《If It Was Caleb--Divergent alternative ending》Tris' P.O.V.
Advertisement
I walk towards the apartments with my head down. People keep staring at me. I keep staring at myself. Should I even do this? I start to turn back,but continue down the hall. I reach the door and knock. My hand holds my elbow awkwardly as I stare at the ground. The door opens and I look up. "Come on in." I start to walk in. We all sit in a circle and begin. Shit. I forgot to wear layers. Damn it. I'll survive. People look at me so I start. "Uriah,Candor or Dauntless?" I ask hesitantly. "Dauntless" he replies. "Go to the pit and kick the first person you see,in the gut." He nods and walks out. Sadly,the first person he sees is Eric. Uriah tries to close the door before Eric can get in,but he gets in successfully. "What the hell?" He asks and grabs Uriah's collar. "Just a dare man" Uriah says. He sounds terrified. Eric starts to punch and knee him. I stand up and walk over. "Leave him alone" I say and look up. He is almost a foot taller than me. "What are you gonna do. Scarface." Tobias starts to stand up. My eyes narrow and I kick him in the balls. He drops Uriah and falls to the ground where I repeatedly kick his gut. My leg pulls back and I kick his temple. He's knocked out cold. I grab his sleeve and drag him out of the room. The door slams and I sit back down. "Remind me never to get on your bad side" Zeke says and we laugh. "How did you do that? He is double your size." Uriah says and I smile. "He pisses me off." I say and laugh. "Four, Candor or Dauntless?" I ask. "Candor." He says. "Do you have a tattoo?" Uriah asks and Tobias nods. "Where?" "That's another question." Tobias smiles.
Advertisement
"Zeke,Candor or Dauntless?" Zeke pretends to think. "Candor" he says firmly. "Kiss,Marry,Kill with Christina,Tris,and I." He shakes his head. "You would kill me if I killed or married Tris so kiss her. You're already married so kill you and marry Christina." He smiles, satisfied with his answer. "Christina?" He asks. "Dauntless." She replies. "I dare you to go without makeup tomorrow" she shakes her head and removes her shirt to reveal a tank top. "Uriah, Candor or Dauntless?" "Candor." We all gasp. "Give up dauntless cake or live with Zeke forever?" She asks. "Live with Zeke. We can get a big enough apartment." He's smart. "Tris,Candor or Dauntles?" I thought he would ask Tobias more questions. "Dauntless." "Tell us your biggest fears." I shake my head and remove my shirt. Zeke and Uriah's eyes widen and they gasp at the scars. "I forgot to put on layers" I say and look down. Pity fills there eyes. They think I'm a kicked puppy. I'm not.
"Candor or Dauntless Christina?"I ask. "Dauntless." She says proudly. "Tell me what was going through your mind when you found me." I say and she looks down. "I thought I lost you. I thought of how you didn't deserve it. How it wasn't fair." A tear slips down her cheek. "Wait. What happened?" Asks Zeke and Tobias looks at him with pure anger. I place my hand on his and he calms down. "I was sleeping and someone took me to a room in Candor headquarters. They drugged four so he couldn't move. Someone repeatedly whipped me until they found me and killed him." Tears fall down my scars. "Who did it?" He asks and I look at tobias. "Doesn't matter he's dead." I say and look down. "We should probably get going" Tobias says and we all nod. I can't believe initiation is in a few days. Wow.
Advertisement
🐢🐢🐢🐢
Add suggestions in the comments.
Advertisement
The Last Science
[This story is on a temporary hiatus due to the ongoing COVID-19 pandemic. I work in healthcare and unfortunately no longer have the freetime to continue posting on a regular basis. As soon as our workload decreases, I will return. Thanks for reading! 💙] No one ever knows the whole story. Nestled deep in the forests of the Pacific Northwest, something is emerging. Kept in absolute secrecy, it seeps into a fading town, quietly shared from person to person. For Alden Bensen, a directionless high school graduate, this discovery could mean an escape from his empty existence. To Rachel DuValle, perpetually underestimated and dismissed by the world, magic represents a chance to become something much greater than herself. In the face of an unsuspecting world, their decisions shape the growth of a budding society discovering untold power. This potent force offers anyone the power to change humanity forever—or send it cascading into swift and total annihilation. Want this story in smaller bites? Click here! The Last Science is an ongoing science-fiction / low-fantasy web novel series, focused on the modern world with a twist. New societies bud and grow, but the people who make them up are imperfect and flawed. The story includes elements of mystery, action, crime, interpersonal drama, relationships, philosophy, sociology, politics, and much more, all centered on the perspective characters driving the tale. Each chapter is pretty long (average ~8000 words), so find somewhere comfy to read. Content Warning (by request): This series delves into some topics and situations which may be upsetting for some readers. In American rating parlance, the narrative would be rated PG-13 (except for language), but some have noted the story can get pretty dark on occasion. Please use your best judgment, and don't be afraid to take breaks and come back later. I'll still be here! This story will also be published weekly at my website (https://etzo.li). There will be no differences in content, but slight differences in formatting. Feel free to read at whichever site or app you prefer. If you're enjoying the story, consider dropping me a vote over on Top Web Fiction, or come say hi on Discord. Thanks! Need more to read? Check out my other story, Epilogue — a post-fantasy psychodrama. Now complete! This story is a participant in the Write til the End pledge. It will be completed, no matter the cost.
8 204The Adventures of Rich Burton, Knight
This tale is an offshoot of my Misplaced Dungeon story. Rich Burton is Mary Silvestre’s agent on the heavily polluted world of Tarifax. The self styled New Gods had been entrusted with five worlds by three of the more adventurous minded Greater Gods. There had originally been five worlds, maybe not the most verdant or prosperous of worlds, but they had been perfectly adequate. Now only three remained and all three were suffering under the mismanagement of the New Gods. The Gods War, long prophesised had started on Parthia and the local single planet gods there had had some striking successes. Mary Silvestre one of the dungeons seeded by Azurea at the behest of the New Gods had Allied with Ocidon the local god of the seas and managed to ascend to demi-godhood. Now she has managed to gain access to Tarifax and they are in the process of expanding their power over other worlds. And the Gods War has come to Tarifax with them. Rich Burton, knight of the consort is Mary’s agent on Tarifax. She has given him a body both strong and hard to damage, skills equipment and money. Lots of money.
8 167Rise of the Immortals
A broken man loses his last thread of faith in humanity in a world filled with bloodshed. As he breathes his last, he curses the living before he dies. And with this, the first Immortal was born. Author's Note; Cover art not owned by me, credit goes to whoever owns it! (Whenever I put it in) This is my first fiction-- feel free to criticize any flaws that you see in my work! I'll try to post whenever I can, which is relatively frequent. Enjoy!
8 261A Dessert of Dreams
When she was a child, Choice experienced what she considered to be true freedom but now that she has grown up, there are a lot of rules and responsibilities she has to submit to. She despises hiding her dreams, desires and personality. She is one of the children of the King so why can't she sit on the throne. See Choice as she meets different people and species on her journey to reach the top. But can she achieve her dream? Can she change the mind of a nation and ascend where no one wants her to go? What will Choice do to reach the top? Just remember Choice is not always a good person. This novel has lgbt+ characters. and feminist themes. There are no sex scenes in this novel but there are many innuendoes and references to sex. Written for NaNoWriMo 2018.
8 154Discordant Sonata
This is an enemies AU fanfiction where Chat has always worked with Hawkmoth from the beginning~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~THIS STORY IS MEANT FOR READERS AGES 13 AND UP. THERE MAY BE SOME HUMOR OR SITUATIONS THAT MIGHT BE CONSIDERED INAPPROPRIATE FOR YOUNG READERS. READ AT YOUR OWN DISCRETION ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~For translations, visit http://edendaphne.tumblr.com/masterlist
8 179Edward and His Bully Troubles
hi. i'm edward. i know, dorky name-but i like it. i have two older brothers that make my life hell. i endure wedgies, wet willies, swirlies, etc by not only them, but also my main bully at school: eli. read to find out how i live my life :)i'm trying to update as much as i can! please vote and share this story! thanks :)
8 168