《The Ultimate Guide To Writing PJO Fanfics》OC reviews {CURRENTLY CLOSED FOR CATCH UP}
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My Boss Is So Arrogant
"Marry me!!"
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Bright Night Online
Left in the wilderness, a baby boy is found by a special type of beast, the shadow wolf. He quickly grew, learned their way of life to became accepted by the entire pack, and gained the name White Shadow. This way of life continued, until a strange creature appeared. Calling itself """"Sherman"""", the boy learned of the outside world and humans, and persuaded by his wolf mother to experience life with his own kind, left to civilization. Though White was a little bit different from living with shadow wolves, he was quickly introduced to a new virtual reality game by Sherman, who was one of those responsible for creating the game. How will White Shadow fare in the game, and will he become the wolf that he has always believed he has been? --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------I am new to writing and i would like people to tell me if they like my story or what i could improve so i can become better at it. Credits to : Leafyeyes417 For the synopsis.Warning : Mature content contains sexual and violent descriptions and will contain lots of blood and gore. 18+ reccomended :3
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White Mage in Another World [Redux]
"You may think of healing as a blessing, but not all would agree. What would it take to make it a curse?" A fantasy adventure taking place in world where the power to heal is held only by those born with it, however all those who have this ability are cursed. Entering into this world is a visitor brought by forces she doesn't understand for reason she will never know. However, she learns that she also has the ability to heal. But is it the same as the rest? She is not afflicted by the curse, yet she seems afflicted by some other illness. Follow Andromeda as she discovers this new world and explores its dark secrets. Watch as she learns to master the forces some considered impossible, and witness as she becomes not a hero, but a healer. One might say, A White Mage in Another World.
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I Hate You Master
A man, relentlessly pressed into training since a young age to be an elite mage, is forced to face the cruel reality that he just does not have what it takes to achieve that goal. After being thrown out by his father, the arch mage, he turns to the one option left. He becomes a demi-human tamer and sets out to gather resources to continue his studies.Also, he's a cold and calculating jerk who sees those Demi-Humans as simple trained animals, as is the custom in that part of the world. Enjoy!Mature Content Warning: This story features the purchase and sale of cute girls, and the use of said girls as gladiators for spectators. Concepts such as sexual enslavement and general disinterest in civil rights abound.
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The Systems of the Multiverse - A Guide for the Multiversal Traveler
The Systems of the Multiverse have their issues. I, an observer from outside the multiverse have made it into my mission to tell you, the multiversal traveler about those issues and dangers. This is a relatively low effort NaNoWriMo and Writhathon project. I want to test myself if I can manage 55k words in a month, likely updating every single day until the end. This story is told in the form of an in universe book. Well, I say story... While this definetly won't be great, I still hope it will be enjoyable. I do my best to avoid grammar mistakes and spelling issues, but won't promise anything. Corrections are welcome, this is also an excercise to improve my writing from a technical standpoint. Not from a worldbuilding and character standpoint however, for that you need time. Oh, the keyboards (and computers) that the observer destroys are not real and only exists in story to have an excuse to easily end this story at the end of NaNoWriMo. I also personally like reading LitRPG stories, so this isn't meant to hate them. It might come over that way, but many of those issues are simply fun to think about: what would really happen if the world is so, seen through a lease of negativity :-) [participant in the Royal Road Writathon challenge]
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Haruhi's Cousin (Hikaru and Kaoru x f!Reader)
(Reader is described as female and uses she/her pronouns and Japanese (being haruhi's cousin), sorry if this doesn't fit your description.)Haruhi has a wealthy cousin that the hosts never knew. well, she never told them anyway. until one day, she decided to visit Haruhi and the boys, and of course. the Twins met her.-started 5th of March 2017--I do not own any of the characters inside this book-- 2021 edited-- 2022 revisited and authors note -
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