《قصة 24 ساعة》الساعة 18
Advertisement
اللهم صلِ وسلم على نبينا محمد وعلى آله وصحبه أجمعين
بسم الله نبدأ
خرجت السكين اللي اعطتها زوبعة لياسر و قالت / تحب اطعنك فيها
و خرجت سكين اكبر مليانه دم و اردفت/ ولا تحب اطعنك بهذي
قام ياسر و فتح الباب يبي يهرب
انفتح الباب و قام يركض بأقصى سرعه
شد انتباهه احد الأبواب
كان شكله شبيه بـ باب الخروج حق بيته
تقدم ياسر منه و فتحه على امل انه يوصل لبيته
فتح الباب و جلس براحه يوم شاف انه دخل لبيته
و اخيرا رجع للمكان اللي يبيه
اقتربت منه امه بخوف و قالت و هي تتفحصه/ ياسر حبيبي شفيك كذا مليان جروح و ليش طلعت من دون تعلمني انا و ابوك
ياسر / لا تخافين بس تضاربت
ام ياسر / الله يهديك
اردفت بعد ما نادت ساره اخت ياسر / روحي سوي لاخوك شي ياكله مسكين منهد حيله
ساعدته يقوم من الأرض و وصلته لغرفته و قالت / خذ لك ملابس و روح تروش على ما يخلص الاكل
راحت ام ياسر و بقى ياسر مع أفكاره
يا ترا انتهى كل شي و لا هذي تهيئآت تهيأتها عشان اطمن نفسي؟
كان هذا السؤال يدور في راس ياسر
جاوب على نفسه بإعطائها برهان
'' ياسر انتهى كل شي تطمن الاصوات اختفت و الجن اختفوا و هذا يعني ان كل شي انتهى ''
قام ياسر و تروش و خرج لاهله
جلس ياكل و يسولف معهم بشوق
الشي اللي تمناه تحقق اخيرا
ما يدري انه ما راح يدوم كثير
ارتفعت حرارة ياسر
كان متعب بشكل كبير
مستلقي على كنب الصاله و امه بجانبه تحط له كمادات
غفى لفتره مو طويله
فتح عيونه بنعاس ثم انفتحت اكثر بفجعه
وجه امه تحول للجنيه اللعينه
قام بخوف و جلس ينادي / يبه يبه وينك
خرج ابوه من احد الغرف و قال / انا هنا
و تحول وجهه لوجه شمهروس
طلع ياسر لغرفه ساره و هو يناديها/ ساره وينك
ساره / انا هنا
تحول وجهها لوجه الاعور و زاد هذا الشي رعب ياسر
Advertisement
- In Serial43 Chapters
Alviona (undergoing Rewrite).
This fiction is going to undergo severe Editing and a Rewrite over next few months. Here is what it hopes to accomplish: 1) Fix the glaring issues from Style in every chapter 1-31 (Dialogues, POV switches and Head-hopping too much) 2) Add some new chapters in and justify the development between Sofia and Anita 3) Remove the info dumps and make it more organic 4) Finalize the genres that this fiction belongs to 5) Create warning in the synopsis relating to the contents of the fiction. 6) Overhaul and show what Mira's view on Alviona is (slowly) 7) Introduce new characters 8) Show chapters the way they were intended, as clues apparently were not visible at all! 9) Make Alviona a bit more serious. 10) Make me (Author) enjoy reading my own work more (yes! :)) Hi. I have been gone for quite a long while. With heart surgery and such that has happened two months ago, I had not had a chance to log on RR due to being hospitalized. I had some other issues that the admins were kind enough to deal with on this fiction. It's good to see everything in one piece. The synopsis has been removed. Chapter 1 should be coming out sometimes before christmas. A lot has changed. I hope for the better. Instead of edits, I have re-read every single chapter and found it to be unsatisfying. A lot did not make sense and unless you have previously speculated what Alviona is, many things she does won't fall into pieces. Well then, time to address all of this. Ladies and gentlelmen, this fiction is undergoing a full scale re-write. While the characters and developments stay the same, it's being done differently. So much that the world should feel darker as it should have been. For those who have stuck around and know the story: Awesome. I worked hard on this, and hope that you will like my re-write. For thos that are new: Welcome. Give me some time, as I am super sluggish. I don't know much time is some time, but I gurantee chapter 1 will be up before Christmas. This said, again, thank you and know that I am back. And that this fiction will be completed. AT ANY COST. I will update synopsis after I post chapter 1. I might post Alviona (revised, as this current one is far too.... simplified, watered down, and dissapointing version of it) seperately. Those that want this, here. But I don't want to add chapter 40. It won't make sense without the backup and world-building of re-write. It will piss myself off. Now then, let's write hm? *This beautiful piece of art is provided by Charee from DeviantArt* https://www.deviantart.com/chalii
8 387 - In Serial19 Chapters
The Primordial
With one goal fueling him, he broke through the final barrier, reaching the apex of power and regaining that which was once lost. Trying to find a new beginning, he reforged himself anew as he awoke to memories of a long forgotten past. Memories that intersected with his new reality. His invincible soul now unchained, surprises await him as he begins his new jouney in an unknown land. I'm just writing this for fun, but i'll never drop it. This won't be something short, as I have the very long term in mind, but I'm a total noob to writing, so I most likely won't release chapters very often, at least until I really get the hang of it. But, the chapters will always be several thousand words long. At the minimum 2k, maximum like 6k... Pretty big variations, sorry. If you like it, great. If you don't, that's understandable. Regardless, if you have a read, I'd appreciate feedback for areas you think I should improve on, whether it's the use of some words or how I should write something or WHATEVER. I'm open to anything, good or bad, because with your help, it'll help make this story better. **DISCLAIMER** So you don't waste your time, I want to let you know what you're getting into, because I like knowing ahead of time before I read something. This might appear like a Xianxia novel, but it's not. It only starts that way. This is a western fantasy world and setting that many of you are familiar with. The beginning chapters might be a bit of an info dump. Some of it might seems superfluous, but a lot of information is relevant to the story. The first few chapters might also seem rushed, but I'll try to keep it exclusive to those. This is a cliche, OP MC story with the typical harem, but other than the quick start, everything else will be gradual. There will be romance, and probably many moments at that, but don't expect anything TOO detailed. If you want something really steamy, look elsewhere. References and throwbacks to stuff most likely. The setting won't be really dark or really light. Middleground, I guess. The MC is far from a young kid, but he won't totally reflect his age. I don't plan on discarding info, abilities or characters that you KNOW should come back and be around. I see it a lot and it sort of bugs me haha... but I could have oversights, I dunno. As I said, I'm a noob. That's it, really. If you're interested, welcome to my world!
8 119 - In Serial6 Chapters
Myths, Monsters, and Legends (Fate/Percy Jackson Multicross)
Shirou finds himself in another world, it isn't too far from what he feels is normal. Tall buildings, man-eating supernatural creatures, and people with little moral compunction when no one's watching...
8 160 - In Serial24 Chapters
Manaweaver
A hero candidate that used the rare element lightning magic was betrayed by the those he held dear and the very empire he fought to protect. Given a second chance at life, he must fight to protect those he holds dear and fight to survive another day. He would love to live a peaceful life as he grows to become a stronger but will those of the empire allow it? Thankfully with insight from his past life he has knowledge, experience, and a mage class that puts him above all others. The biggest advantage he has though is his class and the element he has access too for magic. Lightning is a strong element being ranked towards the top but could it be possible he has something even better? And, maybe...just maybe when he is strong enough he will fight to enact some change to the world. How will he achieve this in a world where one wrong look from a noble can mean death for you or your family? When spells and resources are kept by those in power, how will he get stronger? Join him on a journey that will see him traveling the world, meeting different races, and building a class never seen before as heads to the top! (First take on writing something so please be easy on me. I plan on including different elements I feel will make a good story like leveling, stats boxes, spells, reincarnation, betrayal, and so much more. I prefer to do some background building while also balancing character development to deliver a good story so be prepared. I'm planning to write this novel for a long time while also adapting and learning to become better at it. Feedback will be appreciated and if editing is needed I will do my best.) Posting Tuesday, Thursday, Saturday and possibly Sundays. Thanks from ianwest!
8 177 - In Serial12 Chapters
Invincible wizard at Fairy Tail
Allen, a reincarnated person from the modern era to another wizarding world to the world of fairy tail. OP abilties. Just like the other stories that I write. It have abilties very similar but better version than other animes.
8 147 - In Serial153 Chapters
You Make My Pain Fade (Book 1)
2nd Place Winner for 2018 Naruto Wattys in the Yaoi category!!Highest rating: #1 in KakaNaru bitches~(Completed)When Minato defended the Leaf against the Nine tails he was able to spare Kushina and seal the entirety of that beast inside of Naruto. He grew Fox like ears and a tail, a reminder of what was inside of him. One Kushina had to live with. Even though she loved him, she couldn't bear the burden of raising him. She always had Jiraiya, Naruto's God Father, take care of him. When Jiraya started traveling again when Naruto was four, he left him with Kushina. And she eventually became addicted to alcohol and she would beat him every day.When Naruto started the academy he hid his bruises and cuts from everyone, so no one knew he was being beaten. Even now...on graduation day, they are still Clueless.
8 114

