《HOW GIVE ME DESIROUS MY ADOPTED BROTHER ?? (mizo bl)》sorry 🥺🥺🌈
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How give me desirous my adopted brother-part 16
Masangi pov- samu ti nge i Phone kha i en i en a,tu emaw call i chang a ni maw,denis an a rawn la be lo che mi..
Samuela pov-chu tiang ani lo....ka lo en vel mai mai lawm
Masangi pov- awi awm vel loh lutuk mai ,ni dang a rawn biak hun che ni tawh sia,vawin chu thawh a hei niang a,i lo ṭap hman vel a nge.....eihsssss
Samuela pov- teuh lo...chu tiang eng mah awm lo nia o..
Masangi pov- zêp vel lo mai teh ahhhh ka hre thiam vek cheu ka sawi duh lo mai mai /thil in la hrethiam zet chuan a nuih suk suk a//..,zing chaw ka va ei ve lawk a nge o,damdawiin chaw hi a tui lo sia khu lai dawr te ah khan ka zu ei leh bik bik teh ang...
Samuela pov-lo let har suh o....//masangi a kal chiah a, Samuela Phone a rawn ri nghal a,denis a ,anih beisei tak in a , zîng a tang a a vawi tam tak nan a Phone chu a en vat a....denis a nilo in Zomuana zawk ani,a pickup vat a.../// Aw u Zomuan
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Zomuana pov- enge i an tawh...
Samuela pov- tuk in khan Masang in doctor a bia a,kar leh lam ah kan chhuak thei tawh ang a ti a....
Zomuana pov-a va lawm awm ve ,in thlawhna triket tur kar leh nilai ni ami tur kha in lo hmu tawh em...
Samuela pov-ummm ka lawm lutuk ania...
Zomuana pov -en teh Samuel ka thu sawi hi ngun tak in lo ngai thla la ka duh che,.......
Denis a nen in in kar hi kan hre chhuak tawh a,a ngaih na kan hre lo tak zet ani,chuan denis a hmakhua hi kan ngaihtuah tak zet a....fapa naupang zâwk ani a,chhungkaw hmêl ti mawi tu tur......
Samuela pov-ummm
Zomuana pov- tiang ri ngawt hi chuan kan en liam thei lo che u,tih sual engmah i nei lo tih chu kan hria a,mahse denis a nen in in kar hi i tih tawp a ngai ani...kan thu sawi engmah a ngai thla duh silo a....
Samuela pov- ka lo be dawn nia...
Zomuana pov- nilo e,awmzia a awm lo ang,enge maw ti tur in ka duh zawk che a,ka pa in i tan a ,a thil tih sak che te kha i ngai hlu a,ka pa zah na leh ka pa chung a lawm na tlem tal i nei ve anih chuan kalbo la ka duh che....
Samuela pov-enge i sawi awm zia...!!!ka kal bo ang maw!!!
Zomuan a pov-chu chu denis a tan a tha ber tur ani ,ka pa i chung a that na i rulh let ve theih dan tur ani bawk,denis hian hun chu a mamawh ngei ang mahse a hmu tawh lo vang vang che anih chuan a theinghilh ve mai ang che....
Samuela pov- rawn haw ve lo tur in min duh tih na em ni
Zomuan a pov- nilo e,delhi ah kha chuan i tan khawsak a har sa lutuk ang bak ah,i rawn haw velo anih chuan denis a hi a rawn kal ve nghal duh mai dawn a...masangi rual khan lo haw phawt la..nilai ni hian airport ah kan lo hmuak ngei dawn che a,tah chuan denis a pawh a rawn kal ve ngei ang, i in hmuh tir tur a nilo... airport a in rawn chhuk hun ah,chhuan lam siam la.....i kal bo dawn nia....ruahman na ka nei a , message in ka rawn hrilh ang che.engkim kalo ti fel vek ang,i in ah pawh khan i let rih tawh dawn lo ania....
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Samuela pov-khawnge ka kal ang/a mittui a luang zung zung tawh ,in sut ri lo tur in a in pet ruh fan fan ani...
Zomuan a pov- Message in ka rawn hrilh ang che.....denis a nun a pangai a ,bialnu te nei a nupui fanau nei a pangai tak a ,a awm leh theih hma chuan.. a hmuh ah rawn in lan tawh suh ang che....denis a tan leh ka pa vang in ka ngen che ni.......
Samuela pov- ka hre thiam a lawm//ṭawng pawh a ṭawng tha thei tawh lo..a tah achhuak em ani.
Zomuana pov-hei hi kan 2 thuruk ni rawh se....i in enkawl tha dawn nia....chawei tui le....
📱📱 Phone off
Samuela chuan a hmui nghet tak in a hup bet a,a in sit hlawp hlawp mai....he tiang hun hi a lo la thleng ngei ang tih chu a ring sa ani,denis a nen hian kum khua in an awm dun thei lo ang tih chu a hria,hman ah khan an in kar tih tawp pawh alo tum ve hman hial anih kha...mahse kum khua a tan a denisa hmuh leh tawh lo tur ang a ,a in ngaihtuah chhin ringawt pawh chuan maw a awm chu current shock ang mai hian a ṭêk nghal chuai chuai a....a thaw tha thei lo hial ani,a awm chu a chum dawt dawt a....a mittui pawh a hru hul seng meuh lo,a exiden na vang a a nak sawh nat te chu a lungphun in sep dawt dawt vang chuan a na zawk zawk a,a tap bang thei silo,ring tak in ṭap ri hawm hawm thei se chu a zia deuh tur mahse ,a awm na hmun hian a zir silo a,a thei tawp a ain sum a ngai minute 5 vel a liam leh hnu chuan tlem chuan a ṭah chhuak zual chu a zia ve ta,a Phone chu a rawn ri leh ral ral a,denis ani, a zîng thaw phat a tang in nghak hle tak in a rawn biak hun alo nghak ve ngar ngar kha ani a,denis chu, a thaw tlai thin a vang in, a mu tih buai a duh lo a,a va be hmasa duh lo mai thin kha nia,tun ah chuan denis call lak chu a phur lo tak zet in video call a ti leh ngei a nga a hmel a hmuh loh chuan college a kal duh dawn miah silo an exam mek bawk si , a hmel ah dik lo a awm tih a hre thiam ang tih chu a hlau tak zet, thawk a la hawk hawk a,a hmai te chu a beng thlawrh thlawrh a, a bul a darthlalangte chi masangi hun sak ah chuan ain en a a hmel ah chuan diklo awm in a hrelo, denis call chu a pickup a....
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Samuela//aw zang khai tak chuan/aw denis i va tho tlai ve...
Denis pov-tih palh u hlimi hi lawm min rawn kai tho hma rawh ka ti ve mawlh mawlh sia...
Samuela pov- u hlimi dem ziah suh..exam lai leh nghal in alarm te kam ta che......
Denis pov-exam lai anih vang a lawm zan ah lehkha ka zir rei thei lutuk a,ka tho hma thei thlawt lo...
Samuela pov-dawt bawk...
Denisa pov-video call ka on ania la rawh....
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Samuela pov- ehe i sam mai mai chu i delh sual ami ..
Denis//ha nawh suah suah pah chuan//ka la sulo a,ka su nga a dik vek mai ang...hei ka mit te hi en teh a val ve deuh em,lehkha ka zir nasa lutuk a/a mit a rawn keu nghek nghek a...
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Samuela pov-awiawm loh....
Denis pov-eheee /a ti hluai a..
Samuela pov- enge?
Denisa pov- tinge i hmel kha a bui lutuk,i mu tha lo mi...
Samuela pov- teuhlo vawin chu ka tho tlai lutuk a...chu vang mai mai chu
Denisa pov- kar 2 hi a rei tawh lutuk kum 10 ai pawn a rei tawh zawk in ka hria ...lo haw vat rawh ka ngai tawh lutuk che ,vawiin ah kan exam zo tawh dawn tho sia,ka lo kal ve zawk dawn mawn le
Samuela pov-kar leh ah kalo haw tawh dawn tho lawm ,i mawl lutuk....
Denisa pov-ni 5 ngawt a sin la ngai a la rei rapthlak dawn lutuk..../a Phone chu dawhkan ah a hung a , Samuela hmuh theih tur chuan anin thlak suah suah reng a, College kal tur a in siam pah a ngai a tho tlai leh lutuk a,a thawh ve leh a tang in in siam nghal char char a ngai chu anih hi....
Samuela pov-chaw pawh i ei hman dawn lo anih kha...
Denisa pov- engmah ka ei tui tak tak thei chuang lo a,i tel lo chuan.... zingchaw mai mai ka nghei ngun emai a.....
Samuela chu a thaw hak a, denis a pian nalh tak te , a hmêl tha tak te leh a pang ti lum nuam tak te,a engkim mai chu ,a hmu leh thei tawh dawn silo a,chu thil chuan a ti lung ngai tak zet,a mittui bawk chu a rawn far leh a,denis a ,a in thlak buai em a vang in a hmu hman lo hlauh a hru hul leh vat a...
Samuela pov- denis
Denisa pov-ka hman tep ...sawi rawh
Samuela pov-i hmeltha lutuk ,chuan i t-sirt kha i in hmeh lutuk a,ka ngai lutuk bawk che//
He tiang thu tlum zet hi Samuela hian a phuh chhuak ngaih hauh lo Phone mah ni se denis chu a lai sen tan tan mai....
Denis pov-/nui puh puh chung chuan//ehhhh ehhh min ngaih chuan vawiin chu kan in be ni leng mai dawn mi...
Samuela pov- mawl a ,exam lai inih kha....
Denisa pov- anih khawi ah mah min lo kal bo san suh ang che,ban ve leh ka lo be leh nghal dawn che nia,i mit te kha hmeltha hmuh tum in lo len ,lo len suh ang che.....chuan ka hmangai che.....muahhhh😙/Phone chu vawi 5 vel a chuk mawlh mawlh a...
Samuela pov-i zak lo lutuk....
Denisa pov- ka sawi chu o khawi ah mah lo kal bo suh ang che...
Samuela pov- ummm khawi ah mah kalo kal lo ang ,ka lo nghak char char ang che
Denis pov-Khawi ah mah min kal san lo a ngem
Samuela pov-i ho emai kal tawh rawh....
Denisa pov-vat ....ka kal dawn miahlo ania...ka hriat duh chu i hiat kha
Samuela pov- ummm kalsan lo ang..
Denisa pov- anih ka hmangai che.......
Samuela pov-a mit a sen vek tawh///kei pawn /tih leh Phone off a rual nghal a,a hmai chu a khup ah chuan phum in a puan sin lai chu nghet tak in a tham a,a ngai te bawk in a tah chu chhuak na men lo in a chhuak leh tawh....a in hnit hlawp hlawp a//ka tih palh denis ka tih palh pawi ka ti lutuk......./a ti niap niap a,a in hnit hlap hlap chung in atap khur hlep hlep a.... ....
5 days later
Denis chu phur leh hahdam tih hriat fahran chuan airport kawt ah chuan a tai vut vut a, airport luhna a guard pa chuan mak ti zet chuan a lo en haw haw reng a....
Lza pov- zorempui thu ve mai mai teh ,darkar chanve ngawt a la awm ania,i in vei chau vek ang.....
Amuana lah a thu ngawi ngar ngar airport luhna kawng ka chu a thlir tlawk tlawk a,hun chu rei a ti tawh vang vang ngei mai...he mi 2 te nghak hle awm dan hi a in ang lo ve ngawt mai .....em em dun hian........thlawh na rawn tum a tang a rei lo te ah chuan , airport a tang chuan Masangi chu hlim hmel pu sang chuan a rawn chhuak a, an bawr nghal tua.....
Carson pov- khawnge Samuela??
Masangi pov- bathroom ah ka kal lawk dawn ati a, ka rawn chhuah san....
Denisa pov-khawnge a thawm hnaw???
Masangi pov- ka lo nawr chhuah sak nghal ang che ka tia ,ngai lo a ti deuh tlat a...a rawn chhuak ve tep ang...
Lza pov-a van rei tawh e......
Samuela chuan messege a dawng a, Zomuana hnen a tang in ani,kawngka hnung lam a tang in rawn chhuak rawh kalo nghak che ...../ti zawng te mai , Samuela chuan kawng ka hnung lam chu a pan nghal vat vat a,a chhuah dawn tep chuan , airport luhna kawngka pui lam a denis a ,hlim hmel tak pu ,hmeltha tak ding chu a va melh zauh a,denis chuan ahmu ve lo.....a vawi tam tak nan " Ka tih palh ""a ti leh sep a,midang in an rawn hmuh loh nan airport chu a chhuah san vat vat a..... airport bul a thingpui dawr kawt ah chuan Zomuan a chuan a car in alo nghak a....
Zomuan a pov- an hmu che em/Samuela chuan a lu a thing ringawt....//lo lut rawh car ah hian i thawm hnaw then khat leh i bank account te ,i mamawh zual pui tur chu ka dah vek ,Aizawl hi i chhuah san nghal dawn nia,thing tlang hmun hla deuh hlek ah ,in beng bêl i tum dawn nia,i bank account ah khan pawisa pawh ka thun belh teuh a,i in luah na man tur leh i bul tan na tur chu a phu hru thei ang.....
Samuela pov- rei lo te chiah denis a hi min hmuh tir leh lawk thei ngem u Zomuan a tawp nan...
Zomuana pov- ai ka thei lo kan kal vat a ngai ,min hmu anih vaih chuan denis hian a hrethiam nghal vek ang....pawi ka ti tak zet ani Samuel ,tiang hi i chung ah kan tih a ngai ta si a...
Samuela pov-nilo kei ma dikloh zawk a lawm,in thiam loh na chhan tur a awm lo...kal ila sumo kan nang hman lo palh ang....
__sumo chhuah dawn chuan
Samuela pov- U Zomuan in lo in enkawl tha dawn nia, mangṭha le...
Zomuan a pov-awle denis a chu lo ngaihtuah suh , reilote ah a pangai leh vat mai ang..../Samuela chuan a lu abu nghat a,sumo ah chuan a lut ,an tlan liam zui nghal a...
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Lza pov- khawi ah mah ka hmu lo, airport chhung zawng zawng kan zawng chhuak vek tawh,
Amuana pov- thingpui dawr leh nepnawi zawrhna te pawh kan en vek tawh ,a kal tawh aniang....
Denisa pov- u hlimi kan be chhin ange in a thleng tawh pawh ani mai thei....min lo haw san daih a niang...
📱📱 Denisa pov- u hlim Samuelan in a rawn thleng tawh em??
📱Hlimi pov-lam tur in, in thianho in ,in kal ani lawm ni....nge awm zia...
📱 Denis pov-a rawn haw chuan min rawn be rawh o.../Phone a off nghal hmiah....//
khawi ah emaw ka kal lawk dawn ania....i zawn theih na hmun hmun ah lo zawng ula in biak tlang theih hlauh chuan min rawn hrilh nghal dawn nia/bike a ti nung a ,a tlan liam nghal....
Lza pov- khawnge maw kal dawn le!!kan call leh chhin ange....
Amuana pov-Lalrinchhan.....ka hmuh hun ah che chuan i chak lo ngawt ang hre rawh....hrep hian a/a bul hnawm bawm chu a chhui darh nuai a....carson chu a phu leng dawr mai,Lza chu tih ngaihna hre lo zet chuan a lu a thing nghat nghat ringawt a... Amuana thinchhiat zia hre chiang tu ania ngah mah a ngaih sak lo...
Lza pov-airport chhung ka va zawng tha leh lawk dawn nia ,khawi ah emaw nikhawhre lo in alo tlu te pawh ani mai thei... Samuela zawn kan la duh si a,carson taxi la lo va haw mai ula....chanchin kan in hrilh tawn zel dawn nia....
Masangi pov-lo chhuah san miah lo tur kha ka nia....
Carson pov-nia lo va haw mai ang....u masang...
Amuana pov- zojungkook Samuela hian thian dang kawm te a nei em nang lo....
Carson pov- nei lo....kan 2 in kan In kawm chawt a ni mai ,nangmah ni in ni leh mai a
Amuana pov- naaaaa Lalrinchhana mai mai chu .... Lalrinchhan min bihruksan rei lo ang hre rawh ,//a ti bak leh hluk a,a bike a ti nung a ,ani pawh pan lam ber tur hrelo in Samuela zawng tur chuan a tlan chhuak ve nghal daih a....
Denis chu Samuel a in lam ah ava kal a, Samuela in chhe te chu miin an luah ve ngei a,in sa lai mek an nih vang in an sak chhung in Samuela in chhe te ah chuan an lo in hnawh ve rih a,in luah man pawh an chawi ngai lem lo,lo in then awm rei tawh an nih avang in luah man vel pawh engmah a lak sak lo...
Mahse Samuela in ah pawh chuan Samuela chu a haw hauh silo a.....zawn leh na tur a hre tawhlo tak zet....a u te office lam a pan leh a,dik chiah mai kha hun chhung zawng khan an in kar hre vek siin engmah tih tum lo in an en liam mai mai a,au chuan Samuela chu eng tin maw tak a tih chu a ring nghal bur ,a u office lam ah akal vat a....
Denis pov-Zomuanpui khaw nge Samuela i thuruk sawi nghal rawh
Zomuana pov- i sawi awm zia hi ka hre hauh lo ania.... Police station anih hi i hre lawm ni.....
Denis pov-a nih chuan min man la ni mai lawm.... Samuela chu khawi ah pawh awm se ka zawng hmu tho ang i hria maw...
Zomuana pov- kei hian Samuela chu ka thuhruk i ring tih na em ni....
Denis pov- ka hrelo mahse ,khawi ah pawh awm se,ka tawp san lo ang..ka zawng hmu anga ka hruai haw leh dawn...
Zomuan a pov- dan ah chuan unau in ni tih i hria em, chutiang chu eng tin nge i sawi ngam...
Denisa pov-/thin rim leh bei dawng rilru na in seh ruh tan chung chuan//saw in saw ka in anih saw,ka pa khan ka hming vek in a dah, a in ,a ram ,a sum,tu pawh ka hruai lut in ka pet chhuak thei ,ka thu thu ni.... Samuela hi kal bo tur a ilo ti emaw,kan chung chang ah hian ilo in rawlh anih vaih chuan ka u i ni tih hi ka theih nghil ang,khawvel ah hian Samuela bak tu mihring dang mah ka ma mawh lo i hria em/a ti vin hlak a,, station chu a chhuah san a....
Zomuana pov-pawi ka ti denis,i tan a tha tur anih hi,pawi ka ti lutuk.....i tan vek ani..../mah ni in thiam lo tak a thawk la hak chung chuan a ti sap a.....
Fur ruah chu nasa tak in a rawn haw a....... Samuela chu sumo a tang chuan chhuk in taxi chhung ah chuan a in thiar lut a.. pan lam tur ber pawh hrelo in mittui nen a thu ngawi ngal a,denis a vawikhatmah a hmu leh thei tawh lo tur chuan a mittui chu a kauh chhuak nawn leh thin ....... vawiin ni hi a rei a ti tawh tak zet ani....a Phone a simcard chu a phawi a , Zomuan a simcard thar lei sak chu a vuah a.....harsa ti tak chung chuan , car tukverh ah chuan a simcard chu a paih chhuak a....a tah nasat tawh em avang in a mit pawh a buai lak tawh......
Taxi driver pov-tlang val khawi lam nge kan pan dawn le.....
Samuela pov- ka hrelo.../a ti sap a....
To be continued ......
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