Guys pls pls....give response.....I m writing for the first tym and I need suggestions..so pls comment...today m posting the first chapter..pls support me...I m sure u won't regret

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I was sitting in the college canteen with my friends when I saw a new face in the canteen so me and my friends decided to make him feel comfortable here.....so we called him and made him Sit beside us...we told him about the college ....."ohh m so sorry I forget to introduce my self and my friends.....so m Nandini Murthy.....and this is my bestest friend alya.... although we r very different from each other but we are bestie....and this is Navya my one of the best frnd.....this is dhruv and this is abhimanyu" ..... "aryaman"....he introduced himself and we all shared a handshake with him......"hey u r new in this college in the mid term how???" I asked him .........and I was left with shock when he showed me the person I wanted to stay miles away from....."not only me there r 2 more boys new"....and he indicated his finger towards two guys and I was shocked.....it was manik....the only person I hated the most....I took my bag and left from the canteen......thank God that jerk didn't noticed me.......I was standing near the window....when alya came wid all my other friends including aryaman..."forget him nandini..jst drag him out of your life and throw him away....kitne din aise darogi usse"alya said putting her palm on my shoulder.......", but guys aisa hua kya tha that nandini u panicked so much and left the canteen...."said aryaman with a confused look.....it was the most baddest day of my life....I started my flashback

*FLASHBACK*

(Imagine him in a school uniform and without headphones)

We were in the 10th std ....when we got to know that there was a new boy in the school....every girl was dieing for him.....they crowded around him...we managed to get at start of the crowd.....and no doubt the boy was very good looking.......alya fell for him at that very moment...but I didn't liked him that much......but surprisingly in the whole crowd he was jst looking at me.... even without a blink....so I moved back and after that I didn't noticed him that much..but soon as i reached home and checked my phone and OMG!! it was the guy who was hell famous in our school....he messaged me his name was manik....I was surprised and shocked at the same tym...I messaged him back wid a Hi and my introduction.....after talking to him.... I got to know that he was a super flirt boy...but he was sweet at the same tym.....we used to talk almost everyday...but Shockingly he never talked to me in the school.....now slowly I had started getting feelings for him ......days passed.....our boards exams where coming....when suddenly I got to know that manik had blocked me.....I was a lil shocked.....but I thought I'll ask him the next day in school .....next day when I went to the school and asked him......his answer gave me a heart attack......I was hell shocked ..tears were streaming out of my eyes....

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