《LET ME IN (ENHYPEN FF)》6~ into the iland
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Time soon flew by and it was finally the day of the first airing of the show. I zipped up my suitcase and put on my coat before heading out my apartment door. I took a taxi to the BigHit building and watched as the cars zoomed passed.
Today's the day.
I'm going to compete to become an idol.
I wonder what people back home will think?
Will they care?
What if I make a fool of myself on the show?
My thoughts were soon disrupted when the taxi halted at the building.
"Thank you" I bowed politely as I handed some change to the driver.
I exited the taxi and stood outside the building feeling intimidated as ever. The thought of spending the next 3 months isolated from the outside world gave me goose bumps.
Pulling myself together, I made my way into the building.
•••
"Okay girls, gather round," announced the lady in black,
"You probably remember me from the audition, my name is Cha Goreum. I am the managing director of BELIFT LAB."
"As you all already know, today is the first airing of the show I-LAND Season 2."
Everyone clapped at the announcement.
"Please make your way into the allocated buses as we will soon be making our journey to the I-LAND."
Squeals and giggles filled the room as the girls began cheering with their friends.
"Soojin! Are you excited?" sang Chohee as she gripped my shoulders tightly.
I nodded in elation as I beamed a smile back to her.
"I'm kind of nervous though," I pouted,
"I can't help but feel I'm not ready enough."
"Aw Soojin," cooed Chohee,
"You'll be fine. I can guarantee you will have tons of fans within the first episode of the show."
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I chuckled at her unrealistic comment then looked up as a man in black entered the room.
"Collect your bags girls, and please follow me to your buses."
•••
The bus ride was long and bumpy but luckily I had my favourite artist Sam Kim, to help me get through it.
I rested my head on the window as I closed my eyes and let the soothing music exit my air pods and enter my ears.
('Seattle' by Sam Kim)
Can I run and hide
I'm stuck inside
My memories
Step away from time
Take me to a place
Where I will never grow old
I'm tired everyday
I'm thirsty for the rain
That waters all of my
Melodies
The needle in the sky
Never fails to light
My night
And it sews my heart
On my tattered sleeve
I watched as the trees flew past like splatters of paint on a canvas. I soon became consumed by the heaviness of my eyelids and drifted into sleep.
•••
"ALRIGHT LADIES PLEASE MAKE YOUR WAY OUT OF THE BUS."
I jolted out of slumber as I slammed my head against the window.
Ouch
I gathered my belongings and made my way outside of the bus.
As I stepped outside, I was greeted with the sweet scent of nature as I gawked at the sight of the most enchanting forest I've seen.
"Okay girls, this will be the first segment of the show," announced Goreum.
"You will need to get into groups of two to four and together you will enter the forest until you reach a large building where you will then enter and gather inside."
Everyone began eyeing their group members and whispering about entering the forest.
I locked eyes with Chohee and we both silently nodded indicating our mutual agreement of being partners.
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"During this time, you will be monitored by the hosts of the show. This will be your first appearance so try to be as expressive as you can. Good luck girls, and welcome to the I-LAND.
•••
The girls lined up in their groups as the media crew began prepping their equipment for the filming of the scene.
"Okay quick first group go!" Goreum shout-whispered as she held onto the walkie-talkie looking device.
The three girls at the beginning of the line squealed before cautiously making their way into the forest.
Soon one by one groups began entering the forest then disappearing into the green. Eventually it was mine and Chohee's turn as one of the crew members signalled us to enter.
We looked at each other with nervous eyes as we took our first step onto the dirt. As if the dirt was some sort of trigger Chohee yelped and held my hand with a tight grip.
We giggled quietly as we proceeded to advance into the forest hand in hand.
•••
"Okay, the next two applicants are now approaching the I-LAND!" announced Host Chungha.
"So here we have Kim Chohee and Park Soojin!"
The hosts clapped excitedly.
"Wow guys I don't know if you guys are seeing what I'm seeing but I think we have found a very outstanding applicant." spoke Host Sunmi.
"You sure are right Sunmi. It looks like one of these applicants has only trained for 5 days!" Chu exclaimed.
"Yes Chu. It is 16 year old, Korean-Australian Park Soojin!"
The screen panned to Soojin as she unveiled herself from the forest leaves. Her luscious hair perfectly cascaded over her face as she reached to run her hands though it. The natural light of the sun reflected straight off her large brown pupils, making her seem as if she was glowing.
The hosts looked at each other in shock.
"Oh my. I don't think I've seen someone as beautiful." gasped Chungha cupping her mouth.
"How can someone be so pretty?" gawked Chu with her mouth open like a fish.
The hosts watched in awe as the screen continued to display breath-taking scenes of Soojin and Chohee entering the I-LAND.
"I can't agree with you guys more. But lets see if her skills as an idol will live up to her undeniable visuals." spoke Sunmi as the scene ended and the next group of girls entered.
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8 418Sword System Academia
2/17 NOTICE: I'm putting this on hiatus, possibly permanently. I didn't want to spam with an "update chapter", so hopefully here and in the story blurb will get enough eyeballs. There are a couple reasons for ending SSA for now. 1) I wrote the next chapter but wasn't happy with it. I've been less and less satisfied with SSA's quality the more I thought about it. Part of the reason is... 2) I am seriously thinking about trying to publish some novels to help pay the bills, since I don't have my other source of income anymore. I have never asked for anything from SSA readers, no money, not even a review or rating. SSA is written for fun to amuse myself, primarily, and I would kind of feel bad actually charging someone money for something as unserious as that. I don't think it is good enough to ask anything in return. To use an analogy from music, SSA is more like a jam session with a bunch of friends. You're just chiling and having fun playing some music. I mean, if you are Mozart or even Eminem, your jam session is good enough to sell, but for an amateur beginner like myself, haha, no. If I want to publish something, I feel like I need to go the proper route of practice and rehearsals, which might be more similar to a classical concert performance. With SSA, I work from worldbuilding notes and a loose outline, but what you are essentially getting is the first draft with lots of so-called pantsing. Pushing out a web novel like this also means it is very difficult to go back and improve things without breaking everything else downstream. I wanted to try this "jamming" approach, as it was a good way to teach me about another aspect of writing, but to move forward, I think I need to hone my "classical" techniques, which emphasize rewriting, or at least, revising outlines. 3) While I intend to try to make $$$, my actual current goal is to "get gud". I've spent a lot of time recently trying to understand the self-publishing industry, and I'm pretty sure I can make some money by using short-term strategies with my current amateur skill level. But I've seen too many authors come and go/burnout, and really, the only way that I think I can enjoy writing and still make money on a long-term basis is to become a better writer. And the next step for me, which I haven't done much before, is to spend more time on rewriting and outlines. That is pretty much antithetical to the way SSA is developing. I've always been kind of 20/80 plotting/pantsing, but I want to spend a lot more time outlining before I even start writing. SSA jam sessions don't really fit my goal anymore. If you're curious about what's next, read on... Among other regrets, I regret not finishing SSA. It's the first story I've dropped, but then again, it's the first web novel I've attempted, so I suppose that's not a surprise. I don't think traditional web novel formats suit me that well. The whole SSA story I had loosely planned (beyond a first book or major arc) is way too large as well. Big story = good for neverending webnovel with Patreons, bad for penniless and fickle writer like me. I am currently outlining a complete trilogy to another story in great detail. I want the story to end concisely, and I also want the chance to really spend a lot of time on the full outline to spot pacing problems, character issues, lost themes, and so on. I'll still share this story on RR. What I intend to do is finish book 1, flash-publish the whole thing here for a few weeks, then publish on the big Zon. Repeat for books 2 and 3. The upcoming story will be about crafting heroes. The backdrop is an isekai-like setting, where elves will summon humans to their world as heroes, but the whole hero crafting business is still in its infancy. The elven mage researchers are figuring out how to imbue heroes with power, while the heroes are trying to figure out how to use the powers that they gain. Humans are the best hero templates because they are blank and have no intrinsic magic. Or at least that what the elves thought. The human MC has his own secrets... There will be some similarities with litrpgs, but I would call it more a progression fantasy or gamelit story. For example, the stats are very low, at least initially. Say we have a stat called Str. Going from Str = 1 to Str = 2 is a huge deal. Also, going from Dex = 0 to Dex = 1 is an even bigger deal. I guess you could call it a "low-stat litrpg", haha. Also, the heroes won't be gaining stats simply by killing things or leveling up. You can't increase stats arbitrarily, either. There will be rules to how stats can increase, and how they work with each other. The elven mages will be figuring out these rules in order to craft stronger and stronger heroes. Some inspiration will be from cultivation magic systems, but there won't be overt cultivation, at least for now. A theme I really want to explore is the idea of interactions. That includes things like hero crafter vs hero, tactics vs strategy, skill synergies, racial interactions (dwarves, elves, etc), and son. Yeah, so hero crafting. I'm super excited about this project and venturing into publishing. If you want to check out the upcoming story, you can follow my RR author profile to see when it drops here. Finally... THANK YOU TO EVERYONE! I'm very sorry that SSA is stopping, but I hope at least some of you will find the next story at least as enjoyable, if not more. Thanks to all the readers who gave SSA a shot. Big hug or solid fistbump to all of you, whichever you prefer! I hope this message is not a downer but an upper, because I am psyched!! -purlcray -------------- BLURB: Talen, youngest Master of the Koroi, makes his way to the Empire's capital to salvage his clan's fate. But the bustling city has few opportunities for the traditionalist. For the old sword clans are fading. With the rise of alchemy, gold can purchase strength that ordinarily took years of training to cultivate. Sword artists, once rare and accomplished, are quickly growing in number, especially among the wealthy noble class. Even with such alchemy, though, no one has advanced to the rank of Grandmaster in countless years. Talen's true dream is to walk the path of a sword artist to the very end while fulfilling his clan duties. And then the Swordgeists return, fabled founders of all sword arts, gods who had touched the world long ago and vanished. These myths turned into reality warn of a coming threat. Alongside this warning, they issue an invitation to the Sword System Academy, a path to power beyond the mortal realm. But first, they will hold an entrance exam... Story notes:Sword System Academia blends elements of western and asian fantasy such as xianxia and litrpg. I took parts from different genres I enjoyed and twisted them into my own creation. There will be an explicit system, both of the litrpg kind and the hard(ish) magic kind, but it is embedded within an academic structure that will develop over the course of the story. This is my attempt to design a unique type of system, the System Academia.
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Aarav V frost, the 2nd young master Is only a master in name, an unfavoured son of the Frost family from the town of Berifall, at the age of 14 he awakens the memory of the past life, where he used to live in a county India and the planet known as Earth, he was a 22 year old College student, while he was on his rooftop he got caught up in some kind of space distortion, after regaining his old memories he was confused but when he gets back to his senses he realises his situation where he is highly despised and bullied by his own family due to his broken meridians and is considered a waste as all these years he had not made any advancement in his cultivation, with the memory of his past life he also acquires something which goes beyond common sense and thus he embarks on the journey to reach at the peak of whatever there is.. [martial arts, wuxia/Xianxia, fantasy] thers more to come, atm keeping it simple to maintain a flow, also i will be using a lot of Indian-Mythology references soon enjoy ;D
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