《Never let you down ✅》Part 26
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Virat woke up to find himself leaning against Mahi bhai. Mahi asked him softly - "How are you feeling now Cheeku?" Virat just shifts himself in his lap and says - "Better bhai"
Mahi just took the opportunity to talk to him and asked - "Are u sure u are not lying Cheeks or hiding something?"
Virat got confused and said - "Why will I lie to u bhai?"
Mahi - "I dont want you to take stress about it but I know that u dont tell me about ur pain because u dont want me to feel the guilt. And you more comfortable with Rohit about it"
Virat was surprised to see how well Bhai knows him. Virat just hugged him and said - "Its not like that Bhai .. I am really scared bhai .. u will never leave me na"
Mahi answered - "Where will I go leaving u Cheeku ? I will never leave u kiddo .. don't pay attention to what others say to u .. whoever it is .. I am always gonna be there for u .. And I am sorry to have said things in anger but at that time I was really worried about u not that it is an excuse but I am genuinely sorry for that words. Please forget that"
Virat - "Please don't say sorry bhai .. it is my mistake actually I am not able to overcome and move on .."
Mahi - "No bacha it is not like that .. but bacha I need u to promise me something"
Virat was gonna ask him but they were interrupted as Rohit got up from his sleep. He also went near them and kept his head on Mahi bhai's shoulder.
Virat asked - "What promise u were asking bhai ?"
Rohit also got aware and looked at Mahi bhai.
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Mahi took a deep breath and told - "That if anything like this happens in future then u will not take any decision like u took this time .. taking the blame"
"Mahi is right Cheeku" said Dada from the door with others. Everyone sat around them whatever space they found in the room.
Jammy bhai - "Yes Cheeku .. Mahi is right .. u should not do anything like this"
Yuvi - "Ha Cheeku dekh is baar kitni problem hui tujhe and u had to suffer so much physically and mentally"
Everyone just saw that Virat turned silent and he was listening to everyone. Mahi nudged him and said "Promise me Cheeku"
Virat just said - "I am sorry bhai I cannot promise u"
Mahi asked surprisingly- "What are u saying Cheeku ?"
Virat sighed and said - "Bhai mai aise kuch promise nahi kar sakta .. because even if anything like this happens .. which I don't want obviously.. But I will not hesitate a bit to do it again. And I am not gonna listen to anyone regarding that even if it's Dada .. I am sorry but I can't promise anything like this."
Not to worry Virat much everybody dropped that topic. Everyone was talking on random topics.
Virat interrupted in between - "I want to say something to everyone"
(Dada,Yuvi,Raina,Mahi,Rohit,Bhuvi,Ash are in the room)
Rohit - "Kya hua Vi? Thik toh hai tu ? Kuch chahiye kya
Virat chuckled that his behaviour. Virat said - "Ro I am okay .. sun toh le Kya bol raha hu"
Rohit gestured him to continue. Virat continue- "Without u all I don't know how would I have survived this .. So just wanted to say Thank you ! And specially Ro because u handled me with so much care .. Mujhe nahi pata mai kaise recover hota."
And hearing that everyone just group hugged him not knowing what to say.
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