《The Ultimate Guide To Writing PJO Fanfics》Review for Felicity Tris
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Name: Felicity Tristis
Gender: Female
Ethnicity: White with some British
Godly parent: Anima (Psyche)
Species: Demigod Weapon: She prefers daggers. But when she gets older she can use a M1 garand
Age: 13-16
Name of friends: Kymopoleia quibler,Hypnos quibler,Cretes Quibler, Selene Quibler, and Parker Jones
Relations: Two dead siblings (she doesn't know that though). The person who trained her (can't remember his name) and raised her. And her (not related by blood) brother named ParkerPersonality: She's kind and smart. But will do anything for her camp (Jupiter). She'll give up her own life just to save someone she doesn't know. Everyone thinks of her as a girl who has a perfect life. She hides her pain to herself so she won't burden the others at camp. She doesn't really so emotions, besides happiness. But when she's alone the only emotion is sadness
Good traits: She's sometimes forgiving and will do anything to make someone day better than hers.Flaws: She can hold a Grudge easily, gets really afraid when any emotion besides Happiness shows, and lies way to much. She also has a curse that no one can break. (Spoiler. She doesn't break it)
Fatal Flaw: i don't know if this counts as one. But she'll listen to anyone. It's hard for her to disobey and say no. And it ends up with people using her.
Backstory: She can't remember anything past her seventh birthday. All she remembers is when her parental figure took her in and trained her. When she was 12 her parent figure was murdered right in front of her. Due to blood loss, she couldn't see who did it. But by the time someone found them. All traces led to herA year later she met her supposedly mother who offered to give Felicity's parent like figure back. The person was messing with her head. And by the time her friends noticed the sudden change in her. She was already insane. She later killed two of her friends and then made her other friend kill her.
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Hair color: Blonde with black roots
Eye color: Honey brown
Height: Average for their age
Love interest: None
Other: The curse is like something that only targets people that are not supposed to exist.
Also her timeline is different from the canon one. It starts in 1976 in believe!
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