《HOW GIVE ME DESIROUS MY ADOPTED BROTHER ?? (mizo bl)》Denis a chu hmuh suh🥺🤒
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How give me desirous my adopted brother part-25
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Samuela pov- denis ni hnih lai a liam tawh hi,hna dang zawng tur tal a ka chhuah a ngai lawm,tia in khung beh reng ringawt hi awmzia awm lo emai...
Denisa pov- khawi ah mah kal angai lo..kha mihring pawh kha zalen deuh in khawlai ah ,a la leng a nia...jail a ka khung hma chu ,khawi ah mah i chhuak lo ang...
Samuela pov- ka ṭha tak tak lawm.. ti hian,min khung bet reng thei lo ang...../a sawi zo hman lo..
Denisa pov- ka veng reng thei loh che chuan ka khung bet reng mai loh che in.....kan compound pawh a zau lutuk tlat...ka thlun beh nghal loh che..u masang khawi ah mah lo chhuah tir suh..../a ti khui khui a
Masangi pov- denis , samuela tan hian a ninawm ve teh nia..
Samuela pov- sum thawh chhuah ve ka duh a lawm.../ngenngawl zet chuan a ti leh nang nang a
Denisa pov- anih chuan ka zirlai chawlh san in hna ka thawk mai dawn a mi??ti nge hna thawh ringawt pawh chu i ngaihtuah le,i duh zat zat pawisa chu min dil thei reng a lawm,ka neih zawng zawng pawh ka pe mai ang che chu.....
Samuela pov-chutiang lam anilo.
Denisa pov- anih chuan enge ni vak,i leng chhuak duh anih chuan ,u masangi rual in kal ang che,ka room pawh dawh ah ka ATM card leh hman chawp tur sum fai pawh ka dah vek ,khawi ah mah lo kal hlek suh...
Samuela pov- pawisa vang a ni ri ngawt lo....hna thaw ka duh lawm.../a ti vin ṭhat a
Denis pov- ka rem tilo ka ti.../a awki a ngaihnobei bik lo khawp mai...
Samuela pov- I nupui pawh ka ni lo /a ti vin leh ṭhak a.../Denis a chu a ngawi nghal dâk mai, samuela zawk chu a in thiam loh leh deuh hlek a,a chung a thil thleng a vang khan Denis a hi a la normal thei lo ,a mah a ngaihtuah lutuk vang zawk a ni si a...//ka sawi tum pawh ani lo nia./a ti chuai raih a...
Denisa pov- a dik !!!!!!/a ti chhum hmuk a,a hmel chu a lungawi lo tih a hriat ngawih ngawih ,a rilru na hmel hi a lang chhuak sam lutuk ,a beng a sen vek zel tlat a...a ngawi deuh ngal ngal phawt a, samuela chu a in thiam loh zual sawt bawk.
Samuela pov- denis Ka../a sawi zo hman lo
Denisa pov-ka tlai dawn ,ka kal .....U masang khawi ah mah, A mah in lo chhuah tir suh ang che/thu pe aw ka tak chuan a ti chhum leh hmak a,in chu lungawi lo tih hriat tak chuan a chhuah san nghal hmak mai.... samuela chuan a um chhuak nghal a..
Samuela pov-//denis a hnung a va kuah bei thap pah chuan/// ka thiam loh ani.... thinrim chung chuan min kal san suh...ummmm!?
Denisa pov- min min hmu nge pawn anih hi....
Samuela pov- /denis a kuah na chu a phelh leh rang tak zet ,a in thlahrung khawp mai,kawt mai ania,mi in an loh hmuh chu thil ṭha ani lo tih a hria,an in kar mi hriat loh hi an 2 tan thil ṭha ber ani.. Denis a harsatna a siam sak niin a in ngai hman ani.../// Tih palh....ihhhh khawi ah mah ka lo kal ang..../a ti bah nia a,mi hmuh hlau tak chuan a hawi kual nghal ruai bawk ,in thiamloh tih hriat tak chuan luh leh mai a tum a,Denis ngaih dan chu ani leh silo,chu tia mi hmuh a hlau lutuk tur a ,a ṭawng chhuak chu...
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Denis pov-//samuela chu a kai let dawr a,a kuah bei thlawp a// a ṭha e,thuawi deuh in awm tawh ang che....ka ngaidam che ...
Samuela pov- min min hmu nge !!min thlah rawh...
Denis pov-//a hawi kual zuk zuk a,tumah an awm hnai lo bawk a, samuela hmui chhah tep ,sexy zet ah chuan a zuk fawp zauh a....// Khawi ah mah nangmah in lo kal suh ang che.../tih zui lang lang pah chuan a bike chu a ti nung a,a lungawi leh tawh viau mai... samuela pawn nui var var chung in ,a en liam a...
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Lza pov- enge samuela chu ni ta,hna i zawn sak leh dawn em??
Amuana pov- in ah sawn i khung bet reng ringawt dawn ami??nopang chhiat thlak lutuk.../ti ve khanglang..
Denis pov- kha pa kha eng tin nge ,ka en liam reng dawn miah lo....
Lza pov-Alberta maw?? A hna ah khan tih sual nei lo ang hmak in a la thawk chhun zawm zel,keipon ka ngaih ven reng a lawm... samuela hnaih ah chuan a rawn kal ngam tawh lo tawp ang....a lo kal leh anih vaih chuan ka that nghal ang.../a sen nghal ṭan mai, Alberta sawi chhuah tawh hi chuan lawmzuala hi a sa phat zel mai a...
Amuana pov- samuel a ber hian engmah hriat chhuah a la neilo ami??
Denisa pov- neilo.. zêp a nei pawh ani mai thei....ihh dik tak a sawi chuan samuela hian zep a nei in ka hria....
Zep chu a nei ngei a lawm,thil thleng kha a tam zawk chu a hre chhuak tawh ,a rilru a tawt tak zet denis a bul ah a sawi chhuak ngam bawk silo a, samuela hian Alberta nen khan sex an hman leh hmang loh a in hrethiam tawh bik miah lo mai nih chu , blujob a tih sak lai vel te a kekawr a hlih sak lai vel te kha a hre rua rua a,a vai in a hre chhuak thei bawk silo ....amah chauh in he a rilru hah na hi a pai a,anih na tak ah chuan sex an hmang dun ngei ani in a hria ani,denis a thinrim a hlau bawk si,thil thleng te kha denis a hian a za vai in hre ta se, Alberta lah khan sual lui a ni bawk silo a,a ruih vang chu ni tho mahse ,a mah ain thiam thei lo ani,a rilru a buai em a ni...
Lza pov- ehe carson lo kal ve rawh thil kan lo sawi mai mai a..../,carsona a hmuh veleh chuan alo ti dam nghal thlap a..
Carson pov- november kan thleng leh der tawh ,thla leh Chrismas ani mai tawh nia,hun kal chak zia hi ti ru!!!!samu chu awm ve se a nuam lehzual ngawt ang....
Denis pov- give kha tu ta tur nge !
Carson pov- Benjamina ta tur kan class CR kha ,vawiin a Birthday ania...kan in kawm ve deuh ṭhin sia,in pe ve dawn lo mi...//amuan chuan an thu sawi chu ngaihsak hmel pawh a pu ve leh tawh lo....
Lza pov- kan kawm ve ngai vaklo a....enge i pek dawn...!??
Carson pov- pawisa ka nei tam silo a....ballpen mai mai....a ṭha ve tho angemm?
Lza pov-ummm ṭha lutuk e.. a lawm ngawt ang...
Carson pov- an hosa sia a lawm vak pawh ka ringlo..../a ding hluai a/// Heiiii Benjamin Piancham chibai...//nui sang in an in chibai a...
Lza pov- Happy Birthday bena
Benjamina pov- ka lawm vek e...ehe hei ka give tur ami carson/beisei nei tak chuan a ti hap a, carson a chuan a lu bu nghat chung chuan give chu a pe ve nghal mai bawk ...//ka van lawm ve//give chu a hawng nghal a, Benjamina hi tuai deuh chi ang kha ania, Lawmzuala hi a star bawn tawp , Lawmzuala hi chu gay leh hmeichhe ho ah hian a lar ve hrim hrim a,a caring a,a hmel a lo chhiat zawk zawk lo bawk vang hian,an ṭhian 3 ah pawh hian a luck ber ....
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Lza pov- tun lai chu group lam ah kan lang tam lo lutuk a,i Birthday tih pawh kan lo hre ve lo a.../in thiamloh hmel tak chuan a rawn ti hap a...
Benjamina pov- /lai zet chuan/a pawilo ka note book ah hian i hming min ziah sak la tawk mai///wow pup mai a,lawmzual chanchin ziah ma bu ang mai ani,a thlalak a in bel tuar mai ,at chilh hneh ve tak chu ani,a kawm te pawh a chei mawi chuai chuai khawp mai bawk a, lehkhabu tawp ah chuan Lawmzuala hming ziah na tur te chu alo dah awl thlep a....
Lawmzuala chu a lâi dawn dawn mai lawm le,denis a chuan a nuih puh puh a, Amuana lah a lo nui dir leh char char tawh,an ṭhianpa hi chu an nuih sawh ve thei hrim hrim,at chilh tu te hi a nei chhelo thei sia maw ....
Lza pov-khawi ka lo ziak ang!!//carson a pek pen chu a pe vat a, Lawmzuala chuan a hming chu a ziah sak a,milar ang in hming sign te nei heklo le ,a hming pum a ziah sak kua a....///pen i nei mawi bik sia /an ti zauh a,pen chu pek let leh nghal mai a tum a
Benjamina pov-i duh chuan nei rawh ka pe ang che....mawi i ti nih chuan...../a ti nui var var a,nachin lawk a ,a pe tu rilru pawh a dawn eih lo,pawisa neilo chung chung ,ṭhianpa te tiin pen manto chi a leisak ve kha nia....Carson a lung chu a awi zan lo ani...
Lza pov- carsona pek che ni sia,bak ah tiang pen te chu a to sia ,in pek ringawt chi ani hlei nem ,ka lawm lutuk ,kha la let leh zawk rawh/a ti dam thlap a...
Benjamina pov-tiang pen te chu ka ngah lutuk tlat ,mawwww la hram rawh, Carson a te chuan a duh tak in min pe tawh a,ka ta ni tawh lawm...aw khawngaih in....////carson a ngaihdan chu a lo ni tawh chiah lo,a rilru a ti na dawn dawn mai lawm le....
Lza pov- ka ta tur ngei in min la leisak ve zawk la ti raw!!/a ti dam leh thlap a, Amuana chu a rawn ding hluai a,pen chu a rawn la daih....
Amuana pov- Benjamin ,ulawma pen hi i pek avang in a lawm e,//lza chu a en leh a//chuan ulawm pen hi min pek a vang in ka lawm e..../a ti bul hmak a,pen chu keng in a kal daih....
Benjamina pov- hei Lalthlamuan Lawmzuala sin pen kha ka pek...nang ka pe lo che...
Amuana pov-ulawm an mi pe ka tih chu, i pek tawh tho kha....
Benjamina pov-///thin rim zet chuan///ka pek tur zawk che sin lawma /a ti nang nang a...
Denis a pov- Lawmzuala tan , i engmah i ui loh ang bawk khan,amuana tan pawh Lawmzuala hian engmah a ui bik ngai lo a../a rawn ti nui suk a, ngaiawm zet chuan lawmzuala chu a rawn kuah a,a kal pui dawt dawt mai, Lawmzuala chu in thlahrung chi anih bak a,mi tupawh ngaihtuah chi alo ni bawk a, Benjamina rilru na tur chu a ngaihtuah hle mai,mahse denis a chuan ngaihsak tir hman pawn a siam lo a kal pui daih ani...
Benjamina pov- chumite chu an va sual tak/a ti vin hlak a.
Carson pov-/ngeiawm zet a Benjamina nuih luih sak pah chuan///Amuana hi chu an ṭhianho note bik bik a nia,an duat lutuk a//a rawn ti elh leh sak a,
In chhuang leh in ti thei zet chuan a kal san vawh vawh,a thilpek hlut sak miahlo tu chapo zet an ti zak zek chu a lawm ru var var khawp mai...
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Samuela chu a ti dan ngai bawk in masangi nen facial an ti dun vel mai maia, in vel masangi chu a ti fel pui ve vel mai mai ṭhin ,tihtur a neilo ve em ani.. chawmhlawm tawp nih chu ,hreawm ati,denis a lung tih awiloh a duh bawk silo a....a phone chu a rawn ri ral a, number hriat loh hnen a ṭang in video tenawm tak a dawng ta, Alberta nen a video tenawm tak mai ngei chu ani,sofa a ṭang chuan a tho hluai a....in chung lam ah a tlan chho nghal ,a hlau thawng tak zet... masangi chuan samuela awm dan chu mak alo ti viau mai a,mahse a ngaihven zui lem lo,video rawn thawn tu chuan a rawn call nghal zat bawk a....a âw chu computer hmang a ,tih dang lam ani.mipa nge hmeichhia tih pawh a hriat thei loh..
📱Samuela pov-Albert ini ti raw, khawngaih in Albert ti hian tinge i tih..i pawi sawi ka nei mi!!/a mang ang tak zet....
📱* Video hi a hmuhnawm ti raw!!! Denis a khan hmu ta se la...hmuhnawm a ti ve ngawt in ka ring...
📱 Samuela pov- Denis a chu hmuh suh....khawngaih in....pawisa i duh em ni???tinge ka chung ah tihian i tih..../a mittui a hru leh zauh ṭhin,a mangang em ani...
📱* Denisa rilru nat dan tur zia hi....a hmangaih chuan a chung ah tiang hi a ti chu ani si ahhh...
📱 Samuela pov- ka chung ah khan enge i tih!???.. Police ka hrilh dawn...
📱** Haaa haaa haa engmah finfiah na pawh i neih loh kha nopang mawl lutuk....i chung a thilthleng pawh hre lo in eng nge Police ho bul ah i sawi anga...
📱 Samuela pov- enge i duh a?? Khawngaih in video hi delete rawh
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📱** Kha in kha chhuah san rawh,tlai lam ah denis a chuan nang leh Lawmzuala in kar a zawt ngei dawn che a,engkim pawm ang che....anih loh chuan he video hi Social media ah ka theh darh a nga,nang leh denis a in kar pawh ka sawi vek bawk ang,nang leh Denis a nun hi chhe vek se i duh lo anih chuan....ka sawi ang hian ti ang che....i hria em???
📱 Samuela pov- denis a chu ka kal san thei tawh lo...tiang hi chuan ti suh,Khawngaih in enge hlawk na tur i neih chuang a..
📱****Hlawk na engmah ka neilo, Alberta ka nilo bawk kei hi Zomuanpuia ka nih hi denis a U........ka sawi ang chuan ti ang che...denis a nun chhe vek se i duh ka ringlo...kha video kha a lickout a nih vaih chuan denis a rilru fim lo hian engpawh a ti duh dawn ani tih ngaihtuah la,in in kar pawh ka sawi ngailo in denis a hian a pho lang vek thei ngei ang....denis chu i hmangaih i in ti ni lawm ni!!??a hmalam hun tih chhiat sak vek a,rilru na tak a siam chu i duh in ka ringlo....
📱 Samuela pov- u zomuan... ka kalsan leh anih chuan ,a tuar zo lo ang....ka tina leh dawn sin.../a ṭap zawih zawih tawh mai...ṭawng pawh a ṭawng ṭha thei tawhlo....////ka ngen a che ,ka kalsan anih chuan ka thi ang a ti sin... khawngaih in khawngaih tak in..tiang hi chuan ti suh.....
📱 Zomuan a pov-A thinlung hliam tu vang in,amah ain ti na duh bik dawn em ni??denis a chu nang ai hian ka ngaihtuah fe zawk hre rawh....a ṭhian lak a rinawm loh san tu mihring vang chuan a nunna a la lo ang...hei hi denis a tan a ṭha tur anih vang ani he tiang hi ka tih..
📱 Samuela pov- tinge ka chung ah kha tiang kha i tih...denis a hi ka hmangaih lutuk a sin...
📱 Zomuan a pov- i hmangaih anih chuan a tan a ṭha tur chu i hria in ka ring e....hei hi ka ngen na tawp ber che ni,thui tak kal pawh ka tumloh vai nen,tiang khawp a ka kal thui duh anih chuan ngaihtuah chiang rawh....kei leh kanu hian engtik ah mah in in kar hi kan pawm.ngai dawn lo a,hei aia thui pawh kan kal duh ang....denis a natna siam zel tawhlo la....ka sawi ang chuan ti ang che
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📱Denis pov- tunge????
📱** Ka tla lak rawn thawn che kha ilo hmu em
📱 Denisa pov-tunge inih ka tia lawm...i in sawi nghal loh chuan ka off dawn ani....
📱**Nangmah ngaisang deuh tu che ka nia, samuela nen in in kar pawh hi ka hria a chuan...
📱 Denisa pov-chuan enge??i duh duh hrilh rawh ka pawi ti chei lo.../phone off a tum a
📱** Anih Lawmzuala nen hian in in ṭawm tih na mi???//a rawn ti hap a,denis a beng chu a verh zawk mai
📱Denis pov- enge i sawi awm zia...??/a ti vin hluk a
📱**Ka thil rawn thawn che chu en phawt la....//denis a chuan messege chu a en nghal a,pic 10 chuang leh video tawite pakhat ani, Video ah chuan lungchim tak a,Lza leh samuela in fawp lai a lang a,pic ah chuan in thla hle hmel tak a thawmhnaw in bel miahlo a tui tak a an muhil lai ani bawk...denis a lung chu a phu rang zawt zawt a,a sa lum pup pup mai...ruh tak in a kut a hum a,a thinrimna chuan a zial â nghal mup mup mai...////ka ṭawng i hre thei em!??i ṭhianpa leh i bialpa hian an bum che tih hi i hre lo rei tawh lutuk a,ka khawngaih che .....thla hi ka lak ania,thudik hre tur in ka duh em che ni....
📱Denisa pov- dawt ,tu nge nih , samuela hetiang a tilo ang /a ti vin leh tuar a..
📱** Kha i rin lutuk na vang khan a lawm thudik i hmuh theih lo,harh chhuak ve tawh rawh....an ni 2 bum kual ah khan awm tawh suh...i tan a ṭha tur duh tu ka nih hi.... thuthlukna dik tak siam ang che...
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Denisa pov- ai //ring tak leh vin zet chuan/anilo..../a bike chu a tinung a,a ṭhiante pawh nghak lo chuan in lam a pan nghal a, a mittui a luang zung zung reng mai....
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Masangi pov- ehe pi remi i va rawn haw hma ve ??
Pi Remi pov- nia chawhnu lam ah appointments ka neilo a.... enmargecy awm thut pawh nise pu vana a awm a....vawiin chu ka rawn haw hma....ehe tinge Samuela chu a va chauh hmel ve...
Masangi pov-a ṭap nasa lutuk a,a chhan ka zawh lah in ,engmah nilo a ti tlat sia...
Pi remi pov- ti te kha chuan denis a ,a phi buai leh chung a nga sin...va in phih fai rawh samuel...///thil thleng hi Zomuana rua hman na vek tawh ani a,eng vak mah pi remi hi chuan a hriat pui tawh lemlo ani..
Denis chuan kawng a rawn hawng ṭhuai a.... samuela chau tak a ,sofa a ṭhu bem chu a kai tho nghal lawp bawk.... a phone a thlalak chu a en tir a...
Denis pov-sawi fiah rawh....nang hian min bum em ni????/samuela chuan sawi mai tur a hrelo ,a ngawi vang vang a,thlalak avang chuan a bing nghal mup mai ///nilo.....dawt ti raw!??? Ruih enge maw i neih vang mai mai ani ti raw!!??aw niee ani ngei ngei a, engmah i sawiloh dan ah,a ṭha e...a ṭha vek e.../a mah chu a in beng dai chawp leh a,a chi ai hmel erawh a hriat ngawih ngawih tho mai....
Masangi pov-enge a!??khawimaw phone kha.
Pi Remi pov- enge tinge khawi maw phone chu....
Denisa pov-/phone chu a lo hum nghet tlat a// engmah ani lo.. en ve kher pawh a ngailo...
min chhang dawn na nge !!!enge maw tal sawi ve ta che//mittui luang zung zung chung chuan samuela dar ah chuan a sawi lawp a, samuela awm dan a vang chuan a ti mang ang zual em ani....////thu dik anilo tih sawi rawh,in in kar ah engmah a awm lo ti raw...
Samuela chuan alu thing ringawt,ṭap ri lo tur a,a in seh ruh nasat luat ah,a mit a sen in a biang leh beng thleng in a sen vek ani ,a mittui a luang ve zung zung tho bawk a...
Samuela pov- ka tih palh....
Denisa pov- //chu thu chuan a zawhna chu a va chhang chiang si tak em,a ngaihtuah na hi a dik tih hi,pawm duhlo viau mahse samuela chuan a pha lo ani tih a ti lang chiang viau si a....denis a tha chu a zawi nghal hnawk mai...///ai ai ka tih palh tih ka rem ti tawh lo tih i hriat kha!!!i harhfim lo vang tih chiah sawi rawh ...aw chuan ka ngaidam ang che...../a âw a khur hlak hlak tawh mai
Samuela pov- ka tih palh,ka tih sual ani...bum tur che ka nilo a sin..pawi ka ti lutuk..
Masangi chuan a ngaihna a hrelo tak zet samuela hian denis a phatsan lo tawp ang,mahse tinge samuela hian rinawm loh san ang mai a ,a awm si a...hei hi nge awm zia phone a thlalak saw tu nge le...a rilru a lo buai nasa tak zet...pi Remi ve thung chuan ,a tawp a tawp ah chuan thil ṭha chu alo thleng ta,ka fapa nun chhe tur hi chunglam pawh hian a rem ti biklo anih dawn hi ,a lo ti rilru ve mek bawk a
Denis pov- enge tih sual ka nei ami??/a mittui chu a luang zung zung a,tun bak hian a thinlung hi a la keh sawm ngai lo,kum 2 chhung samuela zawng a,a rilru na hreawm ai khan a na a ti zawk fe ani...//// Tih sual ka nei anih chuan ka siam ṭha ang ,ka tih palh ,min kal san suh,a pawilo ka ngai dam vek ang che mahse min kal san suh o....../in hnit hlap hlap chung chuan samuela ban ah chuan a va vuan de de a
Samuela pov- /a lu thing a/// pawi ka ti ,mahse ka ning tawh lutuk ,kum 2 chhung ka bih ruk san tawh chung che pawh in,tinge ila hriat thiam theiloh..... A hma ang khan ka hmangai thei tawhlo che...
Denis pov-a nih chuan tinge a tir kha i sawi lo,tinge kha tiang khan i awm si ...
Samuela pov- i luhlul lutuk vang hian mawle....tah hian tawp tawh ang,kan awm dan hi ,thil nih dan tur a ni ngai lo hrim hrim ///
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Samuela hmai chu a ri chawrh a,bengtu chu pi remi ani,masang i pawh a au tuar thei hial,a beng na em ani, samuela biang chu a sen nghal ṭawn ṭawn a
Pi Remi pov- a dik chiah ,ka fapa i lo bum ngam vel a...a nun hi i ti buai vek ani hi....tinge ka fapa hian ti sual a nei em ni....chhuak rawh ,he in hi rawn rap tawh hlek suh chhuak vang vang rawh...ka fapa hmu phak ah hian rawn in lan tawh suh...i tuar tir hnem zo zai tawh lutuk.../samuela ban ah chuan a kai a,a chhuah pui hlawk hlawk mai...
Masangi pov-denis dang ta che....denis//a ti zui lawng lawng a, Denis erawh chuan melh pawh a melh duh tawhlo...a mittui a luang zung zung a,a khawhmuh a fiah loh ruai tawh mai....
Samuela chu in a ṭang paih chhuah ani ta, thawmhnaw engmah tel lo in.masangi chu denis a hma ah chuan a va ṭhu rawp a,a mittui a luang ve zung zung tho mai..///denis i ngaihtuah na fim hmang tum rawh,in in kar tih chhiat tum an awm ni in ka hria.... samuela sawn kal na tur a nei miahlo ania.../a ti lawm lawm a,denis a erawh in engmah a sawi tawh bawk silo ...
Pi remi pov-i duh chuan nangpawn i zui thei ang.... Lalnunsang ...
Denisa pov- ani rawn hmer tel ve kher suh,//a lo ti chhuk hmuk a, mittui nen a room lam ah a chho hmiah mai,a thinrim in ,a thinlûng hi ana rih em ani....
Masangi pov- samuel ////pawn ah chuan a chhuak a, samuela chu a um zui vat a...
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Dungeon Core Chat Room.
This is a slower-paced "experiment and dungeon building" web novel that tries to use the idea of peer-to-peer communication with Dungeon Cores instead of Dungeon to slave monster communication to break up the detailed dungeon building. Rank 1 description: (minimum met for system initialization...detailed description as follows) Each race was given a system by the gods to make up for their shortcomings and balance their place in this world. Humans: Abysmally bad at understanding and using magic unable to use more than the lowest of magic were given the "Skill System" magic in the form of premade skills with use, study, and mastery tied to experience. Elves: Intuitively understand magic and have long lives leading to vast knowledge and skill in their chosen fields. However, as a species, they have nearly zero sex drive and less than low fertility, so they were gifted the "World Tree System" with experience gained through the care of natural areas – gifting the chance of children to increase their numbers without dirty copulation. All “natural” or “wild” monsters are given an "Evolution system" designed around killing and consuming as many creatures as possible, slowly increasing strength and, at thresholds, allowing mutations to alter them multiple times. Dungeon cores are different. Unlike humans, they can see, manipulate and live off mana. Unlike Elves, they naturally crystallize after extended periods of time in high mana level areas. However, they cannot easily move or communicate and typically go insane without companionship. As a species other than the odd eccentric they are unimaginative. Brute forcing solutions without the drive to truly innovate. Thus they have been gifted with the "Dungeon Connection System" a magical version of the internet accessible by their peers that allows them to barter and sell: bait, traps, monsters, and knowledge, as well as entertain each other with “adventure streams” using exciting recorded battles and humorous reels of arrogant chumps biting off more than they can chew to often fatal effects. This is the casual story of a dungeon unluckily spawned far from potential adventurers forced to innovate beyond its peers to find its place in this world. Rank 2 Description: Justification. I've been on a dungeon core kick for months and while I love the genre – it's sparse with entries. Often the forced conflict gets repetitive and frantic solving of threats "power levels" the protagonist to god levels to progress the plot – taking away the nice steady progression fantasy I'm looking for. (Progression in this story is linked to how strong of monsters/traps/whatever he can create not his "level"...this is demonstrated by some of his newer monsters beating his older monsters not with discrete "this monster has 10 attack this one has 40") Additionally, the focus on 3rd parties with their drama takes away from the reason I’m reading dungeon core novels in the first place – I'm looking for magical crafting, experimentation and kingdom building – not defence from higher and higher levelled enemies looking to steal/destroy/control the MC. This novel is kind of just me writing the story I wish I could read. I like thinking about the experimentation that can be done in fantasy settings using 'mana' as an excuse to make up rules and try to keep them internally consistent. IE once I define how a rule works, I'm going to commit to keeping it – no breaking hard truths I've given when it's convenient, even if it backs me into a corner. Hopefully, that should make the story interesting to read even if it's SOL and less action-oriented. There will be problems to solve and a clear progression in strength (of created monsters and knowledge) however due to not wanting to force conflict for the sake of conflict the general theme will be closer to slice of life with few action sequences and no overarching goal so please keep that in mind when picking this up as the genre is not for everyone. Finally, I have a clear goal of what I want from this story (not an endless romp but a series of arcs and then a conclusion that's a couple of dozen medium-sized chapters long) I want to commit to finishing it or at least bringing it to a point of rest. I hate all the engaging stories that stop with a “hiatus” indefinitely so in the event I lose motivation I'll work to end this even if the ending becomes rushed/unsatisfying just to give a sense of closure. I’m planning on including several polls in terms of direction and taking feedback heavily into account if I get enough readers (but may choose to ignore it if it deviates too far from the direction I want to take this as in feedback like: “The MC needs a cartoonishly evil arch-enemy that wants to enslave him and force the mc to pump out magic items” or “the MC needs to make a body and learn teleportation then live with humans” will get shot down without consideration.)
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Legends of Gods. Tale of Vjaira.
In the Sarkcente Kingdom, in the south of the continent, the life of the King is nearing its end. The Royal Capital and the entire country slowly grow unstable. The many Royal Children are amassing power and allies, and shall soon engage in a life-or-death struggle for the crown. The four Great Families and the three Great Martial Schools will be forced to abandon their long-standing neutrality and choose their own sides. During the calm before the storm, the leader of one of the four Great Families decides to take in two common children and to the shock of everyone, officially adopts them and treats them with great favor. However, Tei’ru dies before long, leaving the two kids ostracized and alone within the family. As the major events in the Sarkcente Kingdom and on the entire continent start to unfold, the ten years old boy, Laien, is about to begin his epic adventure. (Read the brief introduction before you proceed to reading the chapters, thanks!)
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Spirit King's Incarnation
I didn't know why I chose to save her. Was it to finally achieve something I could be proud of? Something was necessary in my other life. Change. I won't become the same person I was before. I reincarnated into another world of magic and fantasy. "I'll become the greatest mage in existence."
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The Dragon & The Demon
Orenda Nochdifache-Firefist has sucessfully overthrown the Empress Xandra and broken the empire to allow the individual colonies to return to self-rule, as well as abolished the chattle slavery that had plagued the land- earning her the title of "Orenda the Reign Ender". The Knights of Order have officially won the war in a bloody revolution, putting an end to the three centuries of warfare under Xandra's leadership. No longer must people live in fear of Xandra's puppet, The Emerald Knight. But now Orenda must face the realities of her dream- the imaginary princess has become queen. And, she has a deadly secret she must keep in the form of a teenage Urillian boy who is not what he seems. Anilla is still on a never ending quest to find her dragon; her people beleive that every memeber of their tribe is born with a soul bonded dragon that exists somewhere in the world- and Orenda's little secret claims to have seen Anilla's soul before. Could he be the key to ending her quest? This work is a direct sequel to The Crimson Mage, and will obviously contain major spoilers for that work, so it might be a better place to start (though I will warn you that the first chapter of that story may be the worst thing I've ever written. Just power through it or encorage me to put up a second draft). It can be found here: https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/21654/the-crimson-mage/chapter/307763/chapter-1
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Dungeon of Ideas
My name is Marshall Scott Law, I was a young rich bachelor who fell onto money when I inherited it from my Grandfather who died when I was twelve. For my inheritence I was given a little over one hundred million dollars. Instead of using the money to start a buisness I instead started to invest, after making some decent cash I decided to retire and live my life fishing. I died during a kidnapping gone wrong and when I thought all was lost I reincarnated as a dungeon. Sorry for the bad synopsis they just arent my forte. This is supposed to be a novel roughly based on a general guide while almost everything else will be decided by you the readers. I will make the first room but after that everything else is up to you guys.
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All World Online
Damien Close, age 19, becomes a quadriplegic after an unfortunate car accident, losing all function of his body from the neck down. With his parents in shock and his best friend suffering from unbearable guilt, Damien finds himself without much support. Being unable to even take his own life, Damien struggles to get past each day, looking for something to live for. With every passing day, Damien becomes more solemn and impassive. Three months later, Damien has almost given up, but to his surprise something unexpected happens. He is given the chance of a lifetime; to take part in a study focused on researching the effects of VR games on quadriplegic patients. Authors Note: If you find that the dialogue from the prologue to chapter 5 seem to be not that smooth, I apologize for that, it was my first time writing a fanfic so the dialogue was not in a format that is ideal. However, due to reader comments and some research I will try to attempt to improve the dialogue from chapter 6 and onwards. I may or may not come back to edit the first few chapters since I would have to rewrite most of it and I would rather spend that time writing out more of the story.
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