune chuaa》PART 24
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Next day, early morning
In birla house
Abhira and manjiri neil were there. Manjiri forwards a plate with a red lehenga, bangles, sindoor and a packet of bindi.
Manjiri- ye lo akshu...tumhari teej ka shringaar...tumhari saas ki taraf se
Akshara smiles and takes it from her. She touches manjiri's feet.
Manjiri blesses her- sada suhaagan raho...khoob khush raho
Akshara smiles- thankyou maa
Manjiri- ab chalo...sargi kha lo
On dining table
Manjiri serves akshara her sargi and makes her sit.
Akshara- maa aap bhi baithiye na
Manjiri nods and sits beside her. Akshara serves a plate for manjiri who smiles. Abhimanyu and neil too settle.
Manjiri- abhi...akshu ko pehla niwala tu khila aur ye bhi dekhna ki ye acche se khaye...pure din bhuka rehna hai ise
Abhimanyu nods. He makes akshara eat the first bite. Akshara was surprised as he feeds her another bite. He feeds her the sargi. Akshara feels happy seeing his love. Manjiri and neil also smile.
Abhimanyu- maa apni bahu ko baad me dekh lena...pehle acche se khaiye...vrat aapka bhi hai
Manjiri nods and eats. Abhimanyu makes akshara drink juice despite her protests.
Akshara- kya hai abhi...maine socha tha kam se kam aaj toh is juice se aazadi milegi aur tum ho ki...
Abhimanyu interrupts sternly- akshu...tumhari health ke sath koi risk nahi
Akshara gets quiet. Manjiri signs abhimanyu to calm down.
Manjiri- accha ab akshu...tum aaram karo
Akshara- haa main aaram karu...aur aap kitchen me jakar sabke liye naashta banayengi...hai na
Abhimanyu- maa aaj aap koi kaam nahi karengi...main staff se keh deta hu...vo dekh lenge
Manjiri- par abhi....
Abhimanyu interrupts- maa
Manjiri sighs- accha thik hai
Abhimanyu instructs staff to handle everything as manjiri and akshara won't work today. He sends manjiri and neil to their rooms and takes akshara with him.
On breakfast table
Harshvardhan irritated- ye kya hai...kaisa naashta hai...manjiri
Manjiri comes- kya hua
Harshvardhan- manjiri tum naashta banana bhul gayi ho kya...kya hai ye
Manjiri looks at the table and is shocked to see nothing according to what they usually have.
Manjiri- mujhe dus minute dijiye...main sab thik kar deti hu
Harshvardhan- tumhe pata hai na hame time par hospital jana hota hai...fir
Abhimanyu who comes with akshara listens this.
Abhimanyu declares- maa aaj koi kaam nahi karengi...kisi ke liye kuch nahi karengi
Harshvardhan looks at him- kyo aaj aisa kya hai
Abhimanyu- teej hai aaj...jo aapko itne saalo me kabhi yaad nahi rahi...maa ka vrat hai aur vo aaram karegi
Harshvardhan- ab ye kya naya drama hai...goenkas ki beti kya bahu bankar aa gayi...ye sab rasme bhi shuru ho gayi ab
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Abhimanyu angrily- ye sab pehle bhi hota tha sir...bas aapko nahi pata hota tha
Anand- harsh...rehne do...manjiri ka vrat hai...ek din ke liye ham adjust kar sakte hai (looks at manjiri) manjiri...abhimanyu sahi keh raha hai...tumhe rest karna chahiye...aaj kuch khaogi nahi toh dawai bhi miss karogi...so rest
Manjiri nods with a smile. She takes anand's and mahima's blessings. Akshara too goes and touches mahima's feet.
Mahima surprised- tumne bhi fast rakha hai
Akshara nods.
Mahima smiles- all the best for your first teej...take care of yourself
Akshara smiles- thankyou taiji
Akshara touches anand and Harshvardhan's feet but they doesn't react. Abhimanyu signs akshara to smile and not get upset. Akshara smiles. Akshara touches parth and shefali's feet.
Shefali surprised- are kya kar rahi ho
Parth smiles- haa...ab ham itne bhi bade nahi hai Akshara...in sab ki koi zaroorat nahi hai...and congratulations...pehli teej ke liye
Akshara smiles- thankyou bhaiya bhabhi
Harshvardhan- bhaisaab aaj mr singhania ne bulaya hai hame...sab saat baje tak tayyar rehna (looks at manjiri) aur tum...vo log hame tyohaar manane ke liye invite kar rahe hai...gifts ka dekh lena
Manjiri nods.
Abhimanyu- vo aap dekh lijiyega sir...kyoki maa aur akshu do ghante me vaha ke liye nikal jayenge...aaj pura din teej vahi celebrate karenge
All are surprised.
Harshvardhan- magar iski kya zaroorat hai...raat ko ja rahe hai na ham sab
Abhimanyu was about to react angrily when akshara interrupts.
Akshara softly- vo mamu aur buami ne toh sabhi ko bulaya hai...par abhi ne bataya ki aap sab busy honge...vaha na aaj teej bohot dhoom dhaam se manate hai...naach gaana...rasme...sab kuch bohot grand hota hai...maa ne kabhi aise celebrate nahi kiya aur maine bhi kabhi nahi dekha isliye buami ne hame aaj pehle bulaya taki ham sab ladies enjoy kar sake...unhone toh taiji aur shefali bhabhi ke liye bhi kaha tha par aap dono toh busy hai
Mahima nods- haa aur vaise bhi ham dono kaha ye vrat rakhte hai...tum dono jao aur enjoy karna
Manjiri and akshara smiles. Harshvardhan doesn't say anything as he knows naksh is very important for birla hospital and for naksh akshara is very important. Harshvardhan anand and mahima leave after their breakfast.
Abhimanyu- maa main hospital ja raha hu...aap log please driver ke sath jana and be safe and enjoy...main time se aa jaunga vaha
Akshara- tum naashta toh kar lo
Abhimanyu- mujhe bhook nahi hai akshu...sargi ke waqt tumhare sath itna kha liya tha maine
Akshara nods. Abhimanyu also leaves. Later akshara and manjiri go to singhania sadan.
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In singhania sadan
Manjiri and akshara enter.
Akshara shouts- buami
Keerti sees akshara and smiles. She goes near her. Akshara hugs keerti happily.
Keerti- akshu (looks at manjiri) namaste
Manjiri smiles- namaste
Keerti- aapke baare me bohot suna hai maine...mere saare bacche sirf aapki hi tareef kar rahe hai...krish...kairav aur ye akshu bhi
Akshara smiles.
Manjiri smiles- aur mera beta aapki tareef kar raha hai...itne saal ham ek dusre ke baare me sunte rahe par aaj mil rahe hai
Keerti- haa...aur vo bhi ek naye rishte ke sath (holds manjiri's hand) thankyou so much manjiri ji...meri akshu ko apni beti maan ne ke liye...use itna pyaar dene ke liye
Manjiri- ab aapki akshu hai hi itni pyaari toh main kya karu...do minute nahi lage use aapki akshu se meri akshu banne me
Keerti smiles- aaiye na
Manjiri and akshara come inside. Naksh also greets manjiri. He hugs akshara. Kairav and krish who had just come from market see manjiri and akshara.
Krish- manjiri aunty
Manjiri happily- krish
Krish takes her blessings and hugs her- kaisi hai aap...maine aapko aur aapke haath ke khane ko bohot miss kiya
Manjiri- aur maine bhi tujhe bohot miss kiya...achanak se aana jana sab band
Krish smiles and holds his ears. All smile. Kairav too greets manjiri and hugs akshara.
Keerti- aaiye ham sab mehendi lagwate hai
Manjiri and akshara nods. They both along with keerti sit and the mehendi walis apply them mehendi. Manjiri looks at one of them.
Manjiri points at akshara- didi...ye na meri bahu hai...iski pehli teej hai...iske haatho me na acchi si mehendi lagana...pure haatho me mehendi lagana...jaise dulhan ko lagti hai na...bilkul vaise
Akshara and keerti look at manjiri. Akshara was teary eyed.
Manjiri wipes akshara's tears- akshu...jo armaan shadi me reh gaye...ham vo sab pure karenge...puri zindagi bachi hai unhe pura karne ke liye...aur shuruaat is mehendi se karte hai
Keerti- sahi keh rahi hai aap (looks at akshara) aaj ye samajh lo ki tumhari mehendi ki rasm ho rahi hai...jisme mehendi lagane ka pehla hak saas ka hota hai
Manjiri takes a mehendi cone and applies a mehendi on akshara's palm. She writes abhimanyu's name and covers it with a heart. Akshara smiles seeing it and is emotional. She hugs keerti and manjiri. The men smile seeing them.
Keerti cheers them- itni rukhi sukhi mehendi thode hi hogi...naach gaana toh banta hai na
Keerti sings cupping akshara's face. Akshara smiles wholeheartedly. Krish makes a video of this.
Mehandi Raachan Laagi Haatha Mein
Banade Re Naam Ri
Aai Shubh Ghadi Dekho
Mhaare Aangan Aaj Ri
Aai Shubh Ghadi Dekho
Mhaare Aangan Aaj Ri
Keerti stands and dances.
Baaje Baaje Re Shahanai
Dhola Thaare Naam Ri
Aai Shubh Ghadi Dekho
Mhaare Aangan Aaj Ri
Manjiri sings and makes akshara stand. Keerti and manjiri dance around her.
Mehandi Rachegi Gahari
Pyaar Gahara Hoga
Laal Khushhaal Rang
Sang Tere Hoga
Keerti twirls and the three dances together. Kairav and naksh too join them.
Mehandi Raachani Surangi
Dhola Thaare Naam Ri
Aai Shubh Ghadi Dekho
Mhaare Aangan Aaj Ri
Keerti sings and teases akshara who blushes.
Mehandi Pe Naam Hamne
Kiska Likha Hai
Padh Ke Batao Ji
Kiska Likha Hain
Manjiri sings and points at abhimanyu's photo held by kairav. Akshara blushes.
Gore Haathon Mein Saji Hai
Preet Thaare Naam Ri
Gore Haathon Mein Saji Hai
Preet Thaare Naam Ri
Dhola Thaare Naam Ri
Aai Shubh Ghadi Dekho
Mhaare Aangan Aaj Ri
All dance together.
Mehandi Raachan Laagi Haatha Mein
Banade Re Naam Ri
Aai Shubh Ghadi Dekho
Mhaare Aangan Aaj Ri
Aai Shubh Ghadi Dekho
Mhaare Aangan Aaj Ri
Keerti and manjiri hugs akshara happily. Akshara was so happy. They all complete their mehendi. Akshara applied mehendi like a bride. Krish sends the video to abhimanyu.
Keerti- manjiri ji...aap ek baar puja ka sab samaan dekh lijiye...kuch aur chahiye toh main mangwa deti hu
Manjiri nods. They go. Kairav comes and sits beside her.
Kairav worried- aur bohot maze kar rahi hai tu...bhook bhi lag rahi hogi na tujhe...aadat nahi hai in sab ki...jab abhimanyu ne kaha ki vrat rakhna compulsory nahi hai toh fir kyo rakha
Akshara- bhaiya...vrat maine rakha hai par chakkar kha kar aap girenge...vo bhi tension ki vajah se...aapko pata hai abhi ne mujhe sargi ki rasm me itna khilaya jaise main ek din nahi ek saal ke liye bhooki rehne wali hu
Kairav smiles- accha hai na...matlab abhi tera bohot acche se dhyaan rakh raha hai...tasalli hui jaan kar
Akshara smiles- bhaiya...aapse kuch kehna tha
Kairav- haa bol na
Akshara- thankyou kehna tha...agar us din aap hamara sath nahi dete toh pata nahi main aur abhi kya karte...bhaiya...aap jante hai mujhe pata hi nahi tha ki main itni khush bhi ho sakti hu...abhi ne kuch hi dino me mujhe itni khushiya de di hai ki mujhse to sameti hi nahi ja rahi...jab se shadi hui hai mujhe sone ke liye sleeping p...(stops realising she was about to reveal her sleeping pills) mera matlab mujhe sukoon se neend kab aa jati hai pata hi nahi chalta...aur abhi ka bas chale na toh vo toh mujhe zameen par pair bhi nahi rakhne de
Kairav caresses her hair seeing her so happy. He knows she was talking about sleeping pills but he is also aware that abhimanyu is treating her for her depression so he didn't provoke her more.
Akshara looks at her hands full of mehendi.
Manjiri and keerti comes.
Manjiri- akshu beta tujhse ek rasm karwani hai...zara aana
Akshara nods- ji maa
Akshara goes with manjiri and keerti to do the rasm.
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