《The Ultimate Guide To Writing PJO Fanfics》Review for Chris Cole
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(I made a little aesthetic for the Chris because I had time on my hands, and he's quite an interesting character. Before, it focused too much on war, and violence. More Ares than Chris. So I changed it up a little, and gave it more of a "never give up" type of vibe.I rushed in blindly, using Ares colors instead of colors for the character. Sorry! But thank you for entering your OC!)
Name: Chris Cole
Gender: Male
Ethnicity: Caucasian (That's how you define a european, right?)
Godly Parent: Ares
Species: Demigod
Weapon: Guns and explosives of various kind
Age: 15 (start of the story), 18 (ending)
Names of Friends: Jason Grace, Piper Mclean, Zenia Malik (most notable)
Relations: Claire Cole (twin sister), Zenia Malik (kinda 'honorary' sister)
Personality: hot-headed and bad-tempered, as the story progresses he shows a more carefree and sarcastic side.
Good traits: perseverance and desire to help others
Flaws: Stubborn, refuses to admit of being wrong, literally doesn't care about his own life.
Fatal flaw: Lack of trust. Always wants to take care of things himself, and things he always has to protect people (especially his sister)
Backstory: He used to live in a happy house with his mother and sister, until all his family gets killed and he gets seriously injured (to the point the attackers leave him for dead). From that day, he spends every single minute of his life training (sometimes even forgoing sleep) until the day he can get revenge; many years later he discovers 1: his godly heritage and peculiar powers; 2: his sister was actually alive and brainwashed to side with the bad guys. For spoilery reasons (*cough* gods *cough*) she reaquires her past memories, and flees with her brother. Now he needs to come to terms with both of these things, realizing his full potential as a demigod and keeping her sister safe from revenge.
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Hair color: brown
Eye color: Eterochromatic: right eye green, left one brown
Height: 6 ft 2 in
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Love interest: none
Extra: Only demigod alive, along with his sister, able to use guns reliably, a power given by Ares himself. Complete noob with any "classic" weapon.
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