《Benefits ━━ PETER PARKER》A REWRITE?
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Hey guys,
...so, it's been a hot minute since i touched this book - over a year to be exact. recently i've been reading a lot the comments & it's crazy to me that a book i wrote about four-ish years ago still gets so much attention & how the number of reads, votes & comments continue to sky rocket each time i login.
yes, i am aware that most of the content is extremely questionable & i would like to apologise to anyone who's had the displeasure of reading the work of thirteen-year-old me. i literally made this story on a whim & binge-wrote chapters when i would remember (which wasn't often).
so, after many many dms & not-so-nice comments, i'm considering rewriting this story. i just want to know if there'd be an interest in that at all?
the writing style would be drastically improved & so would the smut (which is what you're all here for anyways). i'd also consider not making this a y/n story - depending what you guys want.
so yeah, i just graduated high school & have nothing really going on. therefore i'd have time to fully flesh this out into something i'm not embarrassed to tell people about.
anyways, if you're interested leave a comment or a vote & i'll keep you updated :)
love always,
karla
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