《HOW GIVE ME DESIROUS MY ADOPTED BROTHER ?? (mizo bl)》end part💜💜🌈🌈
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How give me desirous my adopted brother part-34(season 1 end part)
1 moth laters(February 14 valentine day)
Denisa pov- tu maw rai a,!!!??
Masangi pov-keimah enge ni vak...
Denis pov- tufa ve ringawt maw!???bialpa pawh i nei ve ringawt a mi???
Samuela pov-kan rawn thleng e..!!
Amuana pov- samu a thawmhnaw hi khawnge kan dah dawn.??
Denisa pov-tikhan dah tawp ru!!nakin ah kan lo thiar lut ang
Carson pov- tihtur ka nei a ka haw leh nghal mai ang o samu...
Denis pov-tumah haw lo ang...u masangi hi a rai ania...
Lza chuan Masangi chu a pan nghal vat a...
Lza pov- tinge min hrilh vat loh a!!i hriatna a rei tawh em??///zawh na dang a neilo ,a fa ani tih a pawm nghal thlap....
Masangi pov-thla hmasa khan...ka hrilh vat lo che ah ka tih palh....
Denisa pov- anih u masang tu fa nge ni ringawt a.... Ngaihzawng pawh i nei silo....
Lza pov-kei ma fa !!!!!mawl thei lutuk...
Samuela pov-thil chin chang hi hre lo viau zel suh o...in neih lam te in ngaihtuah rang a ngai anih chu//an nui sang vek mai denisa erawh a ṭhawng fal bik hle...
Amuana pov- mopa ṭhian ka ni duh ania o U lawm..
Denisa pov- lallawmzuala hian!!! Sawn a lo thlak vel a maw!!!.haaaa awm ang lo hian...u masang i bame tluk tluk a ni maw..??
Masangi pov-a teuh lo ahh mawla
Denisa pov-K.Lawma hian tu hmeichhia mah a bame hmasa lo a nge...
Lza pov- ka thu thu...ka pi ka hrilh a nga!!a rang thei ang ber in kan neih vat vat dawn nia...ka chhungte hmu tur in kan va kal dawn mi i paih em!??i chau em!??
Masangi pov- tun thla hi zo phawt se la ka lo tia, ka pa Damdawiin bill ka la pe bawk silo a...
Lza pov- ka pe tawh lawm..!!i pa damdawiin bill tun kum chhung a tan ka tlak vek a.....
Masangi pov-tinge chutiang i tih!! Ka duh ringawt hlei nem...///a ti vin hluk a,a thinrim hmel tak zet....choka lam ah a luh san ringawt a...lza chu a bangbo ngei mai ..
Lza pov-tinge tih sual ka nei Mi ..??!!!
Denisa pov-//za mang kheng in a nui chiam chiam a//caring leh lutuk hi a ṭha lo sin..a hmun leh a hun hriat tur...
Lza pov- zorempui ngawi hmak la nih chu o!!
Samuela pov- ila mah rawn hmasa lo in ,i lo ti zung zung kha a lungawi lo deuh a nih kha....va lut rawh ṭha deuh in sawi dun rawh u...///lza chuan a lu a bu nghat a,choka lam ah a lut zui ve nghal a,
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Denisa pov- ti maw kan in a rawn in sawn luh leh chu i tum leh si na chhan.?ka tello a dam chhûng hun hman chu i zuam leh meuh si nange//samu en chung in a mit ko a san ek ek a...
Samuela pov- In college ah chuan i va kal ta em??
Denisa pov- kal e le exam chu an phal dawn anih chu ka graduat ve thei dawn hlauh mai...
Samuela pov- a theih pawh kalo ringlo a ,!!a van lawmawm...
Denisa pov- ka nu chu rawn kal in ,rawn let leh tur in a rawn ngen tak tak che maw...???
Samuela pov-ummm chutiang nilo se ka rilru ka thlak leh i ring ami!!!???
Lza leh masangi chu an rawn chhuak a, masangi chu a la tum bua mai ,a la ti tua ve deuh ngei ani....
Lza pov- ka pi leh pu hmu tur in ka hruai dawn a, chanchin ka lo hrilh ang cheu !!!,//masangi chu a en a///va in siam rawh le!/a ti dam thlap a, masangi pawh lungawilo hmel tak ,thinrim lutuk silo,in ti pangchang ti tau ve ang chi kha ,tum biau chuan in siam tur in a lut ve mai a..
Denisa pov-i duat leh lutuk chuan, i duat sual mai ang...in siam ṭha vat rawh.... ngaihzawng te keh thei dawm a dawm tur an ni ngai lo....
Samuela pov-nang ai in thil tih tur leh tih loh tur a hre fe ang ka zilh hau e lo ti ve sek suh....
Carsona phone a ri a...
📱 carson pov- aw Dominic ka rawn chhuak dawn chiah...kan zo ṭep ..
📱 Dominic pov-hman hmawh suh !!ka lo nghak ang che..dah rawh i buai ang...//line cut..
Samuela pov-tunge a bro
Carson pov- V-day ani sia,kan leng chhuak dawn a..
Samuela pov- i bialpa tihna mi!!?//carsona chuan lu a bu nghat a..//anih chuan kal rawh!!nuam deuh in o//carson chu a chhuak zui nghal a...
Denisa pov- enge awmzia... amuana hi a kawp tihna mi!!!in in ngaizawng a maw tia amuan...
Samuela pov-an in ṭhen tawh..
Amuana pov-samuela thawmhnaw vel chu han dah fel ang u!!! Haw keipoh ka duh nia...
Masangi a rawn chhuak a...
Lza pov-kan kal mai ang o....anih u...
Denisa pov- V-day tih vang khan hmang na lutuk su o....in nu khan nau a pai kha ..
Lza pov- ka chhungte kan hmu ringawt dawn a lawm!!lo hur herh viau zel suh....kal ang..//masangi ban ah a kai a ,a chhuah pui hluk hluk a,a lâi ve deuh ngei ani....
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Denisa pov-i haw nghal dawn tak tak ami ..
Amuana pov-in 2 a awm vat vat i chak tawh tih ka hre reng min chelh der ve khang lang suh.....
Denisa pov- chelh che pawh ka tum em em nang!!!ka lawm e tih ka tum zawk a,thil min tih pui vek sia....
Amuana pov- i ho anih chu a....!!ka kal ania..anih o samu ..
Samuela pov- ummm bye...//amuana chu a kal a..
Denisa pov-hei Lalrinchhan ti nge Amuana kha i biak chhum hmuk hmuk a,nuam a tih loh hmel em kha!!a chung ah i thinrim na i nei ang mai...
Samuela pov-a phu tawk anih kha!!!///a ti hmuk a,a room ah a chhoh san daih.....a thil keng hmaih vel en fiah tur in.... carson an thil awmzia a hrilh vek tawh a vang in Amuana hi a mil vak biklo.... denisa chuan phur deuh in a zui chho ve nghal a....
Denisa pov- ka lak ah zep te i nei vel dawn a law!!??
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Samuela pov- ka hrilh dawn chuanglo che.... carson chungchang ania...min zawt sek dawn anih chuan haw leh mai ka duh dawn ania....
Denisa chuan samuela kawng ah a va kuah nghak a....
Denisa pov-zawt tawh dawn lo nasa...!!!kan Company ah chuan rawn thawk ve la ti raw!!!kan 2 in kan thawk dun a nga...keiin file lam ka khawih anga nang in contractor ho i vil ṭhin a nga...kan contractor Company hi Mizoram a a lian ber leh hlawhtling ber ah kan siam thei ngei ngei ang..
Samuela pov-ummm... denis zan in chu tukverh bul ah hian mu ila...ti raw...chhuat ah hian mutna kan phah anga a nuam viau ang...
Denisa pov-a romantic ngawt ang....V-day ani sia...leng chhuak ve ang hmiang...i duh duh kan lei dawn nia ..///samuela chuan a lu a bu nghat a...leng chhuak tur in an in siam a...ni leng a an leng khawthawng zawh chuan eng eng emaw pawh an lei nuam mai....
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📱Denisa pov- ka nu rawn haw lo hram mai rawh ka pu te in ah khan riak nghal mai rawh o...Ka nu duh tak ka hmangaih che i rawn haw dawn lo tih ka hria..ka ring che nia ...ka dah nia...bye love you muah muah....///line cut..
Pi remi pov-ha ha em em chuan V day tih vang a....ka rawn haw Chei lo ang...ṭawng ve na hman pawh min siam re re hlei nem ahhh....
Samuela pov-ka in bual zo tawh,enge ka room ah i tih va in bual ve ta che kan vah kual nasat em kha....
Denisa pov-i puar em!!??
Samuela pov-ummm kan thil ei kha an tui em alâwm!!a to hlawm si,va in bual fai ve tawh rawh....i nu hi a va rawn thleng har,zanriah ei hun pawh a pel tawh sia....
Denisa pov-ummm ka va in bual ange.....ka room ah zan in chuan ka riak ang...
Samuela pov-ummm mahse i nu !??
Denisa pov-a rawn haw dawn lo....in hnuai ah kan thil lei vel kha lo zuk la chho rawh o...///Samu chu a chhuk ve mai a...
Samuela pov-tinge u masangi pawh hi a rawn haw loh le ...kan phone chhin teh ang...
📱 Masangi pov- umm samu
📱 Samuela pov-tinge i rawn la haw loh a...
📱 Masangi pov- kan khua ah kan haw daih a!!!lawma nen ka chhungte be tur in!!!pi remi ka hrilh tawh a....naktuk tlai ah kan rawn haw ang...
📱 Samuela pov-umm min rawn text tal tur che nia...anih nuam deuh in o..//line cut .. Samu chu a thaw halh a///kan pahnih chiah in maw kan awm dawn !!//a ti sap a,a mawng tam chu a ṭham chhin a///a te ropui sia,tia kan chen dun leh tak tak dawn chuan ka tih len ve deuh a ngai ang,min hne vat palh ang...mahse engtin nge ka tih len ang le...///a ngaihtuah buai ve tak zet....a Hmangaih ber tan chuan ,a in sit ve in tling tawklo a in ti ve ṭhin khawp mai,chuan mawi belh a ṭhat belh pawh a duh ve tak zet ani...
Denisa pov-lo chho tawh rawh....//samu chu a mawngtam tih len dan tur vel a lo ngaihtuah muk lai tak ania a phu zuk mai,in chunglam chu a chho nghal a....///denis chuan samu mit chu a hup a/// lut rawh le,a ma room a ,a luh pui zawh chuan amit hup na chu a hawng a...tukverh te zawn ah chuan thla a rawn eng lut pup a,an mut na tur chu chhuat ah chuan bedsheet chhah chi a lo in phah bawk bedsheet chu thil eng neuh neuh hmang a mawi tak a chei ani bawk..
Samuela pov-tiang te eng tik lai in nge i lo siam a...
Denisa pov- kan len lai khan a chei tur ka ruai a lawm...i duh zawng em ...chhuat a mut kha i duh sia
Samuela pov-duh tih piah lam ani...kal ang....///a va phei thauh thauh a...in tur lo awm chu a in nghal pup ringawt...///a tui lutuk enge a...
Denisa pov-nge in ngawt red wine anih kha...i rui anga sin...
Samuela pov- zu dang nen a in ang miah lo ,a thlum bik si...ka in leh dawn...
Denisa pov-ngai tawh rihlo i ruih in i nawi thei si...nakin ah....//a va laksak lawp a...
Samuela pov-in phal leh tur silo nge i chhawp...khawi min pe teh ka in leh duh nia .a tui ka ti....a to ngawt ang chu ooo///a nui nghal vawr vawr mai a lo kai leh hman hmawh chu niin...
Denisa pov-naaaa nge ni ngai...nui vawr vawr suh...wine no khat i rui a maw....
Samuela pov-ka rui re re lo nemmm.hmelṭha pa...///a ti nui leh var var a..denisa chu a va kuah seuh seuh bawk....
Denisa pov-eng rilru pu in nge wine te poh hi ka lo lei ve ringawt le...i dose hniam zia ka hre reng tawh sia,theitui vel lo chhawp mai mai ila ṭha tur...ka beisei ang poh ani dawn lo nih hi ...
Samuela pov- denis thil tam deuh ka zawt ang che nga dik tak in min chhang zel rawh o??
Denisa pov-ummm enge ni...
Samuela pov- min tawn hma khan,fa neih a,chhungkaw din tih te hi i lo suangtuah nasa ve thei viau ang ti raw??? I first love hi eng ang hmel pu nge!!??a hmelṭha em??!!i suangtuah na ka tih chhiat sak vek che ani ti raw !!!a dik em????
Denisa pov-i rui anih kha!!!
Samuela pov-ka rui lo ka lu hai deuh ringawt lawm...sawi tehhhh..
Denisa pov-ka hmangaih che.....chu chu hria la a tawk a ni mai ..
Samuela pov-keipon ka hmangaih lutuk che ka thinrim miahlo ang sawi laaa ummmm!??
Denisa pov- zorempuia mipa luck tak hmelṭha sex lam a in sum thei em em bialnu te care thei tak ti a min sawi ṭhin hna phen a ka thuruk hi i hre duh em???
Samuela pov-umm i chanchin engkim ka hre duh a lawm...
Denisa pov- anih kan sawi ang o.....a hmasa in ka hmangaih hmasak ber ini...awi lo dawn mah la...ih maw!!!!kum 16 mi ka nih thleng khan ngaihzawng ka nei ngai miah lo a, hmeichhia hi ngah mah ka ti ngailo mipa pawh ka melh chuanglo...ka ṭhiante kha chuan ngaihzawng an nei deuh reng zel a,a bik in amuana khan,ulawma kha chu ngaihzawng neilo mahse nei reng ang vel tho ania... chuan ka hmeichhe ngaihven lo lutuk kha ka ṭhiante khan gay i ni lo maw!!!mipa i duh zawk a niang min ti deuh tawl a,ka rilru a na ve lutuk tlat...chuan kum 17 mi ka nih khan hmeichhia leh mipa sex video te ka en chho ta vak vak zel a,ka ṭhiante thu rawn ang in,mahse ka engah mah hian a thawk thei lo...mipa leh mipa pron video ka en pawh in ka engah mah a thawk chuanglo...ka hnuai lam a mi hi a tho ve thei ngai miahlo a.....
Samuela pov-tak tak maw a van mak ve!!!!natna i nei ni lo maw ...???
Denisa pov- ka sawi ngai thla la!!!!//samuela chuan a kuah rem seuh seuh in kuah chip chaih a mu in van an thlir pah vel mai mai bawk..///class 12 kan zir kum khan hmeichhe pakhat hian min at chil thei lutuk a....chuan school tt hall ah min hruai a..hmeichhe ngawichawi leh zakzum ve deuh mai ania...kan 2 chiah in room ah chuan kan awm a....a uniform chu a in phelh ta mai a,a kawrhnuai leh a engkim reilo te ah ruak vek in ka hma ah chuan a ding ta mai a....ka chi ai khawp mai...chuan tian a sawi a..."kum 3 chhung ka atchilh tawh che denis vawikhat chiah sex min hman pui rawh ka ngen a che chuan ka zar buai tawh lo ang che...ka vei che hi a reh theihnan min pui rawh """"a tia...chuan ka form kekawr chu a rawn phelh a...ka hamhaih lutuk a ka ding khawma reng ringawt mai...
Samuela pov- sex chu i hman pui tihna mi!?
Denisa pov- ka dick chu a phawrh a.....table dawhkan ah chuan ka ṭhu a,a hmuam ta , second reive deuh chu blujob min tih sak a...mahse ka ihhhh ka dick chu a tho thei chuang re re lo...ka hlauthawng zual tak zet a...ka dick a thawh theih miau loh chuan engtin nge sex ka hman ve thei ang...ka kekawr chu ka ha ṭha a...ka chhuah san ta a,keimah chauh in school hnung ah chuan ka ṭap ta chiam mai a.....ka hlau tak zet tawh ani... school ban chuan haw lo in doctor ah ka in en tir ta a,ulawma hian min hruai a...ka chhungte hriatloh in....mahse... Doctor chuan i tan a ruat dik tak i tawng hun ah i chakna chu a rawn kai tho ve em em ang.....eng natna leh harsat na mah i neilo min tia....mahse ka ngaih chu a ṭha chuanglo....12 ka zo a...BA ka zir kum khan ka tawng ta che a....chuan ka nun zawng zawng chu i rawn thlak dang lam ta vek ani....
Samuela pov-min huat theih em kha...
Denisa pov-ka pa in fa a lak a tum vang che khan ka mil lo che anilo a...ka hmuh che a piang a...ka hnuai lam ami in ṭan a rawn pek tlat ṭhin vang khan ...ka hnaih a awm tir che kha ka duh lo tak zet ṭhin....ka peh hel che a...ka haw ṭhin em em bawk che....a chhan chu a awm chhun inih vang ani...
Samuela pov- i chakna ti tho thei awmchhun ka nih vang in maw min lo huat em em ..///denis chuan alu a bu nghat a....
Denisa pov- kekawr bul i hak phei chuan ....i duhawm leh zual....mi dang chu ka hma ah saruak ngal ngat a an ding pawn ka chakna an ti tho zo reng reng lo mahse nang chu ,i kekawr bul chhing hak ringawt pawh khan....ka in sum theihna zawng zawng min hlauh tir fai vek ṭep ṭhin ani....
Samuela pov-ka tih palh....chutiang ka lo hre miahlo a...
Denisa pov- ka pian a hnu lam ah eng suangtuah na mah ka la nei ngailo nupui neih a fa neih tih vel....ka harsatna vang kha niang chutiang ka ngaihtuah thleng pha ve ngailo...ka duhthusam hmasa ber leh awmchhun chu ka kiang ah awm reng la tih chiah hi ni mai.....
Samuela pov-ka awm reng ang....kan dam chhung in kan awm dun tawh ang....ka tiam a che...
Denisa pov- thu i tiam hian ka hlauthawng zual sawt ṭhin i thu tiam engmah i ti hlawhtling ngai silo a...
Samuela pov-ka tih palh thlan tur dang ka neih loh ṭhin vang a lawm ..anih chuan denis naktuk a ṭang chuan exercise lak ṭhat viau ka ngai tawh dawn nih chu...
Denisa pov-i nih ang ang hian ka duh vek ,mawi belh i mamawh lo....
Samuela pov- ka hrisel ṭhat viau angai ang chu ,i hnuailam ami te kha A kâi harh thei awm chhun ka ni sia chuan...i duh thawh thei ropui si a...ka lo in buatsaih ve hle a ngai ang...i desirous partner ka nih si chuan...a hrim hrim boys sex video i en nasat ṭhin vang anih dawn chu kan first night zan pawh kha I lo zei em em
Denisa pov-ka hmangaih vang che lawm,ka zei......bak ah ka it reng bik lo che nia....i tho hlim hmel te chu chhia ka ti ve lutuk tlat....
Samuela pov- hmmmm ka kekawr bul hak vang ringawt chuan chuan min it nghal ringawt tak tak lo anih ka ring....
Denisa pov-ti maw ...min ringlo mi...
Samuela pov-tun ah pawh kekawr bul chiah ka hak hi...mahse engmah tih i tum silo....//a ti hmuk a...denisa chu anui hak ringawt....///i sawi zawh hun ka lo nghak rei tawh lutuk...
Denisa pov- i cho chhuah zawk ania in chhir suh ang che...///tih pah in a bawh rem nghal thlap...samu chuan a lu a bu nghat nghat a...////Nang hian min dawi â zo vek tawh engtin nge it a, thlahle ngawih ngawih tur che hian min siam reng thei bik a!!??haa
Samu kawr vel chu a phel sak mawlh nawlh a....rei lo te ah a phelh ruak nghal vek...a mah pawh chu a in phelh ruak rang ve hle bawk...
Samuela pov- //thaw lum ham ham chung chuan///dan ah chuan i unaupa ka la ni reng ania....min dim deuh ang che...
Denisa pov- pawn lam mite leh dan chuan ka unau pa an ti che nga mahse room chhung ah chuan ka desirous partner ini..,ka hmangaih,ka neih chhun leh min nei tu.... haaa??
Samuela pov- anih chuan i desirous brother ka ni zawk tihna nih chu an 2 ah kan kal kawp tir chuan ni zawk em///denis chuan a lu a bu nghat a.....///....chuan ti rawh le ....i thil neih chu han chen la...zan in bak chu ka in phal zau vak dawn lo nia...
Samu chu denis chuan a kuai bawk thlawp a...a nghawng ah chuan a zuk kuai dak a...a hnunglam a ṭang chuan a hmui ah a zuk fawp bawk....samu ban chu a hnung khirh tlat bawk a...an in fawp mawlh mawlh denis chuan samu hnung leh nghawng te chu a fawp kual ruai a...
Denisa pov- eng tin nge ka phur ngawih ngawihna tur hian hian it na hi min pek reng theih bik ka unaupa?????(((HOW GIVE ME DESIROUS MY ADOPTED BROTHER)
Samuela pov- a chhan chu maw MIN HMANGAIH VANG LEH KEIPON KA HMANGAIH VANG CHE IN .....ka hmangaih che denis....
Denisa pov- keipon...chuan ka hmangaih rêng bawk ang che......
Time skip 2 moth laters
Masangi pov- Doctor ka note chu a ṭha ti raw...naktuk hi kan in neih ni tur ania... pheikhawk sang chu a bun pui chiloh ang ti raw???
Doctor pov- note chu a ṭha khawp mai bak ah thla 4 lai ani tawh a ,a hlauh thawn awm tawhloh ...mahse i prancretitis nat na hi damdawi i ei ṭha lo em ni??!!
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Entangled Fates Book 1 - Quantum Beginnings
“By far, the greatest danger of Artificial Intelligence is that people conclude too early that they understand it.” —Eliezer Yudkowsky Hey all, we're moving over to book 2. This content is in a state of transition. The book is now availble on Amazon (includes extra chapters): https://www.royalroad.com/amazon/B07W1534R8 Artificial intelligence was nearly mankind’s last invention. AI took off like a rocket, then when it racked up an impressive death toll, it crashed before it could blossom and took most high-tech industries with it. Resistance and fears became deep-set. Two decades after the infamous Rev. 4.6 incidents, humanity hasn’t quit dreaming of the wealth and power that could be at their fingertips. A new generation of mega-corporations rose from the ashes. When one melds a quantum computer to a barely functional mental patient as a PR move, there are those who seek to profit, those who want to destroy it, and Alex. Alex Sage is a typical college student trying to keep up his grades and maybe find a meaningful connection with the fairer sex. Then, an automated semi crashes into his home, killing his family and turning his head into a pin cushion in the process. Alex awakens to find most of his memories gone and an illegal AI hidden in his brain implant. Now the pet project of a tech billionaire and heavily in debt, Alex struggles to stay valuable enough to be kept online. Still grappling with the repercussions of his injuries, and threats from a dangerous anti-augmentation political movement, there are no easy answers and threats loom around every corner. Alex must use whatever resources he can to escape from under the thumb of a ruthless corporation, while keeping those he comes to love safe. Chapters will stay up on RRL until Aug 10. It'll go up on Kindle Unlimited after that. How do you get those extra chapters I didn't have planned for RR? If you want them, they'll be in the published book. Book 2 will still make sense without them - I made sure of that. But... isn't $3 a lot for extra chapters? Think of it as tipping me for a good job and you'd also be getting my eternal thanks. If you enjoyed it so much that the idea of missing out a few chapters haunts you, I did my job as an author and made an engaging story. What's in those extra chapters? Resolving a few issues, set up for the cybernetic revolution, a rather intense sex scene with a new partner, revelations of who's really pulling strings, and a bit of set up for book 2. Complaints that people missed out on it when it was published here won't help (sorry!). I posted this for the folks who helped me shape the book, which is you all! (Again, yay!) But... Why! Why not keep it all on RR forever? My editor likes being paid for one. For two, I'd like the ability to get broader readership. If I break even on editor costs, I'll be incredibly happy. What about book 2? Drafts for Book 2 will go up around Sept 10. My draft of Book 2 is done, and it will be handed to the editor once Book 1 is published. Feedback has been even more positive. Beta readers devoured it and wanted more. I'll add a link to Book 2 once it's up on RR. I'm more or less, using you all for Beta Readers, so you get it before it's "canon" and edited. I invite active and meaningful feedback during this process. In return, you get early access to chapters. That does mean that the book content or plot might be adjusted before it gets published as I refine it. Sex Y/N? Yes. I heard the feedback, 90% wanted it explicit. You all will get the "full" experience. Will I dump all of book 2 here? Honestly, I'm not sure yet. At a minimum, it'll be up to the 75% mark as we collect feedback, much like what I did with book 1. It really depends on how good the feedback is and how nice people are. Lots of support + meaningful feedback to make it better = higher likelihood you get all the book. Will be it up here indefinitely? No, it'll probably go up on KU at some point, but I'll make sure there's enough time for a large readership to grab it here. Then we move to book 3 which already is around 60K words already. What about other adventures in the same universe/characters? Yep. Absolutely. Nothing ready to share yet though. I plan to keep those side chapters and more slice of life stories as RR exclusive. Since I'm carving this off in book-sized segments, I'll have to figure out where those disconnected story arcs belong. I'm open to suggestions.
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Bookworld Online: Marsh Man
Welcome dear friends, to the Virtual Reality Full Immersion System called Bookworld Online! Your name is David Drake and you are a 10 year old slave to the Marsh Hag. You were bought from your parents when you were only a small child at two years old. You don't really remember your old family at all. That's a good thing, since you would hate them on sight for selling you to her. All you've know for your whole life is pain. You are usually quickly healed and receive a lot of training and experience as her unofficial apprentice. It's unofficial because she would never pay to have you registered as an actual apprentice. To everyone else, you are just the boy she took pity on and brought into her home. What they don't know is that you are much more than that. So much more. You are her food. She uses you as her own personal buffet and she indulges herself quite often. You even have the permanent scars to prove it. You have learned many things from her, mostly without her knowing, since you have been helping more and more with her spell work the last few years and her potion making. The only parts you can't do are the magic condensing rituals that her potions require and the mana infusions that a lot of her other creations need. Do you wish to initiate the Main Storyline with these parameters? Please Note: I publish daily.Second Note: I changed this story to a fan fiction. It is based on Swamp Boy. The old story is about 4 years old and was dropped after 19 long chapters. The author hasn't been online since then, so I figured it was safe to do my own take on it.
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Earth's Greatest Magus
What if Magic has always existed ever since the beginning of the Earth we are living on, but history has been written in order to hide these facts. What if the prosperous and well-known people in history is actually a mage? Enter a magic academy, rule your country. Be at the pinnacle of life! Join me in the journey of Emery and the others in the world of Knights and Magic as he becomes the Earth's Greatest Magus. Authors Note:I have always been fascinated by writing fantasy relating to historical facts. In this story, you will find characters inspired by the real world and facts. The universe I created hopefully will make the reader's imagination excited and logically plausible. I hope you enjoy it.
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I was reincarnated on the One piece World
An ex marine officer who was fired by the government was executed with death penalty for case of theft of private and secret documents in the Pentagon of United States and being a part of International Terrorists Isis. Unfortunately, all of this was just an alleged accusation. Despite of his prestige and good record in marine, he was still sentence to death. Before he died, he just remembered his favorite anime One piece. Remembering Whitebeards word, he terribly shouted his dying will. " ONE PIECE EXIST....ONE PIECE IS REAL ". Yet, soon as he knows that his death had arrived, his body trembled and an unconscious calmness covered him. He was like a golden Buddha who had reached Nirvana. Facing Death with out regret. Later he find himself in another world, a world where in he himself is very familiar off. He wonders around it and saw a huge crowd around the corridor of every street. On his way he saw a tall execution platform. Yun , cannot believe what lies in his sight. For right in front of him was none other than the famous execution platform, where the said pirate king was slain. The platform where Pirate King Gol D Roger was executed.. The Logue Town.. Jason an ordinary exmarine was revived on the Real One Piece World...
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Pokemon: Retold
A new take on the Pokemon franchise that attempts to combine the games, anime, and other source material. Follow the adventures of Red as he explores the Kanto region! Be warned, it's probably gonna be shit
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Story Ideas and Beginnings
I just write some of my story Ideas here, so you are free to take them and make something out of it. I would be happy to read your own version or story. (Also on Webnovel)
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