《Yaqeen ka safar》Part 4
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After returning from shehroz place... Asfiya was in their room... Asfand was sitting on the bed working on the laptop in his casuals...Zubia also changed into a night dress... and standing in front of the mirror removing the make up although she was not a makeup person but Gaiti insist her to apply Some...Zubia done with that and clean up the face and come from the washroom and saw that Asfand is still working on the laptop...
She came and sit on the bed and lean towards to his side and rest her head on his shoulder and encircled his right hand in her hands,she just close her eyes and taking the calm and warmth feeling from sitting beside her life...Asfand just noticed and smile at hi gesture.
He close the laptop and turn to her, as now He knew that her comfort and her happiness is the most important thing for him... Asfand just removed his hand from hers and take her in side hug as now she is resting her head on his chest and He is resting his head on the bed wall...
A:Tiredd??
Z:Hmmm...
A:ye Kya jawab huwa...Hmmm...
Asfand imitate her...Ye tou galat Baat hai...
Z:smile... Kya galat hai??
A:yahi ke Mai tumse Baat karraha hun... Aur Tum ho ke... Hmmm. Hnnn..kiye jarahi ho...
Z:Kya huwa hai Asfi...Mai sunrahi hun... Ap kahain... Said looking in his eyes
A:smile... Mai ye sonchraha tha ke hum log Kahan jaayen honeymoon pe
Z:honeymoon pe??
Nahi Asfi Abhi tou Hospital ka Bahut sa Kaam baqi hai... Next month inspection bhi tou hai na.. Tou hum Kaise........
No doubt he loves her for how she is... But he felt more happy as how she always manage to put him,his family and his work in of her top priorities...He knows now his family is also hers but although she puts others happiness first than herself and that is He loves about her most and sometimes concerned because of her this habit.
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Z:...Kya huwa Asfi.. Kya sonch rahen hain ???
A:Yahi ke Koi itna selfless kaisa hosakta hai...Tum hamesha dusron ki khushi unki zarooratoun ko Khud se Pehle Kaise rakhti ho...
Zubia again rest her head on his chest
Z:Kyun ke mujhe usse Khushi Aur ek alag hi sukoon milta...
Ap ko pata hai Asfi jab ammi mere samne thi Aur Mai unki Koi help nahi karsaki...Tabhi Maine faisla karliya tha ke Mai ammi ki khwaish ko pura karungi Aur Dusron ki madad karungi...
Asfand listened her carefully and tighten the grip on her just to make her calm and to realize her that now she is not alone...He is always there for her.
A:Pata hai zubia Daniyal bhai ki nature bhi aisi thi...Woh hamesha dusron ki madad karte Bina kisi qoouf ke,ke Iska Anjam Kya hoga...
Jab Tum mere office aayi thi khajista ki Baat lekar... Mujhe ek min Aisa laga ke Daniyal bhai ho...
Mai Isiliye tumhe khajista ki madad karne se rokta tha ke kahin tumhe b kahin Kuchhh...
He suddenly stop as the word hit hard to say...Zubia just see him that how his face color get changed..
Z:Asfii... Rub his hand
A:Tum jab hospital me thi... Tumhe uss halat me dekh ke Aisa lagra raha tha ke Agar tum bhi Daniyal bhai ki tarha mujhe chod ke Chali gayi tou Kya hoga...
Tumhe khone ke qayal se Mai har pal marr raha tha...Ab kisi Apne ko khone ki himmat nahi hai mujhme...
He get teary eyes and she see him
Z:Asfi idhar dekhen... Kuch nahi hoga na mujhe na Apko Aur nahi kisi Aur ko... Hum sab sath hain....Mai Apke sath hun and I am sorry Apko itna pareshaan karne keliye...l Promise ke Mai hamesha Apke sath rahungi Apke pass Bilkul aise....
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She hugged him very tight...to erase his all tensions
After sometime...
A:Lekin...Hum hamesha tou aise nahi rehsakte na...
He signal to towards their position.. And laugh..
Z:Asfi Ap bhi na...Jayain mujhe Neend aarahi hai...
Said breaking the hug... And adjusted herself in the comforter...
He smile on her reaction... And off the lights..
A:Theek hai...Mujhe bhi Neend aarahi hai.
He came towards her side and back hugged her
A:good night... Mrs.Asfandyar
Z:good night 😊
Now this is the home.sleeping in each other arms where there heart are St easy with full of love,adoration and happiness. Now they never had a good sleep when on of them had a night shift..
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I'm little busy with my Job, but I will try to update on time.
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