《Ashaangi in My Dreamland》THE PROPOSAL
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Author's Notes: Makkale neenga ellarum ethir parathathu, naanum aasa patathu, vanthuvitathu
THE PROPOSAL
enna da iva munnadiye pottu odachitale pakringala, Proposal mattum taana solli iruken epdi proposal nu sollave illaye. Vaanga poi pakalama epdi taan namba hero propose panraru nu
Vaanga kathaikulla polam
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As it was a tiring day for Shivu, Shivu and her friends once they reached home, dint even change her dress and after having short conversation with Ashwin as we saw before and immediately slept off.
As it was a misty day, sun started to rise very slowly as it was misty day and also a Sunday, So Sun was also feeling lazy to get up soon.
Shivu avaloda bed la irunthu ezhunthu partha, time was 11:00 AM, aana athu ava weekend la enthrikira usual time taan, aana Ashwin enna panraru avarudaya ennangal ennova antha time vanthu avaluku late aana maari kaatuchu. So she want to know avar enna pannitu irukaru nu.
She called him immediately. But he dint respond. She thought he will be sleeping and she went to refresh and her friends made her breakfast and all of them enjoyed the breakfast together.
And it was around 1 PM, she called him back. But he dint pick up this time. But he sent a message like 'He is in his friend's house and will call her later'.
She replied ok, and started to chat with her friends and also she was showing them the pictures of her birthday celeberation which her friends were not part of.
And for lunch they ordered for pizza to treat her friends. And all of them were enjoying the pizza treat and they had a small movie time.
Time was around 4 PM at the evening. Ashwineyy called Shivu
Ashwineyy: Hello Shivaangi ma
Shivu: Ashwineyyy enga irukinga
Ashwineyy: Romba nerama unga veetu vaasal la taan kaal valika ninutu iruken ma
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Shivu: enna Ashwineyy ingaya irukinga, kathava thatti iruka vendiyathu taane, yen wait pannitu irukinga
Ashwineyy: Un kathava kathava thatti en kaye sevanthu pochu , apdi enna taan pannitu irupingalo ulla
Shivu: Aiyoo Sorry Ashwineyyy , romba valikutha, kaiya kattunga
Ashwineyy: Phone la kaata mudiyathu ma, vanthu kathava taara, evlo neram phone laye pesitu irupa kathava tharakama
Shivu: Sorry Ashwineyy , Sorry Ashwineyyy, itho vanthuten
Shivu went and opened the door of the home and there he was standing with a beautiful black shirt and grey pants.
Shivu: Ashwineyy ulla vanga , i am really very sorry , enna sapdringa tea, coffee , boost, horlicks, juice, .....
Ashwin: pothum ma , list perusa poite iruku, konjam kudika thanni kodau athu podhum
Shivu gave Ashwin the water, her friends dint come out of their room so not to disturb them.
Shivu: Saptingala
Ashwin: Naan sapten ma, neenga saptingala, un friends enga
Shivu: ulla taan irukanga, nambala disturb panna vendam nu velila varama irukanga, aama Ashwineyy inaiku neenga free ya illa sonninga , enna paaka vanthutinga
Ashwin: Busy ya taan irunthen, konjam nerathula inga unga veetu pakathula irunthu taan enaku bus athaan apdiye unna pathutu kelambalam nu
Shivu: Oh seri Ashwineyy, appa naan ungaluku dinner ready panni katti taren eduthutu ponga
Ashwin: Athu ellam venam ma, oru help panriya
Shivu: Sollunga Ashwineyy, kandipa seiren,
Ashwin: Naan un birthday ku gift tarala la, intha un birthday gift, intha dress potutu ready ayitu va, bus board panrathuku munnadi oru chinna velai iruku atha mudikanum
Shivu: Bus ku late aydiume pa
Ashwin: Bus 10 mani ku taan nee poi ready ayitu va.
Shivu's outfit or Ashwin's presentation to Shivu
And also he gifted a set of lac bangles
She got ready and came back, and Ashwin was awestruck seeing her beauty and he was not able to take of his eyes from her cute doll
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Shivu: Ashwineyy gift super ah iruku , enaku romba pidichiruku, thank you very much
Ashwin: un thanks ah neeye vechiko , unaku pidichiruku la athu enaku pothum ma, seri va polama
Shivu: enga porom Ashwineyyy
Ashwin: Solren ma, then he booked a cab and both of them boarded the cab.
And after sometime of drive Ashwin tied a cloth around Shivu's eyes
Shivu: en Ashwineyy ippa en kanna kattuna
Ashwin: onnum illama , konjam neram poru neeye therinjipa
Shivu: Oh suprise ah Ashwineyy super super
And after some time they reached a place , avaluku medu pallam , aparam eraichal satham ellam kekuthu aana avaluku entha edam nu theriyala
Then they came near a boat
Ashwin: Ma paathu kaal vechu erangu ma
Shivu: enga Ashwineyy pakrathu neenga taan en kanna katti vechi irukingale
Ashwin: aama la naan unna paathu kutitu poren
He carried her in a bridal style to get in to the boat
Shivu: Ashwineyy enna panringa
Ashwin: onnum illa ma ippa namba safe ah land ayachu
And the boat started and she could realise that they are travelling in a boat.
Shivu: boat la enga porom Ashwineyyy
Ashwin: Solren ma wait pannu
Once they reached the center of the lake, He unfolded her eyes, avaluku romba happy ayiduchu to see the clear skies , stars and the peacefulness in the center of the lake
Shivu: Ashwineyy ithu semaya iruku Ashwineyy (apdi sollite he turned to Ashwin)
Ashwin was in his knees
Ashwin: Miss. Shivaangi Krishnakumar will you become Mrs. Shivaangi Ashwin Kumar
Shivu was awestruck by his unexpected proposal
Thodarum....
(Shivu oda bathil enna adutha chapter la papom)
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