《The Ultimate Guide To Writing PJO Fanfics》OC Review
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Name: Chase Miller
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Gay
Ethnicity: Caucasian
Godly parent: Iris
Species: demigod
Weapon: dagger
Age: 16
Name of friends(im not describing them)
-Zoe jackson
-Alex Brynt
-Luke Jackson(SO)
-Lynn Ishida
-Fiona Yoo
- Malorie Shaling
- Mark Ali
Relations: well iris cabin and arent they all related technically
Personality: Optomistic, an Introverted Extrovert, a little bit goofy
Good Traits: Sweet, Caring, Motherly in sort of a way
Flaws: Blunt, Cant trust easily, overthinks
Fatal Flaw: Paranoia
Backstory: he had a good childhood from his father but while going to school when 14 he had a boyfriend. At first it was healthy but then Boyfriend started becoming toxic. They eventually broke up but still affects his relationships with other people, he isnt as trustful as he used to be with before and that caused him to be anxious and overthinking a lot.
Hair color: his main hair color is pastel purple(dyed), put loves dying his tips random pastel colors)
Eyes: Sapphire Blue
Blue eyes are typical, but the eye color needs to be SOMETHING. Pretty nice, good job!
Height: Slightly shorter than average 16 year old boys
Love interest: Luke Jackson
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Dungeon Core Chat Room.
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Luv A Thug (Key Glock)
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