《birthday present | bakudeku》a/n
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i need your opinion about my story, i want to improve so criticism will be highly appreciated! and also advices too!!!
i've thought of creating a sequel and idk if i should go through with it, it'll take a long time since my hinata harem series is ongoing.
the title is Agape and it'll be a tododeku!
here's the story playlist so y'all have an idea of what's gonna happen, i'm happy to see the theories y'all will come up with!
https://youtube.com/playlist?list=PL6ccJcaec92710gsUEIYc2cT6KiAId2-B
https://open.spotify.com/playlist/47F9d2d5dmZ2olbzuwnk2O?si=msNGCOlRR6u6dn0ndUUYUg&utm_source=copy-link
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