《birthday present | bakudeku》a/n
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i need your opinion about my story, i want to improve so criticism will be highly appreciated! and also advices too!!!
i've thought of creating a sequel and idk if i should go through with it, it'll take a long time since my hinata harem series is ongoing.
the title is Agape and it'll be a tododeku!
here's the story playlist so y'all have an idea of what's gonna happen, i'm happy to see the theories y'all will come up with!
https://youtube.com/playlist?list=PL6ccJcaec92710gsUEIYc2cT6KiAId2-B
https://open.spotify.com/playlist/47F9d2d5dmZ2olbzuwnk2O?si=msNGCOlRR6u6dn0ndUUYUg&utm_source=copy-link
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Yes?
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Grandpa Sweet Fist
Sweet Fist was a joke. He has no superpowers. He was merely a guy with some martial arts who dress up in a costume with a candy theme. He said stupid things like 'Sweet Dreams' and 'Choco Punch' when fighting and was an embrassment to the supervillain community. He has just been released after spending twenty years in prison. Now he got a System, and the System informed the villain that he had many kids and even some grandchildren. The System want the villain to reunite with his family. Failure means death. Only one problem; Sweet Fist never knew he had kids. How was a bad guy supposed to reunite with a family he never knew existed?
8 492I Reincarnated as an Alien Monster
Kikuchi Yukiko, died at age 24 because of brain cancer. When he reached Heaven, "God" told him about the reincarnation cycle and told him to live a new life in another world. He just went along the flow and accepted, just before he was told that his reincarnation body would be set as random. Hoping not to be a lowly worm in the next world, he spun the Wheel of Life and ended up chosen as a [Monster].
8 113Mytheology
Ernest Coy is a rich young master. He wakes up one morning to a strange sight and an even stranger warning. It was a little angel bearing a heavy message: three months from now, calamity would befall Earth and from the ruins of modern civilization, the old world of myth and legend will rise. With nothing but exorbitant wealth and a cheeky celestial guide by his side, will Nest rise with the times, or is he destined to disappear amidst the tides of ever-churning fate? Open the pages to an apocalyptic story of mythic proportions! Additional Tags: [Apocalypse], [Modern Day]
8 86The Devil's Chosen
Tobias lives the life everyone wants... though that's only on the outside. At home, he faces abuse and awful, unloving parents. That is, until the fateful day when he dies.
8 114Space Dork
What does a man do when he wakes up without memories, beaten viciously, and imprisoned. Practice his new space wizard powers of course, fight other prisoners, piss off the wrong people, and flirt with women who want nothing to do with him. The truth is out there with what is left of his mind.
8 261Tanka's and Haiku's
This book is dedicated to those poetic people around! so feel free to tell me your ideas and it will be featured here!
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