《Love You Forever》lil devhita ( part 1 )
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characters ..
dev - 5 years
anahita - 5 years
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In bharat nagar ..
a boy was sitting near tree.. when a girl comes near him..
girl - hii
he ignores her ..
girl - hii
he again ignores ..
girl - hiii
boy - kya hai??
girl - kuch nai *smiles*
boy - toh kyu irritate kar rahi ho?
girl - mein irritate nai friendship karne aye hu *smiles*
boy - kisse ?
girl - tumse...
boy - mujhe nai karni...
girl - kyu ?
boy - aise hi
girl - pal mujhe karni hai na..
boy - toh mein kyu karu??
girl - tum mujhse friendship kyu nai karna chate ??
boy - kyuki sab friendship karke .. fir tode ke chale jate hai .. *sadly*
girl - tu tension mat lo mein friendship nai tolungi..
boy - mujhe nai karna ..
girl - i promise mein nai tolungi .. plzz
boy - nai kaha naa !! mujhe tumse nai karna tumse friendship!! *angrily*
she gets scared .. and her eyes become teary .. she starts crying ..
boy - arre .. arre roo mat plzz
she didn't stops crying..
boy - arre plzz roo mat plzz na ..
she didn't listen to him.. and cry more loudly...
boy - arre .. theek hai theek hai ... mein friendship karne ke liye tayar hu bas .. ab shant ho jao plz...
she wipes her tears and smiles ... and hugs his...
girl - thank you *happily*
*breaks hug*
boy - thank you?? dekho friendship mein no sorry no thank you ok?? *smiles*
girl - ok.. friends ? *smiles*
she forwards hand .. he farwards too ..and shakes..
boy - friends *smiles*
girl - mela naam anahita hai *smiles*
boy - mera naam dev hai *smiles*
girl - wow nice name...
boy - tumhara naam bhi acha hai
both smiles
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how was the chappy ???
how were lil debanya scenes ?? and yeah lil debanya means when they were child.. so this is lil debanya's life part....
comment down your views...
do listen the new song of anahita bhooshan ... 🥰
words - 340
precap - lil debanya cute scenes ..
target - 15 comment's + 10 votes ..
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